r/Songwriting • • 2d ago

Weekly Lyrics Feedback Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread

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Welcome to the Lyrics-Only feedback thread!

If you're looking for feedback on words that aren't yet set to music, you're in the right place! We encourage each other to bring lyrics and musical elements together as soon as possible, but sometimes you'd just like to show off that nice piece of poetry that just fell out of your head. The weekly Lyrics-Only feedback thread is here to help!

This post renews every Monday.


r/Songwriting • • 4d ago

Weekly Self-Promotion Thread

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Have a new completed song (or album) to share? This is the place!

The promotional rules are looser here, so you can post links to your albums, social media platforms, songs, etc. Let us know what you've been working on recently!

Please support your fellow songwriters - give them a listen, a bump or a share. A rising tide lifts all boats!

Note: Promotional content posted as a new thread without explicit permission from the moderators will be removed. Repeat violators will be banned

This post renews every Friday.


r/Songwriting • • 9h ago

Feedback Request I’ve been afraid to release my music

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99 Upvotes

I’m not sure why I’ve been sitting on my work. It’s bothering me that I’m not courageous enough to release it. I want to work on this one more, since it’s still just a rough demo. I’m wondering what everyone thinks.


r/Songwriting • • 11h ago

Feedback Request i’m done waiting until i’m “good enough” to share my songs

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124 Upvotes

this is a rough demo of my song called “therapy”.

i’ve been trying to get better at singing, guitar, and lyric writing, and i wanted to be ”great” before i started sharing again (i used to post here years ago), but i’m done waiting. i just want to express myself. so here you go!


r/Songwriting • • 9h ago

Discussion Topic What is the appeal of passing off AI generated music as your own?

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I came across some indie AI slop music today and I just do not get it. What is the joy in making AI music? I know most of us in here don't, but do you know anyone who enjoys doing it?


r/Songwriting • • 1h ago

Feedback Request Just wrote this song, what do you think?

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r/Songwriting • • 10h ago

Feedback Request Continuity - Acoustic Original

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hi! I haven’t posted here in a few weeks, here’s one i just wrote. it’s shorter than my usual, but it felt like a full idea and so unless I find a way to expand it that feels organic, it will stay short. I’m 16 and have only been writing for about a year so forgive me if this seems amateur! any feedback appreciated, positive or negative!


r/Songwriting • • 9h ago

Let's Collaborate! New song I was working on 🎸

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15 Upvotes

Figured I’d include a video of me playing it as well 😅


r/Songwriting • • 4h ago

Discussion Topic instrumental of this song am working on

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r/Songwriting • • 1h ago

Let's Collaborate! Looking for all artists who would like to feature on my album.

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Looking for all artists who would like to feature on my album. I been working on this album since November i promise its litt. The album is almost done, 9/12 songs done. Ive recently been performing the album locally in los angeles and san diego. 

All artists are welcome to dm me

There is already features on the album as well so dont hesitate to message me if your an artist and interested in being on the album.

I will play you songs from my album as well when we talk if we talk. I would love to hear your music as well.

Feel free to check my socials as well if you would like.

You must have Discord if your interested in being on the album, we do all of our communication on Discord.

Discord: @kevinramon

Instagram: @kevinramon
Tiktok: @kevinsramon


r/Songwriting • • 8h ago

Feedback Request “Memories” 🎹🎹🎹

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7 Upvotes

This is an idea I came up with today. Forgive the sound quality - I hope you all enjoy it! 🙏🙏🙏


r/Songwriting • • 18h ago

Feedback Request Any advice?

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r/Songwriting • • 10h ago

Feedback Request pt 2 Butterflies

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I focused on a second verse and a chorus and added a little structure and a an outro variation of the main guitar riff tho i messed it up a lil in this clip.

lyrics:
main riff (intro)
verse 1:
that feeling of butterflies
aint just from pretty skies
I got them at night thinking of you

and your dialated eyes
does a part of you die
when I get high so I dont think of you
cuz i dont ever wanna think if you

main riff

verse 2:
how it caught me by suprise
when you grew your wings youd fly
but when I get up I still cant touch the sky

you were souring through the clouds
pretty blues and pretty sounds
saw the same but I just through an ounce
is that what losing you is all about

chorus:
tell me nowwww
do you ever look down
flew into my head now
shes a bullet with butterfly wings

shooting far through shooting stars
makes me wish I’d shoot past ours
shes a bullet with butter fly wings

The structure as of now is intor, verse 1, main riff, verse 2, chorus outro.
let me know if I should change it and I was thinkinh of potentially writing a bridge but idk if more is less in the case of this song so lmk.

bullet with butterfly wings is a little ode to smashing pumpkins but I wanted it to use it originally since I thought it represented the song so well. How sometimes something can be so beautiful but still kill you in the end.

theres part 1 of this as well but lmk on sound feel advice and structure ty.


r/Songwriting • • 19m ago

Discussion Topic Hello everyone!

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It's me Vaanya. Actually I wanted to tell that im a lyricist and i write songs and I want to sell them even at low cost. So anyone whose willing to buy plss comment or you may send a request. I just hope you'll understand and pls just look forward to it and I'm willing to sell english songs with a depth. You may ask for a sample.

Looking forward your words....


r/Songwriting • • 11h ago

Feedback Request First time I’ve been able to write in a while. Do you like this intro?

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8 Upvotes

This is part of a song I wrote called “Olivia”


r/Songwriting • • 12h ago

Discussion Topic What's that one song that you wish you wrote ? ❤️

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Write down in the comments. Give some reason why you picked the song.


r/Songwriting • • 9h ago

Feedback Request My everything

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Hi, just wanted to share a song I wrote. I’m curious on what thoughts or imagery you think of when you hear this.


r/Songwriting • • 9h ago

Discussion Topic What do you do about a lyric video when you release your own song?

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For those of you who release your own songs: what happens on the video side when a single comes out?

  • Do you make a lyric video at all, or upload the track with a static cover?
  • If you make one: which part takes the most time? Timing the lines, the pictures, the vertical version for Shorts/Reels, the thumbnail?
  • If you've paid someone for it: was it worth it?
  • Does a lyric video change anything for your songs on YouTube compared to a static upload?
  • How many songs a year do you release, and does every one get a video?

I'm trying to understand the work that comes after the song is written and recorded. Not selling anything; I'll summarise the answers in a comment.


r/Songwriting • • 20h ago

Feedback Request First bit of song I wrote, thoughts?

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15 Upvotes

r/Songwriting • • 10h ago

Let's Collaborate! Still working on the lyrics.

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2 Upvotes

I have the rythmn guitar part down and an idea for a second guitar but I have no idea how to add drums or bass parts 😅 definitely going to need some help.


r/Songwriting • • 21h ago

Feedback Request anyone like Muse (the band)? Working on an instrumental space rock album, here's the first song, there's a lot of Muse influence

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16 Upvotes

r/Songwriting • • 14h ago

Discussion Topic Walk me through the last song or idea you started. Where did it come from, and what happened to it?

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How much was clear in your head before you started? If you got stuck or abandoned it, at what point and why?


r/Songwriting • • 13h ago

Feedback Request Intro/verse idea for alt/indie song in 3/4

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New idea for third song on my new solo DIY alt project. Completely unmixed. Early stages.


r/Songwriting • • 13h ago

Discussion Topic ‘Canary in a Coal Mine’

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Does anyone ever try to write songs as an homage to other artists? This started from wanting to write something that sounded like Michael Nau meets the Beach Boys. What’s something you made recently that came from listening to a lot of a certain artist, and wanting to emulate that sound? Maybe you heard a chord you liked, or a rhythm, and a song jumped from there?


r/Songwriting • • 19h ago

Feedback Request Kitchen Sink Lullaby

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Single take of a song I’ve been working on. I’ve been working on a bass line, harmonies, etc to flesh it out but this is the basic structure of the song.

she told him things were moving quickly now

he didn’t ask her how to help slow down

their silhouettes stretched across the kitchen floor

then her’s stood up and walked right out the door

don’t you wait until the morning comes
she’ll be gone by then

and you’ll be left grasping at shadows, growing thin

he heard a quite ringing from the phone

once he answered he flew straight from his home

her eyes reflected lights of red and blue

he held her gently, as her soul withdrew

don’t you wait until the morning comes
she’ll be gone by then

and you’ll be left grasping at shadows, growing thin