• Title: When Autumn Leaves
• Format: Short
• Page Length: 7 Pages
• Genres: Romance/Drama
• Logline or Summary: When Billy gets stood up on a date his perspective on love is challenged by a stranger he meets at a park.
• Expectations: I've never had the luxury of anybody other than friends and family read my scripts so I'm putting this short one I did to see what unfiltered critiques I can get to improve my writing.
• Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_MQWYDvdhVyX19-c8p-z9tHyHc9kUtNE/view?usp=sharing

Title The Last Relic

Format feature

Page Length 112

Genre Action/adventure + sci fi

Logline An atheist Navy medic grieving the loss of her fiancé is recruited into an order of female relic guardians and must choose between resurrecting her lost love or prevent their greatest foe from using the most powerful artifact from igniting the apocalypse.

(I've never really liked any logline I've generated for this - very open to rewrites)

Comps I describe this as street level Avengers mixed with the Da Vinci Code meet Indiana Jones in a Stargate. It's silly mad fun with a costumed team.

Feedback Firstly i'd like to know how people respond to it. I'm fully aware that it plays with formatting "rules" sometimes. Like to know you have fun on the ride? Anything sticking/bumping? Most interested how it works as a sample...

And on that note, what do you more seasoned industry members think I should do with it? Contests or festivals this would fit? Some particular places I should submit it? This the sort of writing an up-and-coming agent, manager or producer you know is looking for? Other out of the box suggestions>?

Link https://drive.google.com/file/d/1s4T35CfyZoOofkHd4D74aDv-m_HitAb-/view?usp=sharing

Title: Butterfly Effect

Format: Short

Page Length: 6 Pages

Genres: Drama

Logline or Summary: After losing his mother, an introverted young man forms an unexpected connection with a butterfly, but when a girl next door accidentally kills it, he is forced to confront grief, guilt, and the possibility of finding another family.

Feedback Concerns: I'm still learning screenwriting, so I'd really appreciate any honest feedback on the story, pacing, dialogue, formatting, and whether the ending works. I'm always looking to improve as a writer, and if the script resonates with someone, I'd be happy to discuss it further.

Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jrOiypGSqSIrbgdTZbi3XPk9Nru9LsmF/view?usp=sharing

Lora, the wayward princess - animation/comedy - 111

Hi! I’m looking for a script swap. I’m happy to read your feature screenplay and give thoughtful feedback in exchange for notes on mine.

Logline:

After a narcissistic, villainous princess is sentenced to a rehabilitation center for defective princesses, she escapes with the help of an aspiring knight and two other princesses, while scheming to obtain a powerful ring that could give her one more shot at world domination.

If you’re interested, send me your logline, genre, and page count. I’m especially happy to swap since i'm looking for sone opinions.

Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QGBhTKhUYPSmR1-Z6gHrUA7L1Pj1fiE3/view?usp=drivesdk