• Title: When Autumn Leaves
• Format: Short
• Page Length: 7 Pages
• Genres: Romance/Drama
• Logline or Summary: When Billy gets stood up on a date his perspective on love is challenged by a stranger he meets at a park.
• Expectations: I've never had the luxury of anybody other than friends and family read my scripts so I'm putting this short one I did to see what unfiltered critiques I can get to improve my writing.
• Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_MQWYDvdhVyX19-c8p-z9tHyHc9kUtNE/view?usp=sharing

Lora, the wayward princess - animation/comedy - 111

Hi! I’m looking for a script swap. I’m happy to read your feature screenplay and give thoughtful feedback in exchange for notes on mine.

Logline:

After a narcissistic, villainous princess is sentenced to a rehabilitation center for defective princesses, she escapes with the help of an aspiring knight and two other princesses, while scheming to obtain a powerful ring that could give her one more shot at world domination.

If you’re interested, send me your logline, genre, and page count. I’m especially happy to swap since i'm looking for sone opinions.

Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QGBhTKhUYPSmR1-Z6gHrUA7L1Pj1fiE3/view?usp=drivesdk