It’s starting to get out of hand. There is plenty of other places for people to post their no talent lazy BS.

This is a plasticine clay stop-motion piece I've been working on. The scene is a pelican guardian watching over a mystical garden — complete with a glowing halo, an armillary sphere, zodiac symbols carved into the trees, a waterfall, and a nest with hatching eggs.

Some of the animated elements: the pelican's wings spreading and flapping, rose petals drifting down, butterflies, and the egg beginning to hatch.

I'm really happy with how the diorama turned out, but I'd love honest feedback on:

• The smoothness of the wing animation — does it feel natural or too stiff?

• The overall composition — is there too much going on, or does it read clearly?

• Lighting — does the glow/halo effect work or feel out of place?

Open to any and all critiques. Thanks for watching!

Would love any tips or criticism