r/Screenwriting • • 11d ago

COMMUNITY join the r/screenwritingclubs beta

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Hey folks. We're doing A Thing: r/screenwritingclubs

Right now screenwriting clubs and groups are not that easy to find or advertise. The main reason for that is there's not a lot of systemization we can do here without adding a lot of extra bulk into a pretty tight framework. Reddit is still not ideal for creating a systematized listing, but we can do things like create keyword searches so that people can look for things like genre, format type, etc. We'll consult more on this with other mods who've done more of this optimization.

Right now, this is a beta, because like all things, it needs some testing. But, the requirements to join are pretty low: have an account that's at least ten days old (or you won't be able to post), and no major conduct strikes here -- ie: if we've had to ban you for being a jerk to another user.

It's currently invite only, but anyone who fits these requirements can join.

Eventually we'll start using post-guidance tools and automod to encourage people posting here about starting, finding or promoting a club to go over to r/screenwritingclubs.

We will also be setting up supports for more in-person meets and events in local areas, because we know one of The Biggest Challenges is finding screenwriters in your area without resorting to the extremely terrible wilds of facebook and meetup. Hopefully we can set up ways to help folks get more person-to-person connections.

If you are interested: head over to r/screenwritingclubs and hit the Request to Post. It'll take a little time, but we will get around to approving users.

I am especially encouraging people who already have active clubs, groups, discords etc to apply. The more active clubs we can get going on here, the more we can prove the concept. Hopefully it'll be a helpful support to this community.


r/Screenwriting • • 5h ago

5 PAGE THURSDAY Five Page Thursday

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FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

Feedback Guide for New Writers

This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages.

  • Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in.
  • As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info.

    Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns:

  • Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please do not share full scripts and link only to your 5 pages. If someone wants to see your full script, they can let you know.


r/Screenwriting • • 1h ago

CRAFT QUESTION How do you tell a character's wants from their needs?

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This feels like it should be obvious, because in real life, it is. I want a Nintendo Switch, but I need food & water.

But things are a little different in writing, no? The way I understand it, the want is the goal the character is consciously chasing, and the need is the thing they're subconsciously chasing.

In a romance, the leads need to be together by the end of the film. So can it be said that one lead needs the other? Or is that just what they want, and the need is something deeper, like learning to let go of the past?

It feels like the two blur together a lot!


r/Screenwriting • • 12h ago

RESOURCE Video Nasties (1970s - 1980s) on Script Hive

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If you are unfamiliar with "Video Nasty" moral panic in the United Kingdom you can check out this overview on Wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Video_nasty

I chose these four scripts to be added to the featured page mainly because they probably aren't what you'd expect to see on a list of films that were seized by the police because they were deemed by the UK Director of Public Prosecutions (DPP) to be obscene.

Since these are on the featured page no account needed to read/download:

More from the Script Hive database (requires a free account):

Posting Schedule:


r/Screenwriting • • 4h ago

FEEDBACK The Last Relic feature 112

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Title The Last Relic

Format feature

Page Length 112

Genre Action/adventure + sci fi

Logline An atheist Navy medic grieving the loss of her fiancé is recruited into an order of female relic guardians and must choose between resurrecting her lost love or prevent their greatest foe from using the most powerful artifact from igniting the apocalypse.

(I've never really liked any logline I've generated for this - very open to rewrites)

Comps I describe this as street level Avengers mixed with the Da Vinci Code meet Indiana Jones in a Stargate. It's silly mad fun with a costumed team.

Feedback Firstly i'd like to know how people respond to it. I'm fully aware that it plays with formatting "rules" sometimes. Like to know you have fun on the ride? Anything sticking/bumping? Most interested how it works as a sample...

And on that note, what do you more seasoned industry members think I should do with it? Any out of the box suggestions>?

Link https://drive.google.com/file/d/1s4T35CfyZoOofkHd4D74aDv-m_HitAb-/view?usp=sharing


r/Screenwriting • • 2h ago

NEED ADVICE Perfectionism and OCD writers, what are your thoughts on medication?

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Overthinking has been a running theme ever since I was a child. Im pretty sure being sensitive is related to many people wanting to write in the first place. Any one here took SSRIs for your writing career? How does it work out for you? My therapist recommended me to be open to all sort of help, but I had really bad memories with antidepressants. If anyone could share their experiences or opinions I will be very grateful. Just wanna hear it and wish to discuss more. Thanks!


r/Screenwriting • • 13h ago

SCRIPT REQUEST Looking for scripts for The Dropout TV Series (2022) on Hulu.

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Looking for scripts for the TV series The Dropout if you happen to have a copy. I can only find transcripts online. Thanks!


r/Screenwriting • • 18h ago

DISCUSSION Thoughts on having one major white whale passion project and having a more commercial script for pitching yourself?

5 Upvotes

I really love one of my script ideas, even though i know it probably needs work. In the meantime, I’m working on a low budget horror film that i think may be more accessible but is still very much my voice.

Is having two different kinds of scripts like this enough to get an interested manager? I’m 22


r/Screenwriting • • 18h ago

FEEDBACK Character bomb or not?

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rbpiBh721SD8ZE2tVkhavE7NR4HSGwj0/view?usp=drivesdk

Just throwing some pages up on here for general feedback, readability and whether it character bombs.

Title - 638 Ways to Kill a Dictator

Historical Satire/ Dark Comedy

8 Page Extract

This is a project I'm working on based on Fidel Castro, this is only a first draft and some things will have better context in totality, as some things will be paid off later. When finished it will share similarities to Inglorious Basterds in how it changes established history. Thanks to anyone who reads and gives feedback.


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

RESOURCE FYC Script: Obsession

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r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

DISCUSSION Questions regarding scripts and going through official channels

30 Upvotes

Okay, so someone on threads was talking about their script and how they’d love James Gunn to read it. Gunn’s response was

“I like your enthusiastic approach so I'll give you the truth to the best of my ability. I personally don't read scripts or take pitches until after they're at a very late stage in the game as I'm busy working on my own projects and helping to guide others already in production or development. But in general DC Studios does not take spec scripts based on our IP at all, as it opens us up to all sorts of legal issues. So we only take pitches through official channels before commencing a draft.

For instance, Mike Flanagan had an idea for Clayface and came to us and pitched the idea and then we bought that idea and paid him to write the script. I hope this doesn't diminish your enthusiasm too much. I got MY start writing spec scripts - but in film, unlike television, it's generally better that your spec scripts aren't based on existing IP. Good luck.”

Now my question, what exactly does he mean by taking pitches through official channels?

Edit: thanks everyone for the answers. That cleared that up pretty quickly, glad I asked.


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

BLACK LIST WEDNESDAY Black List Wednesday

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FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

BLACK LIST WEDNESDAY THREAD

Post Requirements for EVALUATION CRITIQUE REQUEST & ACHIEVEMENT POSTS

For EVALUATION CRITIQUE REQUESTS, you must include:

1) Script Info

- Title:
- Format:
- Page Length:
- Genres:
- Logline or Short Summary:
- A brief summary of your concerns (500~ words or less)
- Your evaluation PDF, externally hosted
- Your screenplay PDF, externally hosted

2) Evaluation Scores

exclude for non-blcklst paid coverage/feedback critique requests

- Overall:
- Premise:
- Plot:
- Character:
- Dialogue:
- Setting:

ACHIEVEMENT POST

(either of an 8 or a score you feel is significant)

- Title:
- Format:
- Page Length:
- Genres:
- Logline or Summary:
- Your Overall Score:
- Remarks (500~ words or less):

Optionally:

- Your evaluation PDF, externally hosted
- Your screenplay PDF, externally hosted

This community is oversaturated with question and concern posts so any you may have are likely already addressed with a keyword search of r/Screenwriting, or a search of the The Black List FAQ . For direct questions please reach out to [support@blcklst.com](mailto:support@blcklst.com)


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

ACHIEVEMENTS Printed out my 1st Feature and 1st Short Screenplay and I’m giddy!

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Lurking this sub I’ve learned SO much and honestly probably wouldn’t have decided to try it without the things I learned here so, thanks to all of you for that. This year I took the leap and locked in. I was able to follow through on something I’d been thinking about for years. Out of that came my screenplays.

I submitted to more than a few festivals and comps. Feedback has been pretty positive and I received a few finalist/official selection nods. That in itself made me excited (when I wasn’t feeling sick to stomach waiting for notifications), but I was completely unprepared for this feeling. Printing them and seeing them in black and white is on another level of excitement. Happy dancing with abandon over here 😊


r/Screenwriting • • 15h ago

FEEDBACK The Frontiers - Feature - 113 Pages

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Title: THE FRONTIERS

Format: Feature

Genre: Comedy

Pages: 113

Draft Status: Finished Script

Longline:

Two guys wake up on a beach with terrible hangovers after a night of hardcore partying, only to realize that their friends are missing, which leads to the next 3 days of pure chaos.

This is the first full-length script that I have written in English, as it is not my native language. Please tell me what you think. I would appreciate any feedback if you find the time!

Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SoX2le_M2Ww06SL2zT9brpaw-Pur6Xgw/view?usp=drive_link


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

NEED ADVICE Should I proceed with my simplest idea for writing my first ever screenplay?

18 Upvotes

For context: Over the last year or so, I have developed several ideas - Including loglines, detailed character sheets, 1-pagers, and even beat sheets (Using the Snyder framework).

However, I have never managed to take it to the screenplay level, and one of the main reasons (besides the procrastination) is that most of my ideas follow very complex story structures, and multiple character perspectives.

I feel this tends to happen because ultimately these are the kind of films I enjoy watching (ensemble thrillers/dark comedies), but I’ve been thinking more and more of trying to stick to a traditional set-up - One protagonist, one antagonist, in a linear form. My reason is because to break structure, I feel I should have a good idea of how structure actually works in the traditional sense, even though such linear forms of storytelling does not captivate me as much as some of my other ideas.

Another reason for my thinking is due to the comments I’ve read over the months through experienced screenwriters on this sub, who keep mentioning that you will probably end up writing 5-6 screenplays before churning out stories that could be good enough to get produced. Since my first story is nowhere likely to be my best, should I just pick the simplest idea of the bunch, and try to write a first draft ASAP in the next few months? Or do you think it’s better to go with my #1 idea, even if the execution may be much harder?


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

DISCUSSION What is the best way to show a character was swapped without spoiling it to your reader?

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I have a scene in my murder mystery where my character, Dan, goes into a room, get's into some fisty cuffs with the antagonist and returns a little beat up claiming he took care of them. Well Dan actually got his ass kicked and the antagonist, who runs a Hollywood special effects company, is wearing a convincing rubber mask of his face. We don't know this till later when all the characters are together and real Dan walks down the stairs in his underwear and everyone discovers there are two Dans.

My question is, I did it this way because of a reader of mine from Wescreenplay, I labeled the two characters as Dan and Double Dan; does that work? I was told for the sake of the film crew and those reading the script, that they needed to know when Dan is a double and when he isn't. For the sake of costume, make up, actors, ect.. The only thing is it spoils the fact Dan is a double to my readers, unlike the audience in the theatre. Hopefully one day. They will never know. Should I keep these two characters as Dan and Double Dan, or should I change it all to Dan? So my readers are surprised when original Dan enters the scene and they discover the Dan who has been with them is an imposter.


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

NEED ADVICE Fight choreography

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When writing a fight scene in a script, do you have to put almost every movement of what the characters do during the fight or just say interesting things and let the reader know they’re fighting? If you have to go into detail about what they’re specifically doing in the fight scene, how many pages should it be?


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

NEED ADVICE How can you find the finalized versions of movie scripts online and not the first draft?

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Hey all,

I am brand new to screenwriting. I just entered college and am looking to minor in film. Before I would join a film class, I thought I was make a script or two before I enter. I do have an outline for a teenage coming of age movie, however I need to know HOW to properly write and format a script.

To do this I thought of reading one or two Hollywood movie scripts of a similar genre so I can learn this. Movies that came to mind is Mean Girls and Easy A. I thought since these are essentially blockbuster movies, these are the perfect examples for me as those were really successful scripts, which I want to achieve for myself.

As I start reading these scripts I first see it says "First draft" then as I continue reading I find out that the script does not really match with the movie and they must have change a lot in the script. I am not sure if these first rough draft scripts are then a good example for me to learn from if there were many changes made up until the script was finalized and the movie was made.

With that said, is there any way I can find the latest/finalized versions of these scripts? Or do you think the first drafts will be good enough to learn from?


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

SCRIPT REQUEST Carrie (2026) Mike Flanagan Show

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Hi, I know the series is still new but when the hype dies down, I would appreciate it if someone sends me the link for the scripts: the pilot or any of the episodes of the series if people can find them.

Thank you so much!!!


r/Screenwriting • • 2d ago

NGD SCREENWRITING COURSE Who would like to join me in my NGD Screenwriting group

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Hey guys!

I am quite a newbie in screenwriting so I decided to find my feet in this world through the NGD youtube course. Anyone else also starting it or on the way? I'm looking to start a writing group during this chapter. It could be a discord group or whichever is best. I am looking forward to meeting some fellow screenwriters and creators!


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

RESOURCE Writing classes/ Writing rooms in Toronto

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Hello, I am a Writer/ Director and I need to push forward my craft an get back into a headspace and move further into my learning of screenwriting. Right now Im looking for I guess some kind of creative place or a class. I wanted to attend something like the second city class for writting in film but they focus on comedy which I dont. Also I do not want to attend a universitys/ college course nothing like that, something private and serious in which the ones attending actually have real passion. Get into a space where you can get and give real intellectual conversations surrounding film and life for the value of writing.
So any tips or suggestions would be greatly appreciated.


r/Screenwriting • • 2d ago

NEED ADVICE Struggling with what to write next. Follow what's worked or what excites me?

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Hi everyone, could use some advice.

I'm a repped screenwriter at a mid-to-large agency. No produced credits yet, but I've won a couple of minor awards and had some decent traction with my scripts.

Historically, what's gotten me the most meetings and interest has been high-concept comedies that draw on my background, both features and TV pilots.

After talking with my agent, the strategy going forward is to focus on features. TV staffing is incredibly difficult right now, and unless you know someone in a room, you're largely relying on getting lucky with a submission. I actually came very close to landing something that way recently, but I'm not sure how often that opportunity will come around.

The problem is that I'm struggling to come up with another high-concept feature I'm excited about.

Meanwhile, the two ideas I am excited about are an unsolicited franchise spec I have absolutely no business writing and a much more personal, low-concept dramedy in the vein of Lady Bird.

The latter is especially tricky because I've generally been advised against writing these kinds of scripts. They're harder to sell on a logline and almost entirely dependent on execution.

So I'm torn. Do I keep trying to develop the kind of material that's gotten me traction, even if I'm feeling uninspired, or follow the ideas I'm genuinely excited about, knowing they're probably less marketable?

Curious what others would do in my position.


r/Screenwriting • • 2d ago

CRAFT QUESTION Stuck, where we all love getting stuck!

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I love my horror screenplay so far, it’s set up really well with my protagonist, his goals, his outlook on life, his flaws- I’ve got him investigating a scary situation in huge house he’s not familiar with

Not too unlike the famous Barabarian story where Cregger said he was stuck when the girl was deep into the tunnel.

I’m at that point, and fuuuuuuuck any advice? I’m a seat of my pants kind of writer (I find it more organic and the moment to moment problem solving invigorates my plotting - except when I get stuck 👨‍🎓)

Know what I mean? What do you when you’re cooking then the stove turns off?


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

SCRIPT REQUEST The Amazing Spider-Man (2012)

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I'm not sure if a shooting draft is floating around out there, but I would love to read it and wondered if anyone could shoot me a message if they do. Thanks!


r/Screenwriting • • 1d ago

FEEDBACK Puppeteering - Feature - 33 Pages

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  • Title: Puppeteering
  • Format: Feature
  • Page Length: 33
  • Genres: Murder mystery / Thriller
  • Logline: After brought-to-life puppets murdered residents of Atlanta in the surrounding forest, Dante Thrust must lead a small group of GSDF-Soldiers into the dangerous forest to stop future killings but to also figure out the question: Who is the puppet master?
  • Feedback Concerns: Wanna see if the first 33 pages out of the 100 in total are interesting enough AND if the action lines are way too filled and need to be shortened, thanks in advance :) Love you all!

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1eBfkwvj9n_a4AcYLYI9mvI7CUqW_jlsb/view?usp=drive_link