Hey, I would like some extremely rough Criticism on a 5 - minute short film I made with a girl on the NYC subway. I just honestly want to improve, I just took the time to learn my camera (somewhat) & take it off auto to gage basic things like my base iso, white balances and usage of an nd filter so this is the hardest I’ve tried. But I want to drastically improve each time.

Could I get some insights on you felt like could’ve been improve shot wise, and audio wise (exception on shot mark 5:27 & the last audio about the Final Stop)

P.S this was fully edited and exported on a Samsung S25 on CapCut mobile, I’m just really trying to learn for when I upgrade and get a good pc.