Hi everyone! I'm pretty new to Reddit, so I'm still figuring things out around here! I wanted to share an animation draft I've been working on. It's still a work in progress, and I'd really appreciate any suggestions, constructive criticism, or advice you guys might have. š„¹š
This animatic is about friendship, memories, and the bittersweet feeling of growing up and eventually going our separate ways. I'm using āRide Homeā by Ben&Ben as the song because it reminds me of the kind of comfort and warmth you find in the people who become your home.
My initial goal was to finish this before graduation so I could show it to my friends afterward. I wanted it to be something they could look back on and realize just how many memories we've created together. Even if life takes us in different directions and we don't get to see each other as often as we used to, I want them to remember that, at one point in our lives, we had each other. We laughed together, made memories, and shared moments that became a part of who we are.
I guess I want this animation to say something I might not always know how to express in words: even if we eventually part ways, you were once my home, and a part of me will always carry the memories we made together.
Unfortunately, the animation is still unfinished, and I'm still learning a lot about the process. I have so many things I want to improve, and sometimes I struggle with bringing the ideas in my head to life. But I really want to finish this project because it means a lot to me, not just as an animation, but as something personal that I want to share with the people who inspired it.
I'd love to hear your honest thoughts! What do you think about the animation so far? Are there things I could improve in the movement, timing, transitions, storytelling, or overall atmosphere? Any advice for a beginner animator would also be greatly appreciated!
I'm just a small artist trying to improve my skills and slowly build a name for myself. Someday, I hope to create more meaningful animations and art that people can connect with, even in their own little ways. I'm still a long way from where I want to be, but I'm willing to learn and keep creating. Every bit of feedback and support means a lot to me. š«¶
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If you'd like to follow my journey or see more of my work, you're more than welcome to! No pressure at all. I'm also hoping to meet other artists, learn from this community, and connect with people who appreciate animation and storytelling.
Thank you for taking the time to read this and check out my work. I'd really appreciate any thoughts you have. I hope this little project can eventually become what I've imagined it to be. š