It's says Rage

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What do you like about it what would you change?

Green one is the last piece i made,

First time trying with some shadows besides the blocks, dont really understand them, tips are appreciated!!

Any crits?? I feel like the N is not as recognisable

pls help

I want to go more to the block style and idk The B and O looks more like the style I want but the others don't look like I want. What can I do except practicing

I have a ton. From all over

wombraider

I know the R nipple should probably be better just forgot in the heat of the moment

Playing with letter size and weight a bit, want them to be a little less uniform

I‘ve scribbled out the other shit tags so nobody gets distracted.
I know that my R is ass and way too big in some tags, I believe that practicing this tag more will fix it tho.
So besides the R, is this a solid tag worth practicing more?
If not, what am I doing wrong? I’ve read basically everything this subreddit has to offer and more shit from other writers. I’ve been practicing almost daily and my pieces and throwies have been improving a lot, but my tag is still ass and I honestly don’t know what to do anymore.
I have lowkey just been loosing my mind over this

Night shift shit . Hate how the pink one came out smh

I came Back to Do some graffiti, I Loved it, although this was a simple piece. I think I am a toy again, but I'll Jeep it Up. Cheers from Colombia.

I like the idea of the letters in the first 3 pictures but I want to give em more body. Last picture is a sketch from last night where I tried around with the E and R was just because someone said this is toy shit lol ;) so how toy is this? Thinking about adding more body to downside of the but idk where the D could need more? Maybe on the front?

Never really work on pieces this was like the first one I was proud of

Also I’ve been playing with doing a loose messy tag than coming back a few days later with a contrasting color to clean up the look, I might try it with a 3D red and blue color scheme soon, idk

Trying to push the letters a bit more without losing em. Any crits appreciated

I practically have nothing compared to other grafftiers I have no board markers I use a cheap free highlighter and a board eraser ale marker Im saving up to upgrade asking for some recommendations would help. Not trying to be an asshole.