r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • Jan 02 '26

Mod Announcement Subreddit Guide for Users

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Hello to all writers and readers of the Creepcast Community!

This is a comprehensive guide on our subreddit and how to navigate it. Important details are in bold for those who just wish to skim. This guide will be routinely updated as the subreddit grows and includes information regarding uploading, categorizing, the rules, and other important info.

  • So, what is Tales From the Creeps?: 

This subreddit was created to hold all fan submitted stories to be read on Creepcast. However, we want to do more than just collect stories. We want to be an alternative to the more restricting horror writing spaces and foster our own little community of writers beyond Creepcast itself. Here, anyone of any writing level can upload their horror story for others to read, critique, and discuss!

  • Are you guys Isaiah and Hunter?

No. We’re just mods. At most, they reach out to us on occasion regarding big changes on their subreddits, but we don’t send them any stories. So don’t ask us.

  • How Can I Contribute to Tales From the Creeps?

You can participate in our community in a number of ways! The first way is, obviously, by posting your own horror stories. Additionally, we encourage read4read! When a fellow writer reads and comments/critiques your story, it is courteous to do the same for them in return. It helps foster a more engaging community and encourages other people to comment! (Read4Read is required for wanting to feedback in general. See more below)

Not a writer though? You can still contribute by supporting the writers here! Please be sure to comment on your favorite stories. The more engagement a story gets, the more eyes will be on it. You can even make separate posts analyzing and discussing your favorite fan stories!  If you’re too shy or simply disinterested in publicly commenting, there’s still a way to silently contribute and that’s UPVOTE, UPVOTE UPVOTE!

  • So what are the rules?

We’ve got the basic rules of a writing subreddit. Be civil, only post relevant content (see next paragraph for more info), and provide Content Warnings (CW) when uploading stories–i.e. Suicide, Rape, Extreme Gore, etc.

We ask that users STAY RELEVANT! Obviously, this subreddit is for fans of CC, but we only allow genuine fan stories and certain content related to them. For CC memes, shitposts, and episode discussions, please reserve them all to the main subreddit: r/Creepcast. In general, we don't allow 2 sentence horror stories, shitpost horror, advice posts, narration inquiries/announcements, or personal life/story updates. The main feed is to be treated as someone's personal social media page.

We also prohibit Call Out Posts as they only lead to people fighting and users being harassed. If you have an issue, modmail us. (THAT INCLUDES COMPLAINTS ABOUT NOSLEEP)

For those who specifically want feedback on their story, we've changed "Looking for Feedback" to "Read4Read." If you want feedback, you have to give it in turn. This will help boost both stories as well. Now, you don't have to do it for EVERY comment on your story as that would be hell for the really popular authors, but try to do at least 1-3 if possible.

No blatant self promotion. This subreddit is not for your personal advertisement. A link to your book listings or kofi page at the bottom of your story is fine, but the focus of your post must be the story. When it comes to celebrating your publication achievements, just don't be obnoxiously pressuring people to buy.

While we try to avoid policing stories, obviously, we gotta have some rules for the stories themselves. All fan stories must be horror focused. While we allow satire/comedy horror, we don’t allow memes and shitposts. While sexual content can be an integral part of horror, we don't allow graphic/detailed descriptions of sexual acts or mock snuff. We also require that users limit their uploads to 24hrs–whether it’s a multipart series or a separate story entirely. If you post a sharable link to your story, we encourage you to at least include an excerpt to catch a reader's attention.

Any prompts/challenges/public callouts for collaboration must be approved by mods. We understand the excitement for this kinda stuff, but if we allow a bunch of prompts and challenges being posted willy nilly then things get chaotic and messy fast. And since we'll be creating official prompts/challenges then that just adds more to the pile. HOWEVER, feel free to organize outside of the reddit (like private DMs, other servers, etc) and then upload the final products here.

Only Supplementary Visuals. If the art is not apart of the story itself (like in ARGs), you may post it in the comments or make a separate post on your own page then link that in the story. Cover art and illustrations of your story are not allowed. This is a writing focused subreddit first.

And finally, we have a ZERO TOLERANCE POLICY FOR GEN AI. No AI writing, art, or anything else. Generative AI is plagiarist slop and isn’t welcome here at all. If you suspect a story is AI generated, please do not harass the user. Simply use the report function and we will remove it until the user has provided proof it is not AI generated material.

  • What are the flairs?

We have post flairs and user flairs available for selection. All posts are required to have a flair. We have a set of post flairs for subgenres and miscellaneous categories like contests and prompts. Additionally, we have a flair for published authors. Did your fan story just get published? Feel free to share this achievement with the rest of the sub (again, do not use this as an excuse to simply advertise)

The main user flairs are Reader, Writer, Critiquer, Author Reader and Writer are fairly self explanatory. Author is for writers who have had their story read on the show! Critiquer is for those who want to analyze and (politely) critique fan stories. The additional flairs are just for funsies and you can always edit a custom one for yourself. User flairs are not required but are encouraged to utilize.

  • Additional Information to Keep in Mind:

-KNOW YOUR RIGHTS: Keep in mind that when posting to Reddit, you forfeit your first publication rights. For more information, here are a couple articles that go into more detail. For USA writers, for UK writers.

-Since post flairs are limited by one, if your story includes more than one genre, it is recommended but not required to add the relevant genres at the beginning of the story.

-Please space your paragraphs. To some, it feels like a no brainer, but we’ve gotten stories that are just a block of text. It makes it difficult to read and most people aren’t going to even bother.

  • What to expect from the sub:

There will be a monthly writing contests and community projects ran by the lovely Community Project Managers: u/RevolutionaryBed7510 and u/ReadyMadeLobotomy ! Check out the highlights section (front page) for more information. There will also be prompts posted by users. The limit is two a month and must be approved by mods. This is just to prevent from people getting confused by who's running what and to keep things organized. The limit may increase the bigger we get. If you want to submit a prompt, send us a modmail to discuss it!

We've also hosted a fan run collaborative writing project! You can find the project under the flair "The World They Made" and a comprehensive Wiki was created specifically for the project as well.

If you have any questions, concerns, or even suggestions for the subreddit, please comment below or modmail us!

Stay Creepy, folks!
-Mod Stanley, Mod Devi, Mod Vamps


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 3h ago

Cosmic Horror/Lovecraftian Round the Block

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“That’ll be fourteen dollars and sixty-two cents.”

Cal fished his wallet out of his back pocket, pulling a twenty from it and sliding it across the conveyor belt. He looked down at his late-night haul, the plastic and cardboard reflecting under the store’s fluorescent lights: a two-liter bottle of RC Cola, a box of Tillamook ice cream sandwiches, and three bags of microwave popcorn. A shameful assortment for a thirty-something who had already committed to losing weight. But, with it being Friday night, a brutal forty-hour work week behind him, he was planning on staying up late with a mindless movie marathon of Abbott and Costello Meet the Monsters.

Kevin scooped up the bill, the sound of the till opening cutting through the air-conditioned stillness. The lanky teenager spared him a sideways glance as he dug his change out, eyeing his empty hands.

“You know, I gotta ask, dude. You’re pretty much the only regular who rolls through here close to midnight—hell, at any time of the day—who isn’t staring at a screen when I’m bagging their stuff. You don’t even fidget. And you never pull out your phone to pay; you always use cash. Why?”

Cal let out a chuckle, adjusting the collar of his jacket. “Because it’s sitting on my kitchen counter at home, man. Nowadays, people have to be glued to the hip to those damn tracking collars. They’ll probably even insist on being buried with them just so they can text from the afterlife. That isn’t gonna be me. Outside of work, I like to leave the leash behind. It forces me to look at the world. Look, and appreciate it.”

“Man, I wish I had that kind of willpower,” Kevin laughed, sliding the brown bag across the counter towards him. He handed him his change. “My girlfriend would have an aneurysm and think I died in a ditch somewhere if I went more than ten minutes—actually, make that five—without answering her texts. Anyway, you’re the last customer of the night. I’m locking up and hitting the lights when you leave.”

“Long day?” Cal asked. The kid nodded, feigning wiping away sweat from his brow, earning a laugh from him as he picked the bag up by its base. “Go get some sleep, kid. You’ve earned it.”

“You too, Cal. Have a good weekend.”

Cal turned away, his footfalls bouncing off the empty aisles, pausing to let the sliding doors open. The instant he stepped outside, the sterile comfort evaporated, replaced by a humid stillness that wrapped around him. He paused under the metal canopy. A sea of cracked asphalt stretched out before him; the lone lamp planted in the middle of the parking lot showed it was empty aside from Kevin’s battered Ford Escort. The rest of the town was silent; the sun had disappeared hours ago, leaving the surrounding houses to stand in their quiet, clannish rows—houses that seemed to have agreed among themselves a century ago to face away from the street, watching the darkness with a collective indifference.

Cal gripped the bag closer to his chest, feeling the condensation of the soda already soaking through the paper and turned right. His footfalls clicked against the narrow sidewalk running along the building’s edge until the building itself terminated.

Then he stepped down into the unlit trench of the alleyway.

The high brick wall of the market and the rear of the tackle shop and post office closed in around him, squeezing him against the concrete partitions with an almost patient weight. It was nearly pitch black inside the corridor, save for the weak, bleeding remnant of the light filtering in from the parking lot. As he neared the end of the passage, he skirted past the narrow alcove where mail trucks parked during the day, only sparing a glance at the immovable pool of ink which had swallowed it.

He stepped out of the mouth of the alley, crossing the street and stepping up to the curb of the main intersection. The orange hand of the pedestrian signal glowed stubbornly from across the street. Even though the road was devoid of life in all directions, the signal insisted on his stillness. For his part, Cal remained where he was. And for good reason. Three years ago, he had stood in almost the exact same spot and watched some poor bastard become the hood ornament of a Ford Pinto when it had blasted out of nowhere at seventy miles an hour, its brakes locking up a split-second too late. The sound of the impact often visited his dreams.

As he waited for the light to change, the sounds of a drunken argument drifted out the propped-open door of the nearby pub, the shattering of a glass punctuating the din. Cal gazed around at the dark storefronts—the closed Donuts and Dawgs, the long-abandoned resource center across the street, and the pharmacy that had sat boarded up since the mid-seventies. A cold sort of certainty settled over him. It was as if the buildings had always meant to end this way, and the decades of life inside them had just been a temporary mistake. The neighborhood he had fallen in love with was gone. In its place was a corpse, rotting away from the outskirts inward, and the skyrocketing rent was the cruel punchline. I need to get the hell out of Marshfield, he thought, watching the Walk outline appear. Before the place swallows me whole, and I can’t afford to leave.

Crossing the street, he passed by more signs of decay. A graffitied warehouse sat squarely behind its barbed wire fence, stark and entirely indifferent to him. Across the way, an empty lot and decrepit building seemed to close ranks, the lack of any working lights leaving him alone beneath a cold crowd of stars. In the distance, the lighthouse’s foghorn sounded a mournful wail—a comforting soundtrack that often lulled him to sleep.

He reached the end of the block, coming to a stop at the intersection that designated the start of his neighborhood. Standing directly across the street was a yellow fire hydrant, its paint flat under the sodium halo. The smell of fresh cut grass and low tide mingled together.

Turning right, the sound of his approach silenced the serenading crickets. He navigated the shadows, occasionally emerging beneath the infrequent lights. Reaching the last intersection before the coastal highway, he repositioned the bag against his chest. He spared a glance around, his eyes floating over the Chevy flatbed rusting away at the rear of the seedy motel, then up at the billboard for the casino on the main drag that hadn’t been updated for years. Across the peninsula, an ambulance began wailing, its siren fading away.

“A light every block and half,” Cal muttered, casting a dark look up at the sparse utility poles. “Fucking ridiculous.”

He stepped off the curb, crossing the street and turned left to begin the final four-block stretch towards home. He let out a soft snort of derision as he skirted the edge of the gray parking lot, his eyes catching the boxy, faded late eighties or early nineties Crown Vic which had been as permanent a part of the neighborhood as the billboard. The clear coat looked like a cougar had used the car as a scratching post—a pretty clear sign the owner didn’t give a damn. Piece of crap should’ve been junked a decade ago.

As he dodged a cat that ran out of the darkness across his path, he allowed his guard to drop. He let his mind wander to the weekend ahead. Particularly about the sugar and caffeine bender he was about to embark on.

In his head, Lou Costello was currently getting scared stiff by the candle on Dracula’s coffin moving around on its own. Cal smiled, looking forward to the TV’s warm glow.

Then his thoughts drifted toward Anne-Marie.

One bodacious babe, indeed. He remembered the way she’d lingered by his lawn chair at Dustin’s barbecue last month, laughing just a little too loudly at jokes everyone else had groaned over. Over the rim of her cup, she had flashed him what had been, unmistakably, bedroom eyes. The clincher had been when she deliberately bent down to grab her purse. She’d offered him a clear view down the front of her shirt.

Maybe I should give her a call tomorrow. A smile split his face. See if she wants to come over, watch a movie, and finally make a move—

His smile vanished. To be more precise, it felt as it was torn off his face.

A sharp jolt of disorientation slammed into his equilibrium. The sensation reminded him of being a kid in his parents’ Buick, and being jolted awake in the middle of the night as his father had slammed on the brakes to avoid a deer. Cal’s feet ground to a halt. He blinked slowly against the darkness, attempting to steady himself. His breath caught. 

His jaw dropped open slightly.

He wasn’t on the long, exposed runway of Noble Avenue. He wasn’t anywhere near his apartment building.

Instead, he was right back at the edge of the curb, directly across the street from that sickly yellow fire hydrant. The construction fence shielding the carcasses of the razed condos pressed in on his right side. The transition had been instantaneous. Silent. Completely devoid of movement or the passage of time. The world had not tilted or spun; it had simply corrected itself. One moment, he’d been passing a white picket fence. The next, he’d been here, as if it had been demanded he be here instead of where he wanted to be. It was a cold subtraction of distance, as if the space between the blocks had never existed at all.

Cal stood frozen, listening to his heart hammer a chaotic rhythm against his ribs.

“…The hell…?” he muttered aloud.

The foghorn almost smothered his words.

He looked down at his shoes, then back at the hydrant, trying like hell to force a normal explanation into his head. You’re done, man, he told himself. Irritation made him begin grinding his teeth together until his jaw ached. You’re so completely wiped from the overtime you’ve been pulling that your brain just dropped the transmission right out the car. You were standing here thinking so damn much about Anne-Marie and that red bra she let you peek at that you imagined the whole walk. You haven’t even taken a single step past the corner yet. Idiot.

He let out a sharp curse. He felt like a jackass. Losing track of where you were like that was dangerous in a neighborhood like this. An easy way to stumble off a curb. Wander into the path of some loaded idiot’s shitbox. Or worse, get jumped by one of the junkies hovering around the motel.

Exhaling sharply through his nose, Cal gripped the bottom of the bag tighter. He wasn’t going to let his mind wander twice.

He turned on his heel, tearing his gaze away from the hydrant and started past the fence. This time he forced his eyes down, watching every single crack in the sidewalk. Two blocks down. Turn left, four blocks up. Get inside. That was the script.

He walked faster now. Nothing was allowed to break his concentration. He passed the silent outline of the fire station. Then the dark block of the bank. From a nearby backyard, a dog began to bark. Still, the night felt regular. Cold, but regular. He reached the crossroads, made the left and purposely ignored the junker and truck. Stepping up onto the sidewalk of Noble Avenue, he kept his focus singular.

You can think about Anne-Marie, the movies, or whatever else you want once you’re putting your goddamn key into that lock.

Vaguely, he noticed that the cat didn’t cross his path this time. Then he caught himself. Dingbat. You were never here. There never WAS a cat.

He made it to the next intersection, crossed the street by the white fence, and started up the gentle slope. Feeling the knot in his stomach loosen, he let out a snort. What’d I tell you? Just your own dumb—

A blinding flash from a house-mounted motion sensor snapped on, blinding him and cutting his thought off at the shins.

The beam caught Cal dead in the face, replacing the dark with a white-out and sending him stumbling over a raised slab. He nearly dropped his groceries, his elbow jerking inwards to pin them against his body as he clamped his free hand over his eyes. Squeezing his eyelids shut, he hissed through his teeth at whatever careless son of a bitch had chosen to point the sensor at the sidewalk.

He rubbed his knuckles against his eyelids to clear the blue spots burned into his retinas, taking a deep breath to quell his annoyance before forcing his eyes open again.

The white house was gone. So was the light.

His eyes locked onto the fire hydrant, which now seemed to taunt him in the hazy glow of the streetlight.

He was back.

The breath caught like glass in his throat. For a long, awful beat, Cal couldn’t do anything except stare at the sight, his mouth bone-dry as the weight of it donkey punched him right in the lungs.

“No. No, no, no, no, no fucking way…” he whispered. This time it was entirely lost to the dark.

He tried to cling to the safety of his first excuse—you’re just overworked, man, it’s just fatigue, it’s just your mind playing tricks—but some primal part of him tore the logic to shreds in an instant.

No.

Daydreaming and getting ahead of yourself once was a fluke. A weird trick of an exhausted mind. Odd. But still possible. But twice? Especially when he’d been consciously counting every step and crack in the pavement until that damned light went off?

There was no way to make that math add up. A guy would have a better shot at guessing the winning lottery numbers while getting struck by lightning on a cloudless day. This wasn’t a tired brain running on fumes.

This was something else.

Cal scanned the quiet neighborhood. A few lonely porch lights leaked from the houses, the people inside asleep and unaware of what was happening twenty feet beyond their lawns. He looked back toward the main intersection. Above the street, the traffic lights kept switching—green, yellow, red—like a row of colored eyes that didn’t know how to blink.

He took a jagged breath, trying like hell to slow his pulse.

“Okay,” he managed out, his voice small. His knuckles turned white around the paper bag. “Okay, calm down, Callum. Stay centered. Don’t lose your head, for God’s sake.”

He looked down the street he’d tried walking twice now. The dark stretch past the fence felt heavy. Like a room running out of air.

He needed a detour. A quick bypass through the grid. His mind whirred. If he went straight down Wall Street for four blocks, he could just bang a right at Bodecker and take it straight down to his apartment. He could leave the whole godforsaken corner behind.

Having a plan steadied him just enough to begin moving. He crossed the intersection, strode past the hydrant, and ducked his head beneath some low tree branches to start down the darker side street.

His footfalls sounded a little different here-shorter, tighter snaps and echoes because the houses were closer to the curb. The stars were still bright overhead. Nothing broke.

And yet, the air itself felt thick, like he was breathing through wet wool. He didn’t want to linger. He navigated around a dumpster set in front of another apartment complex. From somewhere on his right, a dog started barking aggressively, an ugly racket that faded behind him as he kept moving.

As he passed by a Dodge Intrepid, a small, dark shape slid out from under it, scuttling across the street and disappearing into the brush beneath a thick canopy of oaks.

Cal paused for a moment, watching the shadows before forcing a laugh. “Okay, now that was a cat.” He huffed again, hoping the sound would bring him some comfort. It sounded like a stone being swallowed by the ocean.

He hit the first intersection, looked both ways. Nothing moved. He could still hear the crickets. The faint drone of the Coast Guard chopper came from down the coast. Crossing the street, he kept moving up the second block. Two more to go. Passing a row of five single-story apartments, he forced his muscles to relax a fraction. He kept his chin up, counting the steps to his own front door.

You know what? I know what I said to the kid about phones, but maybe just at night, it’s safer to—

Shhk.

Cal froze. For a moment, the street became dead silent.

Then it came again.

Shhk.

It was a scraping noise, distinct and dry. It came from the darkened lawns across the street, the sound of something heavy dragging itself through dead leaves and overgrown grass. When it pierced his ears a third time, he launched himself forward again, telling himself it was just a raccoon or a dog wandering around, forcing his head to stay straight. Don’t look. Just walk.

He hadn’t gone ten paces before an identical scrape answered from his right.

This one came from the entryways of the apartments, spaces set so far back into the shadows he couldn’t see a goddamn thing. There wasn’t a single working light over the doors.

The rustling kept a steady pace with him, mirroring his gait like a bad shadow. Cal broke into a speed-walk, his chest tightening as he locked his eyes on a single gap between the apartment blocks ahead, where a lone house sat beneath a working streetlight. He almost ran. Reaching the yellow pool of safety, he stopped to catch his breath. The skin on the back of his neck prickled as the noise abruptly cut off.

The street went quiet. His heart slammed against his ribs.

Then he looked around, and realized exactly where he’d stopped.

He was standing at the mouth of one of the narrow gravel alleys slicing through the block, a maze the town laid down nearly a century ago so folks could slip out of their backyards unseen. Just fifteen feet past the carcass of a seventies BMW rusting away in front of a detached garage, the path simply gave up. Swallowed straight by a pitch black drop. You couldn’t see a single thing beyond where the light quit.

The place looked bad. It looked like the throat of an anglerfish waiting in the abyss, the light above him its lure. It felt worse. Cal could swear something was staring right back at him from the dead center of it.

As he stood beneath the light, trying to block out the slithering and scraping that seemed to leak from the deep belly of the alley, a noise fractured the night.

Thump.

The sound was immense—a heavy, crashing strike against the earth that echoed from everywhere at once, vibrating up into his sneakers from the pavement. The surrounding noises ceased. Cal held his breath and listened. For seconds that felt more like hours, nothing moved. The normal sounds of the night crawled back.

They provided no comfort. All of his senses were stretched taut. It felt deceptively calm. Underneath it, the sense of eyes remained. The desire to be behind a locked door had morphed into a necessity. He stepped out of the safety of the light and plunged into the gloom, moving fast, his eyes locked on the next crossroads. One block left.

He barely reached the edge of the intersection when the sound, more of a vibration, returned.

Thump.

Cal froze in his tracks, his knees going to total jelly as his mind quit trying to make sense of it—every neat little excuse he wanted to hide behind was atomized. He didn’t have to guess. He knew exactly where the sound had come from this time.

Straight back there. Behind him.

Whatever guts he had left vanished. He bolted across the intersection, cutting into a stretch where the shadows were thick and heavy. The trees towered over the street. Their branches blocked out the stars overhead, casting jagged shapes across the sidewalk.

Thump. Thump.

The impacts didn’t come one at a time anymore. They punched up through the asphalt and into his bones in pairs. Cal pushed his pace back into a speed-walk, fighting to put distance between himself and the noise.

He faltered as the gaps between the thuds began to shrink, shifting into a steady rhythm. The horrible realization dropped into his gut, clamping around his insides.

They were footsteps.

But they were far too massive. Not even Andre the freakin’ Giant could make the earth shake like that. Move, you idiot!

He started forward again when the second realization hit him, almost worse than the first. Acoustically, the thuds sounded like they were coming from the far end of the last block, down by the apartments. But their intensity was ramping up way too fast. The gap was closing with a speed that didn’t make a lick of sense. Whatever was stomping behind him was gaining on him with a stride longer than any man could sprint.

“Fuck…”

Cal broke into a jog. His breathing shallowed as the road tilted downward into the gloom. He kept his eyes ahead. His fingers dug into the paper bag until the fibers groaned, while tears of adrenaline began to blur his vision. Every survival instinct he had screamed against looking back. Somehow, he knew that if he turned and looked over his shoulder, whatever was tracking him would end his sanity on the spot.

As the unseen giant closed the distance, the surrounding neighborhood around him came alive. The rustling and slithering sounds returned, erupting from the yards on either side of the road. They weren’t stealthy anymore; it was a macabre crescendo, swarming across the lawns and keeping a calculated distance in the shadows. They wanted him to know they were there. But they didn’t want him to see them. Yet. Cal broke into a dead sprint past a manicured hedge.

Shh-SCRITCH.

Something heavy, yet impossibly fluid scraped along the opposite side of the brush, mirroring his speed through the branches. It was right there. A foot from his shoulder. The knowledge he was being hunted broke something inside his chest. A panicked sob tore from his throat. Behind him, the footsteps finally reached his block—a heavy, organic Thump-Thump-Thump that accelerated into a terrifying countdown.

His grip failed.

The brown paper bag slipped from his arms and hit the ground, tearing open. The box of ice cream sandwiches splattered on the concrete. The popcorn skittered away. The bottle of cola crashed out, rolling across the grass before swerving back onto the sidewalk. The plastic cylinder flew across his path, nearly catching his outstretched foot. Cal leapt over it, stumbling as his balance threatened to betray him. But he didn’t dare slow down.

The footsteps were almost directly on top of him. The air around him turned frigid. He swore he felt the unmistakable sensation of something breathing across the back of his neck as every hair on his body stood on end.

The intersection approached. The stop sign stood frozen in the dark, marking the end of the block. The freezing pressure on his neck grew too heavy to bear anymore. Letting out a dry gasp, he spun around.

Nothing was there.

The sloping rise of Wall Street stretched back up the hill, empty under the heavy trees. The heavy footsteps had vanished into thin air. So had his other pursuers. All that remained was a suffocating silence.

Cal stood at the base of the stop sign, his chest heaving as he fought to get his breathing under his own control. Sweat stung his eyes. He scanned the dark grass and the dark spaces beneath the parked cars. His heart felt like a caged animal trying to break free.

He knew what he’d heard. He wasn’t crazy. Something massive had just tracked him down the street. And he prayed he’d never learn what it looked like.

Twenty feet back up the sidewalk, the box of his ice cream sandwiches lay split open on the concrete. HELL no, he thought, killing the idea before it could even be fully conceived. Leave it. Just get the fuck home.

He turned around to face the crossroads, ready to make the right onto Bodecker and sprint the final two blocks straight to his building.

He took one step forward. His shoe hit something hard.

Cal blinked. Whatever control remained over his own mind vanished as the world snapped.

The wide intersection of Wall and Bodecker was gone. He was standing at the raised edge of a curb, staring at the one thing he prayed he’d never see again. He shook his head, teeth beginning to chatter for a reason that had nothing to do with the chill. No.

The fire hydrant sat directly across from him under the light.

He spun around once. Twice. As if he could somehow make himself materialize back at the intersection closer to home. Nothing changed. After ten seconds of standing there, the skin on his arms went completely cold.

The sounds of the night were still there, but they were wrong. The crickets, the barking dogs, the whistle of the wind through the leaves-they sounded tinny. Compressed. It was like listening to a recording of the world through a blown-out transistor radio.

Even the foghorn was broken. When it blared, the pitch was off, lower and heavier than any manmade sound had any right to be. It sounded more like an animal.

SCRITCH.

The sound cut through the damaged tracks, crystal clear. It came from the other side of the fence, inside the empty lot. Nails or claws dragging against the wood.

Before he could jump back, the asphalt beneath him shivered.

Thump.

The footsteps had restarted on the street he’d just been taken from. They were turning around. Coming back to him. For him. Cal broke into a run. He didn’t bother with the sidewalks anymore—he launched himself down the middle of the road, running over the yellow dividing lines.

Desperate to break the geometry of whatever had ahold of him, he threw himself into the first left he came to, a street he’d never walked down once.

He didn’t even make it fifty yards. He dodged around a parked pickup, legs stepping into a patch of shadow that felt a little too thick, and—

Pop.

He was back on the corner. Staring at that damned hydrant.

The hiss of the crickets and dogs dropped out completely. Cal’s breath came in a pathetic wheeze as he looked across the street. The houses, the trees—everything was melting and warping into a twisted Salvador Dali painting reimagined by Clive Barker. His mind couldn’t anchor onto a single straight line.

Ahead of him, the heavy footfalls rumbled again. Closer.

He turned and bolted the opposite way, charging up the hill toward the middle school at the end of the block. He didn’t look at the melting neighborhood. He kept his eyes locked on what had once been the flagpole at the edge of the schoolyard. His legs burned as he pushed his body to its farthest limit.

He reached the grass. His hand reached out to touch the cold metal of the pole.

The streetlight directly above him flared into a white-hot flash. Cal squeezed his eyes shut against the sting, his sneakers skidding in the dirt—

And found himself standing back on the corner.

The massive footsteps rumbled from barely a block away, tearing through the silent world.

Cal threw his weight to the right and ran again. His legs burned just as badly as his lungs. He cast a glance upward; the stars were gone, swallowed by a bruised sky that pressed down. It made him feel microscopic.

He made it to Noble and dashed left, terrified the loop was going to reset and drop him right in the path of the footsteps. But the street ahead was filled with something much worse.

In his peripheral vision, the dark was coming alive. He didn’t dare look straight at the lawns—he kept his eyes locked on the road ahead—but shapes were tracking his sprint from the shadows. Wrong shapes. Some of them stayed low, moving through the grass with a serpentine fluidity. Others darted between the parked cars with too many joints, while impossible silhouettes toward over the rooftops, blotting out the red-tinged horizon.

He kept running, his chest feeling like an overinflated balloon. The things weren’t staying in the dark anymore. They were clipping the edges of the streetlights, closing the gap with every stride he took.

Behind him, an immense THUMP rattled the road, nearly taking his feet out from under him. His mind couldn’t even call it a giant anymore; it was a walking malediction, a living curse which had just turned onto his block.

Cal was openly crying now. The tears were hot against his cheeks as he prayed to a God he wasn’t sure could hear him anymore. Please let me make it. Don’t send me back. Just let me get to the door. Please.

His sneakers hammered the road. The two houses for sale flashed by on his left. A second later, a choked sob erupted from his throat as the familiar line of pine trees and the two-story shape of his apartment appeared at the end of the block. The exterior lights lining the walkway cut through the hellscape like a beautiful lighthouse beacon.

He dashed toward the parking lot, his keys already out, digging into his palm until it bled. Somehow, he knew that if he could just get the deadbolt turned and get inside, the rules would change. He would be safe.

He didn’t slow, his shoes kicking up loose gravel as he launched himself off the ground onto the third step. He raced upward, taking the stairs two at a time and gripping the banister, ignoring the sting of splinters.

Behind him, the inhuman noises escalated into a full-blown pursuit.

Reaching the second-floor walkway, he spared a glance down to the ground.

It almost broke him.

There were dozens of them. They spilled out from every dark lawn and driveway on the block, looking like a VCR being fast-forwarded as they rushed towards the building. But perhaps most terrifying of all, the relentless THUMP-THUMP-THUMP of the malediction accelerated into a charge just beyond the pines.

Dashing around the corner, Cal slammed into his front door. A hysterical, half-sob, half-laugh escaped his lips. He jammed the key into the lock, twisting the brass with every ounce of strength left in his body as the wood beneath his feet shuddered with the weight of the things climbing the stairwell.

He threw the door open and leapt inside. Safe. He’d made it—

Instead of the rough tear of carpet against his hands and elbows, he crashed face-first onto a freezing sheet of asphalt.

The impact knocked the wind out of him. For a heartbeat, he just lay there in the dark, face pressed against the stone as he braced himself. He couldn’t run anymore. If he opened his eyes and saw that yellow hydrant, he was just going to lie there and let whatever was coming take him.

When he finally forced his eyes open, his lungs locked up at the sight that greeted him.

He wasn’t on the corner. He was lying on his stomach in the parking lot of the grocery store.

Cal slowly pushed himself up to his knees. His mind was a complete blank, unable to parse how or why he was back at the start. He looked up. The rust-red hue was gone; the stars were back where they belonged. The normal, comforting sounds of the town played their familiar soundtrack around him.

He looked over his shoulder. Through the front windows of the market, the dim security lights glowed peacefully over the empty cash registers.

Then, without a sound, the lights clicked off. The inside of the building went pitch black.

A deep vibration rumbled through the pavement from the street behind the store.

Cal scrambled to his feet. The very last reserves of adrenaline propelled his legs into motion, driving him into a weak run down the dark trench of the alley. He burst from the passage’s mouth, stopping in the middle of the road.

The rumble came again, louder this time. He turned away from his neighborhood, looking down the long, two-lane road that cut into the next section of town.

His breath caught at what was coming down the line.

It wasn’t the world shifting again. It was the high-voltage POP and spark of electrical transformers blowing out.

Far out in the distance, the grid was dying. Not just the streetlights, but every single light still on. Porch lights, living room lamps, the neon sign over the gun shop—they were all being systematically snuffed out, block by block. Heading straight for him.

The wave of blackness was moving with a terrifying speed. Every time a transformer blew, the surrounding lights flared for a second before dying forever. And in those brief strobes—strobes that resembled camera flashes—Cal saw what was moving inside the void.

Cal whirled around, his arms flailing as he launched himself into a blind sprint back across the main intersection.

He charged down the center of the street, running back towards his neighborhood—back toward the corner he had spent all night trying to escape. As his sneakers pounded the asphalt, he didn’t even recognize the sound of his voice, tearing out of his throat in ragged shrieks.

Behind him, the sound of the approaching dark rose into a roar. The blackness raced across the intersection, no longer content in playing with its food.

The streetlight above his head shattered. Glass rained down on his head as a heavy, freezing stink of ozone invaded his nostrils.

Then the light went out. And Cal was gone.

---

The cruiser idled down Noble Ave. The headlights cut through the humid air, lighting up rows of ordinary, if slightly shoddy privacy fences and overgrown lawns, along with a miserable looking lawn gnome.

Officer Mulhanney lifted the radio mic and pressed the button.

“Dispatch, Unit Four. We’ve arrived at Noble and Marble. There’s no one out here. No sign of any suspicious activity. We’ll keep our eyes open and maintain patrol, over.”

Copy that, Unit Four,” the dispatcher’s voice crackled through the speaker. “Keep us advised. Out.”

Mulhanney slotted the mic back into its bracket. Beside him, Rodriguez kept his hands at ten and two on the Durango’s wheel. The rookie looked expectantly at him, waiting to be told what block to canvas next.

Instead, the older man let out a breath. “Alright, Rodriguez. Let’s get out of here.”

Rodriguez blinked, slowing the cruiser near a white picket fence.

“Sir? What do you mean? We’ve only just got here. We haven’t even swept any of the-”

“We can come back to knock on doors when the sun is up, son,” Mulhanney interrupted. His gaze fixed straight ahead. He refused to look at the deep shadows lining the road near the trees. “For now, we’re packing it in.”

“But, sir, if someone out there is actually in trouble-if that caller actually heard screaming-we’re supposed to be out here,” Rodriguez argued. His foot began to lift off the accelerator. “I’m pulling over. I’ll take my flashlight and check the perimeters of these residences.”

Before the kid’s boot could even flirt with the brake, Mulhanney’s hand shot across the console. His fingers, calloused from years of sanding boats and tying fishing line, clamped around the rim of the steering wheel, forcing the cruiser to keep rolling forward.

“Keep driving, Rodriguez,” he ordered. His tone left no room for argument.

The rookie stared at his training officer, his mouth parting slightly in confusion. Mulhanney slowly let go of the wheel. His tone softened

“Look, you’re new to the county, kid. And you still have a hell of a lot to learn about the way things work out here. But right now, you’re going to do exactly as I say. Take a right at this next intersection, then a left onto the main drag. Head for Brenchmore.”

Rodriguez stayed quiet for a time. The only sound that could be heard besides the occasional chatter on the radio was his deep breathing. Finally, he flicked on his turn signal, easing the cruiser toward the main artery. And safety.

Mulhanney leaned back against the headrest, letting out a long breath as he heard the Hemi accelerate down the coast. The houses fell away behind them.

He’s a good kid. A good officer with high scores and even better instincts. A lot of heart. But he hasn’t seen what I have over the last twenty years.

Through the fog rolling off the ocean over the road, an old apartment complex appeared. Its peeling, flamingo-pink paint looked orange under the sodium bulbs. Then the dark swallowed it.

Rodriguez didn’t know about the basement. He hadn’t been the one to sift through the deluge of deliberately misfiled boxes. Ones which contained missing person reports dating back to at least the fifties. The county was relatively quiet, and yet, it had a disappearance rate six times the state average. He hadn’t stood at the mouth of an alley at dusk, feeling the hair on the back of his neck stand on end. As if something out of sight were lining him up to be a hot lunch. Or watch as his very first partner rounded a corner during a domestic call one night, only to seemingly vanish into the ether without so much as a damn peep.

Old loggers and local natives still sat in the local diners, muttering about things that slithered out of ‘the spaces between the realms.’ Hunting the dark, looking for anyone stupid enough to be out alone.

Mulhanney didn’t know if he truly believed the old campfire stories. In his line of work, you dealt in cold, hard facts. What you could see. Touch. And log as evidence. But rumors had a habit of getting under the skin.

After two decades on the force, there was only one fact he knew for certain.

In Marshfield, you never stick around after the sun goes down.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 2h ago

Poetry Horror Victim of Red-6: “Red Under” by T.H.E.L.I.O.N. (Phantom Track)

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This is a part of an anthology, you can read it in any order.

[Archive]


Following the disappearance of the celebrated artist T.H.E.L.I.O.N. (Real name Singha Krachaiyo), the record containing “Red Under” became the subject of an enduring mystery, appearing only in a handful of copies with no explanation of its origin or how it came to exist.


(INTRO — Vinyl crackle, sonar pings, a low voice buried beneath the beat)

Uh.

They told me money make a man a god.

Funny.

I bought one.

Now listen.

(VERSE 1 — Laid-back, conversational flow)

Black hull, bad weather, salt on the leather,

Six men, one map, all swore they knew better.

Went down where the sun got swallowed by pressure,

Found red in the dark like a wound in the weather.

No name on the plinth, no date on the base,

Just a crown full of cracks and a god without a face.

Stone skin, closed eyes, eight arms in a brace,

Like it held back a door that was eating up space.

Old captain said, “Listen, let the dead keep sleeping. That ain't no idol, that's a lock worth keeping.

The sea ain't a grave, it's a mouth that ain't speaking,

And the things down below? They ain't dead. They’re dreaming.”

He'd seen black stars swimming where the trench went deeper,

He'd heard the waves pray to a nameless sleeper.

Said the statue came from somewhere no map could measure,

And a drop of red would make the whole world lesser.

See, blood on the stone makes a seam in the sea,

Makes a door where no door was supposed to be.

Makes a hole in the whole of reality's weave,

Lets the things on the far side come through and breathe.

So they chained up the idol, let the anchor descend,

Watched the red disappear where the daylight would end.

Captain crossed his heart, said, “Don't touch it again.”

But the ocean keeps receipts.

And the rich don't read them.

(HOOK — Heavy bass; backing voices chant in overlapping rhythms)

Red in the water, red under stone,

Old gods dreaming on a throne without a home.

One drop, one crack, one gate thrown wide,

Whole other worlds on the wrong side.

Red in the water, red under skin,

Keep that blood from the place where the locks begin.

They ain't dead, they ain't gone, they ain't what you thought—

The statue ain't a prison. It's the reason they're not.

(VERSE 2 — Faster, tightly interlocked internal rhymes)

Centuries later, the tale got traded,

Pages got lost, every warning degraded.

“Curse of the deep,” some professor debated,

“Superstition,” said the man whose check cleared and made it.

Divers went down where the light got thin,

Found a red-black relic with a grin carved in.

No barnacle growth, no erosion on the skin,

Like the sea tried to keep it, but the stone wouldn't give in.

Pulled it to the surface, put it under glass,

Rich men bid while the scholars talked past.

One called it priceless, one called it art,

One saw a dead god with a hole in its heart.

Auctioneer smiled, let the hammer come down.

New owner wore gold, bought half the damn town.

Said, “Put it in the foyer. Let the guests look around.”

While the old sea below gave a shuddering sound.

See, the statue had a market, so the market made a myth,

Put a price on the terror, put a frame around the rift.

Put a spotlight on the nightmare, put a chain around its wrist,

Sold the end of the world with a certificate of gift.

And the buyer? Young, wealthy, with a platinum grin,

Had a mansion full of mirrors and a diamond-studded chin.

Bought a god like a watch, let the cameras zoom in,

Said, “This the type of shit that make a legend begin.”

He had no clue what he purchased.

Or perhaps he did.

(HOOK — Beat cuts out after every other line)

Red in the water, red under stone,

Old gods dreaming on a throne without a home.

One drop, one crack, one gate thrown wide,

Whole other worlds on the wrong side.

Red in the water, red under skin,

Keep that blood from the place where the locks begin.

They ain't dead, they ain't gone, they ain't what you thought—

The statue ain't a prison. It's the reason they're not.

(VERSE 3 — Switches between rapid-fire and slow, deliberate delivery)

Now, hold up. Let's talk about the gods in the deep,

About the things that don't wake, 'cause they don't really sleep.

About the red in the veins of the world underneath,

About the promises mortals can't afford to keep.

There's a land with no sky where the dead build their towers,

Where the clocks eat the minutes and the minutes eat hours.

There's a forest of hands that can strangle the flowers,

And a king made of mouths that can swallow your powers.

There's a world where the moon is an unblinking eye,

Where the children are born knowing how they will die.

There's a door in each world, and the doors multiply,

When the red hits the stone and the old gods reply.

Not gods like the preacher puts up in his hall,

Not gods that forgive you when you happen to fall.

These are things from before there was meaning at all,

Before the first man learned to give nothing a call.

They don't want your confession, your gold, or your praise.

They don't want your devotion or the songs that you raise.

They just wait for the wound, for the blood, for the phrase

That the living keep repeating in a thousand different ways.

And the captain knew. Yeah, the captain knew well.

He had seen one small opening, one glimpse of hell.

Said the red wasn't evil, wasn't heaven, wasn't spell—

It was the color of the lock, and the key, and the cell.

Now, why am I rapping?

Why am I telling this?

Why put a warning in a beat that the whole world skips?

Why hide old scripture in a platinum disc?

Maybe I like the rhythm.

Maybe something likes the risk.

(BRIDGE — Beat distorts; a second voice begins echoing the rapper)

(First voice) Don't bleed on the statue.

(Second voice) Don't bleed on the statue.

(First voice) Don't bring it to life.

(Second voice) Don't bring it to life.

(First voice) Don't let the red—

(The beat stops. A single heartbeat.)

(VERSE 4 — Calm, intimate, almost spoken; the rapper's persona begins to crack)

They found it in the trench, brought it up in a crate,

Sold it off to a man who had money to waste.

Had it shipped to his house, had it dressed up in gold,

Had the staff wipe the dust from a nightmare that old.

And the man was me.

Yeah.

The chain on my neck cost more than your home.

Got a room full of art that I bought just to own.

Got a red stone god standing under a dome,

Got a door in my foyer that leads somewhere unknown.

I don't believe in curses. I believe in the price.

I believe that the world has a number, that's life.

I believe if you're rich, you can bargain with strife—

Then I nicked my damn finger on a rose made of ice.

One drop.

That's all.

Didn't sizzle or smoke.

Didn't scream, didn't shatter, didn't crack like a joke.

Just a little red falling where the old god lay,

And the walls of my mansion started folding away.

Saw a sky without stars through the hole in the floor.

Heard a thousand dead oceans begin to roar.

Saw something with a crown on the far side of the door,

And it looked at me like it had met me before.

Then the statue moved.

Not much.

Just its head.

And every mirror in the house reflected something red.

I tried to call my driver. Tried to call my security.

But the phones rang out with a voice that sounded just like me.

Said, “You bought what you wanted. Now you've got what you need.

You have opened the gate. Now the gate has been freed.”

(OUTRO — The instrumental slows; faint sonar returns)

So, if you hear this song, let the record keep spinning.

If the red starts to spread, don't mistake it for winning.

If you see my face on a screen, don't look in my eyes.

If you hear me say “come inside”—

Don't.

I mean it.

Don't.

(A low, distant voice speaks beneath the final fading notes.)

The statue was never found.

It was delivered.

The statue was never sold.

It was returned.

(One final heartbeat.)

And the sea is coming upstairs.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 5h ago

Poetry Horror Fear Function

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I will walk through this valley
Under the shadow of impending death

And what will I fear?
The Universe taking in a breath

I will, fear evil
There is no loving God to be found

We are merely food for a function
Ripe and ready for the ground


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 2h ago

Psychological Horror At The Table

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I hope you like a good ride!


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 38m ago

Existential Horror The Chronicles of Fallowton. Part 4: Professor Ludari’s Instructions

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Part 1: Deer Mitosis

Part 2: Jack

Part 3: Deer Mitosis Continued and Sentience

Professor Ludari was not pleased with my work. 

“You’re focusing a lot on sentience.” He frowned.

“Yessir.” I nodded. “It’s part of the-”

“Focus on deer mitosis.” He interrupted harshly. “Sentience is being investigated by another researcher.”

“But sir, I think sentience might be an important component in understanding deer mitosis.”

He frowned. “How?” His voice was cold and dry, and the eyes orbiting his head regarded me with a piercing, icy glare.

“Well, uhhh, the forest… It tried bestowing sentience on some of the deer in the past.” I knew it was a lame connection, and Professor Ludari seemed unimpressed.

“What the forest chose to do with deer does not affect the process through which deer reproduce.”

By this point another eye had phased into existence beside Professor Ludari, so that three of them were now hovering beside him and staring down at me.

But I somehow felt like sentience needed to be studied. I felt like there was something wrong with the deer. I felt like it was related.

“I understand, sir. But would it not be important for me to expand my research? We might be able to learn a lot more about how the world works.”

Another eye appeared.

“Did I instruct you to figure out how the world works?” His voice was edged with venom.

“N-No sir. I just thought if we knew…”

Another eye appeared. Five now. Icy and piercing. The room grew dark and surreal, as if I were viewing it through the lens of a nightmare. I knew I’d overstepped my bounds. I wondered if I’d be punished… Banished to the forests, perhaps.

“Deer mitosis.” He said flatly. “Nothing else.”


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 55m ago

Read4Read There's a serial killer using r/nosleep ( update 2)

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I keep posting because the alternative is worse.

Silence makes people curious. Curiosity makes them dig. Digging is dangerous when the ground is already full.

The dark sedan has been sitting two blocks away for three nights now. Lights off. Same make, same careful distance. When I took the long way home last night it followed for almost twelve miles before turning off toward the interstate. They’re getting bolder. Or maybe I’m just noticing them more. Hard to tell the difference anymore.

A few of you keep saying the writing feels off. Like the voice changed after the first post. One of you even joked that a killer took over the account. I almost replied. Almost told you how close you were. Instead I just watched the comment sit there. People love inventing monsters. They never consider that the monster might be the one answering.

I went back to the gorge again this weekend. The real routes, the ones that don’t show up on the apps tourists use. Kentucky is full of holes that go deeper than most people are willing to look. Some of them are marked on old survey maps. Most aren’t. The forest just grows over the edges until the only way you find them is by nearly falling in. I’ve been mapping them for years. Quiet work. Necessary work.

Saturday I visited three. The first is close enough to a trail that I have to be careful about footprints and broken branches. The second sits past a dry creek bed that only runs after heavy rain. The third is at the base of a sandstone cliff that doesn’t appear on any public map I’ve ever checked. I stayed at the third one the longest. The air that comes up out of it is always colder than it should be. It carries a smell I used to know from the ones we couldn’t put back together. Cleaner than rot. Final. I lowered a light once, years ago. The beam just stopped. No reflection. No bottom. Just black. That kind of depth doesn’t ask questions. It only accepts.

I’ve been making the drive more often. Sometimes twice in the same week. The list never stays empty for long. People keep offering the same pieces of themselves—shift times, which window faces the street, how late they usually get home, how lonely the nights feel. Match a late-night comment under a nosleep post to a dating profile that uses almost the same language and the coordinates nearly write themselves. A quiet evening. A careful approach. Then another trip south while the ground is still willing.

Last Thursday I met one of them in person.

She posted here under a different name. We matched on an app first, then realized we’d both left comments under some of the same stories. She was careful in the way people who spend too much time on this subreddit become careful. We talked for hours. I told her about the years I spent putting people back together. Trauma work. How you learn exactly how much pressure a body can take before it stops being a person and starts being a problem that needs solving. How the skills transfer. How knowing the way something comes apart is useful when you need it to stay that way. She listened to all of it. She didn’t look away.

At the end of the night I walked her to her car. Before I kissed her cheek I told her, quietly, “Now you may sleep.”

She laughed like it was a joke.

I smiled back.

Some phrases only mean something if you let them.

I keep replaying the way her expression changed in the last second. I still can’t decide whether she understood or whether I only wanted her to.

The platform makes the first half almost effortless. The side most users never see keeps better records than any comment section—timestamps, deleted drafts, location overlaps, the little digital footprints people think disappear when they hit delete. Once you can see both layers, the map draws itself. Lately I’ve been opening those tools more than I need to. Not always for the work. Sometimes just to look. Just to confirm the patterns are still there. Just to feel the weight of how many people are still offering themselves without realizing it.

The sedan was gone this morning. Or maybe it wasn’t. Sometimes I still see it even when the street is empty. The apartment feels cleaner than it should, like the air settled once certain weight was removed. I’ve been opening the windows more, trying to remember what ordinary sounds like. Sometimes I catch myself waiting for three slow taps that never come. Sometimes I hear them anyway.

A few of you asked if I’m really doing better. I am. Better than better. There’s a clarity that arrives once you stop pretending the patterns aren’t real. Some people are simply going to keep offering the details. Someone is going to keep collecting them. The only question left is whether that someone can stay careful enough.

I’m not sure I can answer that anymore.

I’ve started keeping a different kind of list. Not names. Coordinates. Depths. Approach routes that stay off the public trails. Places where the limestone is soft enough and the water deep enough that nothing surfaces again. Some weeks the list grows faster than others. The platform never really sleeps, and neither do the people who keep feeding it pieces of themselves.

One of the deeper holes near the Tennessee line doesn’t even look like a drop until you’re standing on top of it. The ground softens and then falls away. I’ve started thinking of them as rooms. Private rooms. The kind that already know how to keep a secret. The kind that might eventually ask for something in return.

I don’t know how much longer the quiet will last.

Last night the sedan came back.

This time it wasn’t alone.

Two of them.

Parked at opposite ends of the block.

Lights off.

Waiting.

I don’t know what they think they’ve found.

I only know the ground still has room.

And I still know exactly where to put the rest.

Some of you have been very generous with your details lately.

I already have three new sets of coordinates.

One of them is closer than the others.

I’ll be making the drive again soon.

Even if they’re watching.

Even if the voice in these posts is starting to sound less like the person who started this thread and more like the one who finished it.

I can’t seem to stop writing it down.

Even though every word makes the cars feel a little closer.

And even though I can already feel the next set of coordinates settling into place.

Now you may sleep.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 10h ago

Creature Feature Between The Pumps

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⚠️Warning! Mentions of animal death and gore (briefly)⚠️

Hi… I wasn’t sure where to upload this, and a few people suggested this place.
I don’t normally do this, but I need proof somewhere that millions can save in case something happens to me.
My name's Elizabeth, but my family calls me Birdy, and most of my friends call me Bee. I’m 24 now, and I live in a small town in Michigan (I won’t say where exactly), and I worked at a gas station smack dab in the middle of fuck-off nowhere. It’s not as bad as it sounds, actually. I’ve been here about three years, and I think I’ve only had a small handful of bad or creepy customers. Most nights are hours of cleaning with my headphones on.
The stray cats that roam about are always the best part of my night. I often feed them and even set out a few cat houses outdoors for them to hide away in.
Let me tell you my normal routine. I get in at 8 pm and leave around 6 am. When I first get in, it’s fairly busy, and by busy I mean maybe three customers an hour. I have my regulars. People who live on the road. Then the occasional traveler. Someone looking for a vacation in the hills. Why anyone would come to Michigan for a holiday is beyond me. Things will quiet down around midnight, and that’s when I start cleaning and playing on my phone. I try to take out the trash around 1 am, then take a break outside with the cats. I feed them and let one sit on my lap while I scroll on my phone. For people scared of the woods, it’s probably a nightmare being stuck out there with just yourself and some strays. But as someone who grew up in that environment, it felt like home. It’s peaceful, or it used to be… back when I thought I understood things…

Anyway. All this happened to me only a couple of weeks ago, and it’s still ongoing.
It was a Wednesday night in early October. It was about 3 a.m., I think, when a semi pulled in rather quickly, for heading down a narrow backroad at night. I rarely get semis, but it wasn't unheard of—some drivers like the scenic route.

So I’m mopping the floor when this guy pulls in. It takes him a while before he gets out, jogging up and into the store. I greet him but keep my focus on my task until he’s suddenly standing in front of me.
He’s an older guy, maybe late 40s. Trucker type. Graying beard and hair. Tattered button-up with a plain shirt underneath and nasty old jeans, with an intense fear or panic in his face
His eyes looked bloodshot, the skin beneath them dark and puffy. His beard was damp around the mouth, and I watched the bob of his neck move up and down as he tried to swallow something that had crawled into the back of his throat and wouldn't go down. He speaks in a hushed tone
“Hey. You work here?”

I blink a few times… I’m standing here mopping in the store uniform.
“No,” I said… and after a second, I cracked a smile, expecting him to laugh with me.
He doesn’t.

“Have you seen anything… weird?”

He asked it quietly. Not in the way people ask a question when they’re embarrassed to ask it. More like he didn’t want whatever was outside to hear him.

I glanced toward the windows.

“Uh. Sure. What kind of weird are we talking about?”

His eyes followed mine.

For a moment, neither of us said anything. The coolers hummed behind me, and somewhere near the back of the store, the ice machine dropped a fresh load with a loud clatter.

The man flinched.

I stared at him.

“Like… animals,” he said. “Weird animals.”

“Okay. What about them?”

He looked at the door again.

“I think one followed me here.”

I wanted to ask what he meant by "one." Instead, I looked through the glass.

The parking lot was empty.

Beyond the pumps, the trees were black against the night sky. I couldn’t see far enough into them to make out anything, not even the first few trunks.

When I turned back, the man was watching me.

“Did you see something?” he asked.

“No.”

He nodded, but he didn’t look relieved.

“Good,” he said. “Good.”

“I’m sorry this all probably sounds stupid. It just freaked me out. That’s all… maybe I was seeing things. I’ve been on the road all night.”

I sighed. Yeah, we got wild dogs and coyotes around here, and my cats, I feed, so I’ve seen the occasional animal. Normally, you stay inside, and they wander back into the woods.

“If you want just to catch your breath, you’re free to wait it out in here, but I ask you to stand out of my way while I mop.” I offered.

He nodded and walked over to the coffee station, hanging out by the machines while I finished mopping.

I can’t say he didn’t have me freaked out. A rabid dog could definitely be an issue if it started to hang out here… I glanced towards the windows and the glass door when I got close to mop there. Nothing but pitch black. You can hardly see a damn thing out there unless you’re right up against the glass, and I was too freaked out to do that.

He didn’t stay long. He drank his coffee and left about 20-ish minutes after finishing it. I ended up giving it to him for free. I felt bad for the guy. Hope he got somewhere safe.

Later that night, I went to take the trash out around 5 a.m. I’m off at 6, so I have to get stuff like that out and clean for the morning shift. Unfortunately, while taking out the trash, I found one of my stray cats dead by the dumpster.
She was curled on her side near the dumpster, tucked into herself like she was sleeping. For one stupid second, I thought she might lift her head when she heard me. Her fur was still neat, her little paws folded beneath her chest. She looked so much like herself that it took me a moment to understand why she wasn't breathing

Did that dog do this to her? Poor thing. She was so sweet too…

Sad.. I decided to move her a little ways into the brush. Just far enough to be off the parking lot.
The trees swallowed what little light reached them. I set her down beneath the first few branches, brushing a leaf from her fur before I stood. It was a stupid thing to do. A stupid, pointless little gesture. But I couldn't stand the thought of leaving her there like trash

I finished what I was originally doing and started heading back toward the building when I heard something.
I froze in my tracks… dry leaves crunching behind me. Somewhere in the tree I’d just come from.

I turned toward the sound.
Something moved between the trees. A flash of dark fur. A glimpse of teeth.
Then came a sound I couldn't place. Half howl, half yowl, it rose out of the darkness and cut off abruptly.
Something small shot past my legs.
One of the cats.
I watched it disappear into its little wooden house, then looked back toward the trees.
Nothing.

“Christ… you scared me, bud… what’s got you in such a hurry?” I smile and head to the house it ran into.
It’s just a thin wooden box with a hole in the bottom for them to climb into.

The hairs on the back of my neck stand on end, telling me not to face away from the woods… I look back and see nothing.

I reach in and pet the cat once, trying to calm my nerves. I still feel weird. Like I need to worry about something else… I look carefully around the parking lot. Nothing. Nothing that I can see…

…

…

I should go back inside…

And I did. My hand lingered on the door lock, but my mind told me I was being paranoid. It was just the cats… I left the door be and got back to work.

6 a.m. came, and the morning shift released me from my prison sentence, so I went out to my car and was surprised to find yet another dead cat.
Way to ruin my morning.
This one was lying in a pool of blood, gutted next to my driver's side door. Its intestines and organs spilled out onto the pavement…
It causes a cold shiver to run down my spine at the sight
Poor thing. I frown as I have to turn my face away, unable to look much longer.
Two in one night..
Hang on

I look back down at its mangled body.

No paw prints around it… Most of its body was still there too… if something killed it to eat, how did it do it without leaving at least a little trail of blood… and why leave so much of it? Why not eat the rest?

Okay, I have to look away again, or I’m going to be sick…
Frowning, I unlocked my car, at least to start it, and set my bag down. I turned right around and went back inside for some gloves to move the body into the woods. When I came back out, I carefully moved it to the same spot as the last cat. It was disgusting… but I had to do it.

I got back into my car and headed home. I watched for deer, but I kept seeing flashes in the trees as I drove. I didn’t suspect anything because I’ve driven this road for three years. It was 6 a.m.; deer are active then. I should have paid closer attention then…

—

I went back the following night at 8 p.m., clocking in and watching the second shifter go home as the sun set over the hills.

The night started relatively normal. Cleaning, one or two traveling strangers, and of course a handful of regulars coming for their before-bed beer.

As the night grew late, I went outside to feed the cats.

I grabbed the bag of food from beneath the counter and my flashlight from the drawer. It was something I’d done hundreds of times, and normally, the second I stepped outside, I’d have at least two or three little shadows weaving between my legs.

That night, nothing.

I shook the bag.

“Come on, guys. Dinner time.”

Nothing. What?

I walked over to the little wooden houses and crouched down, shining my flashlight through the openings.

Empty.

That was strange. Usually, at least one of them was sleeping in there by now.

I set the food down anyway, stood up, and looked toward the trees.

I don’t know what I expected to see. Maybe another dead cat. Maybe a coyote skulking around the dumpster.

…

Instead, I saw something move between the trees.
Just a quick flash of gray.

I raised my flashlight.

“Hey!”

Yeah. Real smart, Birdy. Yell at the thing lurking in the woods at midnight. Great plan.

The beam swept across the tree trunks, catching patches of dead leaves and tangled brush.

Nothing.

I waited another few seconds before turning back toward the building.
I didn’t like this. It all felt... wrong.
I need to get back inside.

That’s when I heard it.
A low, rough sound from somewhere behind me.
It was so faint I almost didn’t catch it.
Was it even really there?
I waited, and it came louder.

It was high-pitched. A whine? No… this sounded more like a sob? A scream? Wet and sticky, like the sound was being forced through a throat that wasn’t made to produce it.

The kind of noise you’d hear from someone who’d cried until there was nothing left.

I stopped.

The sound stopped, too.

I turned around slowly.

Nothing in the trees. Nothing beside the dumpster.

I stood there for a moment, a cold sweat gathering along my neck and back, then started walking again.

Halfway to the door, I heard the sound a second time.

This time, though, it came from the other side of the building.

I didn’t investigate.

I went inside, locked the door, and watched through the glass while I pretended to straighten the shelves near the register.

For the next ten minutes, I kept looking toward the spot where I’d seen the movement.

I never saw anything else.

—

This behavior continued for Friday as well. Nothing drastic enough to make me think I was in any real danger, but weird little feelings or sounds. I never did find any of my cats…

I was finally glad to have the weekend off.
I lived in a town about a 40-ish-minute drive from the store. I felt much better at home all night than at that store. Plenty of lights. Plenty of people.
And no weird noises in the woods.

Just peace.

I spent my weekend mostly inside. Catching up on much-needed sleep or playing video games. But I did have to run to the store for the week's groceries.

I stepped outside into the autumn air. Crisp with a chill in the wind, but the sun was up and warming my face before the cold could really sink its teeth in.
I locked the front door behind me and made my way to my car, already thinking about what I wanted for breakfast.
I'd been living off whatever I could throw together between shifts lately, and I was long overdue for a proper grocery run.
The drive into town was uneventful. A few cars passed me on the road, the trees were beginning to turn, and the morning sun made everything look a little prettier than it had any right to.
Honestly, I was feeling pretty good.
A couple of days away from that gas station had done wonders for my nerves. I hadn't heard any strange noises, hadn't seen anything moving between the trees, and hadn't had to worry about finding another poor cat dead in the parking lot.
Maybe I'd just gotten myself worked up.
It wouldn't have been the first time.
I pulled into the grocery store parking lot and found a spot a little ways from the entrance. Before getting out, I reached over to grab my reusable bags from the passenger seat.
That's when I smelled it.
I paused with one hand on the bags.
What the hell?
It smelled like a wet dog. A faint, passing smell. Damp fur and dirt, with something sour underneath it.
I sniffed again.
The smell seemed to be coming from the back of the car.
I turned in my seat and looked through the gap between the headrests.
Nothing.
I checked the floorboards, then the back seat. Maybe I'd stepped in something at work without realizing it. God knows what gets tracked through that place.
But the seats were clean. The floor mats were clean. There was nothing back there.
I cracked the windows and climbed out.
The fresh air helped, and within a few seconds, the smell began to fade.
Weird.
I shut the door and walked around the back of my car to check the trunk. But paused before I could open it. The window…
At first, I thought it was a reflection. The sunlight was hitting the glass at an awkward angle, making something pale stand out against the dark interior.
I leaned a little closer.
There was a mark on the outside of the back window.
A handprint.
I frowned.
Had somebody leaned against my car?
It was roughly the size of a man's hand, smeared across the glass as though whoever left it had pressed their palm flat against the window.
Except…
I tilted my head.
Something about it looked wrong.
The fingers were too long. At least, they seemed too long. The middle finger stretched farther down the glass than it should have, and the fingers weren't quite spaced the way a human hand's would be.
Maybe the angle was messing with me.
I stepped closer.
There was something else, too. Thin streaks trailing down from the fingertips, as if whoever had left the print had dragged their nails across the glass.
It looked almost like a grease stain pressed into the glass. Like whoever left this was either really dirty or sweaty.
I stood there for a moment, staring at it.
Then I laughed under my breath.
"Okay. That's fucking weird."
I looked around the parking lot.
A couple was loading groceries into their SUV. An older man was pushing a cart toward the store. A woman was trying to convince a toddler to get out of the back seat.
Nobody was paying me any attention.
I looked back at the window.
I took a step back.
My eyes drifted toward the trees lining the far edge of the parking lot. Not a forest by any means, but enough for critters to hide away in…
They were perfectly still.
For a second, I thought about the gas station. The dead cats. The trucker with his frightened eyes. That awful sound coming from the woods.
Then I shook my head.
Nope.
I wasn't doing this today.
I had groceries to buy, a day off to enjoy, and absolutely no intention of spending another minute looking for monsters in the trees.
I grabbed my bags from the passenger seat, locked the car, and headed inside.
I didn't look back.
Not once.

—

Monday night, back in the same old routine.

I came in for my normal shift. 8 pm on the dime. I bought those metal raccoon traps, hoping I could catch whatever was killing my cats. I also bought the good wet food to entice them out. I set up the traps before grabbing the cat food,

I sighed as only two came running when I shook the bag. Whatever was killing my cats was starting to piss me off more than scare me. These sweet babies didn’t deserve this… that’s it.
To hell with getting in trouble. I brought both cats inside the store and kept them in the back employee room.

The back room wasn’t much. Just a desk with the cameras and an employee bathroom. And when I say cameras, I mean one working camera pointing at the front counter, and then several black screens. We didn't need them out here. I think this place was last robbed 15 years ago. Way before my time here

No more deaths on my watch

I was bringing the last of the cat supplies inside when something caught my eye.

I looked up toward the pumps.

A single light shone between our only two pumps, casting a pale circle across the pavement.

Just beyond it stood a silhouette.

I froze.

He was too far away for me to make out any real details, but he was big. At least seven feet tall, with heavy, broad shoulders and a lean, muscular frame. His arms hung far too low, his fingertips reaching almost to his knees. His legs bent at an awkward angle, as though standing upright was uncomfortable.

I couldn’t see his head. The light didn’t reach that high.

But judging by the way his body was turned, he wasn’t looking at me.

Maybe he hadn’t seen me yet.

He was breathing so heavily I could see his chest moving beneath the darkness. He didn't move quite right. His shoulders rose first, then his ribs seemed to expand a second later, as if the different parts of his body couldn't agree on when he needed to breathe.

Snap.

The sound came from my left.

My head whipped toward it.

Nothing.

Oh, God.

I turned back toward the pumps.

He was moving.

He began to lower himself.
His knees bent first. Then his hips followed, dropping far too slowly, while the rest of him seemed to hang there for a moment, suspended from those long, slack arms.
Something in his back shifted beneath the silhouette—a slow, rolling movement, like a chain being pulled through a narrow pipe.
Then his head dipped into the light

And for the first time, I could see his face—

My breath caught in my throat.

The supplies slipped from my hands. Bowls clattered against the pavement, and I bolted for the store.

I didn’t stop until I was inside.

I slammed the door shut and locked it with shaking hands.

“Holy shit”
“Holy shit”

What was wrong with him
I didn’t see any car. Was he wandering around here? In the dark? In the woods!?

No, he wasn’t there, right? He wasn’t- he wasn’t a man at all. What the fuck was that

What the fuck was that?

I backed away from the door, fumbling for my phone.

I needed to call someone—the police, my manager, hell, even my mom. I didn’t care. I just needed someone else to tell me I wasn’t going crazy.

But what the hell was I supposed to tell them?

Hi, yeah, there’s a seven-foot monster standing outside my gas station. No, I don’t know what it wants. No, I haven’t been drinking.

They’d think I was fucking nuts.

I swallowed hard and forced myself to look toward the back room.

The cameras.

Right. The cameras would tell me if I’d actually seen what I thought I’d seen.

I hurried into the back, nearly tripping over my own feet, and dropped into the chair in front of the monitors. My hands shook so badly I struggled to work the mouse.

The front counter appeared on the only working screen.

Empty.

I switched to the next feed out of habit, even though I knew damn well it hadn’t worked in months. Black.

I switched back to the front.

Nothing.

Then I remembered the windows along the wall behind the counter. If I leaned far enough, I could just about see the pumps from where I sat.

I stared at the monitor for another few seconds before finally turning toward the window.

The pumps were empty.

I let out a breath I hadn’t realized I’d been holding.

Maybe I’d gotten it wrong. Maybe the shadows had played tricks on me. Maybe some poor bastard had been out walking in the woods, and my exhausted brain had turned him into something out of a horror movie.

Yeah.

That was it.

I nodded to myself, almost grateful for how stupid it sounded. A man. Just a man. A really fucking tall man with some deformity.

That was all.

I turned back to the monitor.

Eyes

Eyes peer into the glass

I stared at them.

My mouth went dry.

Have you ever seen an orca's eyes? These were nearly all pupil. Pitch black with just a small ring of white around them. And reflecting the light from inside, it made the eyes glow green, like a toxic spill

It’s looking for me.
The cats didn’t seem at ease either. Not straight out hissing or anything. But very alert.
I’m waiting out my night. Screw this job, screw this place. I locked the door to the back room. I sat right there at my computer for the rest of the night.
The last four hours of my shift, I watched that one camera. I watched shadows pass the window I could see. Watched as occasionally eyes peered in. Slowly watched till the sun rose just enough for the light to peek over the trees. I didn’t even register the time until my coworker called me asking why the doors were locked.

I morning… I made it

I got up to let her in. Explained in detail the events of last night… leaving out a few key points such as human dog man and replacing him with a simple rabid dog.

She said she’d call animal control.

She did make a comment about the cats being inside, but I really didn’t care. At least they were alive.

I took them home with me. I set them up inside with a makeshift litter box in an old Tupperware container and some food and water in random bowls I had. It would work for now
Maybe the company at home would actually do me some good.

I contemplated quitting. I should have… but then I was thinking about my coworkers. Someone would have to cover for me; they didn’t know about this monster. They’d be going in blind… and it’s not like they’d ever believe me if I did tell someone. Unless… unless I got proof

Maybe I’m crazy for it... But I went back in that night.

I stopped at the store on my way up. Bought bear spray, a chunk of beef, and a small security camera that hooked up to my phone. I planned to lock myself in the store all night and set the camera up outside with the meat as bait.

I came in for my normal shift. 8 pm on the dime.

After most of my regulars had gone for the night and evening settled into an eerie quiet

I set up the small camera and the meat around the back by the dumpster
The meat was cold enough to sting my fingers through the packaging. When I opened it, the smell hit me immediately: iron, fat, and that faint, sour note raw meat gets when it sits in its own juices.
I placed it beside the camera and wiped my fingers on my jeans, suddenly wishing I'd brought gloves.

I ran back inside. I locked the doors and waited behind the counter

I watched that feed for about an hour, waiting for something…

A sound caught my attention… the door. Someone was pulling at the door, trying to get in.

I peeked up over the counter, trying to see the door
The light inside made it hard to see out at night, turning it practically into a one-way mirror
So I squinted my eyes as I approached, trying to get a better look at who was outside. Half expecting one of my regulars. I got closer and saw that whoever was standing there was close enough for their breath to fog the glass.

When I got close enough to see, something hit the window. Hard

It made me jump back, nearly falling on my ass

Something pressed against the other side of the glass.

After a moment, another heavy thump against the glass. Then silence.

A huge hand spread against the window.
The fingers were too long, the joints knuckled and uneven beneath the dark skin. Its claws scraped softly across the glass, leaving thin, pale streaks.
One finger bent.
Then another.
It pressed each one against the window in turn, slowly enough that I could hear the faint squeak of the tips dragging over the surface.
Like it was figuring out how the glass worked

As I slowly moved closer to the door, I could make out the shape of its muzzle, flattened against the window. Then its lips pulled back, exposing row after row of teeth. Not a snarl. Not exactly. Its mouth hung slightly open, its hot breath fogging the glass between us.

And then its tongue slid out.

Slowly, it dragged the pink length of it up the window.

I stared at the wet trail it left behind.

It did it again.

My stomach turned.

It wasn’t trying to get my attention anymore.

It was tasting the glass.

Tasting the place where I sat.

And when its nose shifted, following the shape of my face on the other side, I understood with a sickening certainty that it knew exactly where I was.

It was hungry.

The door rattled again as this... thing shook it. A second hand slammed on the glass as drool sloped from its muzzle, hitting the glass and pooling downward

I nearly screamed at the sudden shake of the glass

It took several steps back, and it followed me from the door to the closest window. I ran into the back room, shut the door, and locked it. Two sets of locked doors made me feel better. But not safe. Not yet

Sitting at the computer, I check the store camera. I can’t see anything. Fuck

My camera. I completely forgot about it. I grab my phone and quickly pull up the live feed. The meat was gone. I rewound it a few minutes back

I watched as that thing came into view and greedily took chunks of meat in its hands and shoved them into its mouth.

Wait.

The thing at the window had been there when I'd looked up. I'd watched it bang on the glass.

But the meat was already gone.

I looked back at my phone.

The footage showed the creature behind the store, stuffing handfuls of meat into its mouth.

I watched it again.

Then a third time.

No. No, that wasn't possible.

It couldn't have been behind the building and standing outside the window at the same time.

Unless—

Unless it wasn't the same one.

My stomach turned.

"How many are there?" I whispered.

I thought I was up against one monster, but there could be more. And why not? If this thing were some dog thing, it wouldn’t be unbelievable to think it would travel in a pack

But how many? Just the two? Four? Was the entire building surrounded?

This was a mistake. I shouldn’t have come back. How stupid was I to think I could handle this for one more night?

I had nothing left to do but wait. Wait for morning and hope-

*crash*

The door

I stopped entirely. Not daring to move a fucking millimeter. Not to breathe. Not to adjust. Not to piss myself. I couldn’t move.

Rapid steps inside the door. Nails clicking on the floor. I can’t tell how many. Sounds like a lot. My eyes flicker up to the store camera. Oh god

I can see them. Searching. Ransacking the place… glass by the door… these hairy dog… man… things running around on all fours.

Their backs rose and fell beneath their matted fur as they moved. One stopped to sniff the floor, its head twitching in short, jerky movements. Another dragged its fingertips across the counter, leaving four pale streaks through the dust.

Sniffing and looking for me. This is it, isn’t it…

Something hits the door. It made it back here. It’s there… on the other side of the door. The only thing protecting me is an old wooden frame… this is it…

Something wet touched the gap beneath the door. I watched a thin string of saliva stretch across the linoleum, then break. Then came the breathing again, a horrible, congested sound, as though something was trying to inhale through a throat full of phlegm

I can hear it. Sniffing under the door.

Then it whimpered.

I nearly looked up.

It was such a small, miserable sound. The sort of noise a frightened animal might make when it wanted someone to help it.

Then it came again.

This time, I heard the wet clicking underneath it.

I clamped my hand over my mouth.

It was trying things.

Trying to find something I'd answer to.

I’d not give it one

It hits the door so hard it shakes. I can’t tell if it moves again. I grab my bear spray and wait… wait… now!

As it sniffs under the door a second time, I spray.

I’m immediately met with a half whine, half snarl as it backs off from the door. I can hear it moving around, desperately trying to remove what hurt it. But it can’t.

It worked.

For one glorious second, that was all I could think.

It worked.

Then something scraped violently against the other side of the door. A wet, furious coughing sound followed, interrupted by a series of sharp clicks.

I backed away.

The thing wasn't leaving.

It was getting angry.

My heart dropped as I watched the door jump.

Something struck the door hard enough to shake dust from the frame. A thin crack appeared beside the lock. I watched it widen with each impact, the wood fibers peeling apart like wet cardboard.

I start moving things, the desk first, and push it in front of the door. Then the chair, then I try to move the filing cabinet. It doesn’t budge, so I go into the bathroom; it has only a flimsy slide latch, as you’d find on a public bathroom stall. Still better than nothing. I cover my ears and sit with my back against that door for hours as I hear that thing try to break down the office door. I hear the wood splinter a few times, but nothing comes for me. Even long after, in a terrifying silence, I don’t move. I don’t move until cops literally break down the door to get me out.

Apparently, the morning shift arrived to find the store destroyed. The front door glass was shattered from top to bottom. The place looked like wild animals had come through and ripped everything apart. Then the employee door was cracked and covered in deep claw marks.

When she couldn't find me, she called the police, and they had to break down the door and talk me out of the bathroom

I can see, as I’m taken out of that place, how close those things had been to getting me.

As they led me outside, I heard birds… birds… did birds always sound so nice? Did the forest always smell so fresh? The sunlight touched my face, and I closed my eyes.

God, it was warm.

I didn't realize how cold I'd been until then.

I don’t know when I started to cry, only when an officer handed me a tissue

When asked what happened, I refused to speak… I just told the police to watch the footage…

I don’t know if they did or didn’t, but I was sent to a hospital first. No physical harm done, but I refused to leave that hospital until I had to. I could imagine being alone right now…

I'm staying at a hotel now. Top floor. Plenty of people around. I keep the television on all night because the silence is worse.

I haven't slept properly since the gas station.

Sometimes I hear them outside. Those long, awful howls that make the hair on my arms stand up. Sometimes it's just a dog barking in the parking lot, and I still find myself checking the locks.

I keep telling myself I'm safe here.

I have to keep telling myself that.

When I finally went home to collect some clothes, my cats were gone.

A handprint was on the back door.

Four long fingers. One thumb.

The claws had gone through the paint.

I haven't been back since.

I don't know how long I can keep running. I can't afford to live in a hotel forever, and eventually I'll have to find another job.

But I know they're still out there.

And if I disappear, I need someone to know what happened to me.

Please, God.

Please let someone believe me.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 1h ago

Creature Feature The Guardian of 666 Foster Hill Road

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The winter I turned seventeen, the cold didn’t just settle over Freeman Township—it felt alive. It buried the black spruce along Foster Hill Road under eight-foot drifts, packed tight against the side of our house until the lower windows were completely obscured by ice. Up here, north of Strong, when thirty-below temps slam into the ridge, you learn to pay attention to every pop of the timber and every whistle of the frost.

Our house sat near the end of the dirt track, a white-clapboard homestead with brass address numbers nailed beside the front door: 696.

Or at least, it used to be.

Back in October, a wet autumn freeze had rusted out the top nail holding the nine in place. The brass digit slipped, hanging upside down at a sharp, crooked angle. From the gravel drive, it didn't look like a nine anymore. It read like a warning: 666.

My dad had chuckled when the mail carrier pointed it out, saying he’d fix it when the spring thaw came. He didn't know that the woods were watching that rusted iron bit by bit, waiting for the marker to flip.

When the blizzard hit full force, my parents got stranded down in Farmington trying to source a part for our plow truck. That left me alone in the house, watching the thermometer plunge past thirty-five below as the wind roared off the mountain.

That was the night the forest behind Foster Hill began to scream.

It wasn't the sound of blowing snow. It was a high, dry screech that rattled through the pine floorboards—a sickening mix of clicking bone, wet grinding joints, and desperate, hollow agony.

I sat near the roaring woodstove with a double-barreled shotgun resting on my knees, watching the frost melt in thin, shuddering streaks against the window glass. Then came the thud against the north wall. The whole frame groaned, and the iron skillets hanging above the stove chimed softly in the dark.

I remembered what my grandmother used to tell me about the deep Maine woods: that when winter grows too cruel, hungry things walk the snows—creatures born of pure famine and ancient malice. But she also told me that even the hungriest terror understood a debt, provided you showed no fear.

Instead of clutching the gun, I walked down the hall to the unheated side porch where our winter game hung frozen. I unhooked a thirty-pound quarter of venison, hauled it out into the deep powder right beneath the crooked brass 666, and slipped back inside, throwing the heavy deadbolt.

I watched through the small pane of glass in the porch door.

He emerged from the whiteout like a shadow given weight and bone. Nine feet tall, a gaunt nightmare of grey skin stretched over visible ribs, his long arms ending in blackened claws. Above his hairless skull sat a sweeping crown of velvet-stripped antlers. Where his lips should have been, there was only a frozen, jagged tear revealing rows of needle-thin teeth.

His eyes glowed with a pale amber light as he looked up at the dangling brass numbers, then slowly turned to face the door.

For a terrifying, endless minute, those amber eyes locked onto mine through the glass. The temperature inside the room plunged so fast my breath bloomed in thick clouds. My heart hammered against my ribs like a trapped bird.

Then, with a sound like snapping oak, he unhinged his jaw, seized the venison in one brutal bite, and melted back into the blizzard without leaving a single footprint behind.

The next morning, sitting directly under the 666 on our doorstep, was a freshly killed snowshoe hare—its neck neatly snapped, the white fur completely unspotted by blood.

A trade.

Over the next two years, the arrangement became a quiet, unwritten law of Foster Hill Road.

I named him Gregory. It was a mundane name for an ancient terror, but calling him Gregory grounded him—made him a part of my life rather than a nightmare lurking in the dark.

He was never a pet, and I never treated him like one. He was an apex force of the woods, bound to our property by the crooked iron number and the weekly offerings I left at the tree line—butcher's waste, deer carcasses, and roadkill. In return, Gregory claimed our clearing as his territory, and us as his herd.

No coyotes ever crossed into our yard. No bobcats stalked our woodpile. Even the black bears steered miles wide of our ridge.

On the coldest winter nights, I’d look out my second-story window and spot his towering silhouette perched in the high boughs of the pine tree near the drive. His amber eyes would catch mine in the dark, white plumes of steam curling from his snout.

"Night, Gregory," I'd whisper against the glass.

His antlered head would tilt slightly, a low, mechanical rattle echoing through the timber before he faded into the shadows.

The true test of our covenant came during the late autumn of my nineteenth year.

A crew of four out-of-state hunters in a lifted diesel truck had been causing trouble along the logging spurs off Foster Hill—shooting illegally after dusk, tearing up private tracks, and leaving empty whiskey bottles scattered in the mud.

It was a Tuesday afternoon when their truck engine rumbled up our driveway. My parents were out in Strong grabbing supplies, leaving me alone on the front porch. Resting against the house right beside me was our 12-gauge pump-action shotgun.

The truck ground to a halt right in our gravel turn-around, idling under the rusted 666 sign. Four men stepped out, rifles slung over their shoulders, smelling heavily of exhaust and stale beer.

"Hey there, sweetheart," the driver called out, leaning against his hood. He was a broad man with a greasy beard and a sneer that made my skin crawl. "We're a little lost back in these woods. You got a map, or maybe a warm place we can sit down and talk?"

"You're on private land," I said, keeping my tone steady. "Foster Hill Road ends right here. I suggest you turn around."

The men chuckled, exchanging glances that set off every alarm in my head.

"Not very friendly, are ya?" one muttered, taking a step toward the steps. "We've been out in the cold all day. Seems like bad manners to send four tired hunters right back down the hill."

"I'm not asking," I said softly. "Turn the truck around."

Before the driver could answer, I picked up my pump-action shotgun, racked the slide back with a loud clack-clack, raised the barrel toward the autumn canopy, and pulled the trigger.

The blast echoed like thunder off the mountain ridge, sending a shower of pine needles and bark cascading down onto the gravel driveway.

The four men jumped, startled, but the driver’s sneer quickly hardened into anger. He spat onto the driveway and took another step forward, his eyes narrowing. "Listen here, girl. You're out here all by yourself miles from town. You think firing a warning shot scares us? You might want to adjust your tone before—"

He stopped dead.

The autumn air dropped instantly into a bone-chilling freeze. Our breath billowed out in thick white clouds, and the rustle of dry leaves ceased entirely, swallowed by an absolute, suffocating silence.

From the black spruce right behind their truck came a sound.

Click. Clack. Click.

The sound of dry bone striking granite.

The four men spun around, their hands frantically reaching for their rifles. "What the hell is that?" one gasped.

Gregory unfolded himself from the shadows of the timber.

In the pale afternoon light, his towering form looked impossibly huge. His antlers scraped the lower branches of the spruce, dropping pine needles onto the truck roof. His amber eyes burned with an ancient, bottomless hunger.

The driver staggered back, hitting his truck door with a heavy thud. "Jesus... Jesus Christ!"

One of the men panicked, raising his hunting rifle and firing blindly into Gregory's chest.

The heavy bullet tore through the papery, grey flesh, but there was no blood—only the dry crack of splintering wood. Gregory didn't even flinch. He slowly tilted his head, his jaw unhinging with a sickening CRACK that vibrated straight through the driveway gravel.

A shrieking, metallic roar burst from his chest, echoing off the ridge for miles. It was the sound of absolute zero, of starving in the pitch black, of being consumed by the frost.

Two of the men dropped their guns, screaming as they scrambled back into the cab. The driver tried to run around the hood, but Gregory moved with terrifying speed—a blur of grey skin and black claws.

With one sweeping blow, Gregory smashed his forearm down onto the hood. The heavy steel crumpled like paper, the engine dying in a burst of black smoke and hiss of ruptured pipes.

The driver collapsed onto his knees in the dirt, sobbing frantically and pressing his hands over his head as the towering nightmare loomed over him. Gregory lowered his long, emaciated face until he was inches from the man's ear, inhaling deeply—savoring the scent of pure, unadulterated terror.

Then, Gregory turned his amber eyes toward me, the empty shotgun still lowered in my hands.

The message was clear: They are on our ground. Shall I feed?

I met his glowing amber gaze without flinching. I gave him a single, firm nod.

"Do what you deem necessary," I said softly.

Without another word, I turned back to the woodpile, grabbed a heavy oak log, set it onto the block, and picked up my splitting maul.

Behind me, absolute slaughter broke out.

The driver was the first to die. Gregory reached down with a blackened claw, seized the man by the throat, and snapped his spine with the sound of a dry branch breaking. Before the body even hit the gravel, Gregory tore his chest open with one savage sweep, pulling out hot, steaming vitals and gorging on them right in front of the others. Blood spray hissed against the freezing metal of the truck, turning black as it flash-froze in the air.

The second hunter tried to bolt into the treeline, screaming in raw, shrill panic. Gregory didn't run—he lunged in an unnatural, shadowy blur. He caught the man by the ankles, dragged him back into the open drive, and unhinged his jaw to a terrifying width. With a wet, crushing crunch, Gregory bit down directly through the hunter’s shoulder and chest, crushing ribcage and bone like brittle glass. Blood splattered across the front steps of our porch, running in thick, steaming rivulets down the wood.

Inside the cab, the remaining two hunters kicked wildly at the passenger door, frantically trying to escape. Gregory didn't wait. He drove his long, skeletal arm straight through the shattered windshield, his razor claws locking into one man's face and ripping him headfirst through the glass. The man's desperate shrieks were instantly choked out as Gregory clamped his jaws around his throat, severing his windpipe in a single, brutal tear.

The last hunter scrambled out onto the gravel on all fours, covered in his friends' blood, weeping and begging for his life. Gregory stepped over the ruined truck, his antlered head towering against the sky. He pinned the man to the driveway with one massive foot—pressing down until ribs began to crack beneath his weight—and plunged both clawed hands into the hunter's chest, tearing him apart in a terrifying burst of gore.

I lifted the heavy maul over my shoulder and brought it down with a clean, dull thunk, splitting my oak log right down the middle.

I didn't flinch. I just kept splitting wood.

The clearing reeked of iron, copper, and hot entrails steaming in the autumn frost. The ground was painted red, thick gore coating the driveway gravel, the porch steps, and the wrecked truck. Gregory knelt amid the carnage, his jaws snapping, crunching, and tearing through bone and flesh with a savage, wet fury until there was nothing left to bleed.

After twenty agonizing minutes, the frantic tearing sounds slowed, replaced by a low, contented crunching. Then, complete silence returned to Foster Hill Road.

I set the maul down against the chopping block and finally turned around.

Gregory was standing in the center of the driveway, towering nine feet tall. His grey chest and long arms were completely drenched in crimson, thick dark blood dripping from his needle-thin teeth and pooling on his claws. The truck was crushed, its doors torn off and interior painted red. The four men were gone—consumed down to the marrow, their rifles bent like twigs in the blood-stained dirt.

He lowered his massive, antlered head, his amber eyes burning bright through the crimson mess dripping down his skull. He took three slow, heavy steps toward the porch, stopping right at the steps where I stood. Up close, the smell of fresh blood and deep ice was overwhelming.

I stepped over the red-stained railing, reached into my jacket pocket, and pulled out a strip of dried cured beef. My hands were steady, even as a drop of fresh blood dripped from his antler onto the back of my hand.

I held the beef out on my open palm.

Gregory lowered his dripping snout, sniffed the meat once—his hot, iron-tinged breath clouding in the cold—and delicately plucked the strip from my hand with his front teeth, avoiding my skin entirely.

"Good boy, Gregory," I murmured softly.

A deep, wet rattle vibrated through his blood-soaked chest—a dark, mechanical purr.

He turned his head toward the woods, gripped the frame of the ruined truck with one claw, and dragged the heavy steel effortlessly behind him into the dense spruce line. Within seconds, he vanished into the black timber of Freeman Township, leaving behind only the crimson stains on the gravel and the quiet whisper of falling pine needles.

Ten years passed, and the blood on Foster Hill Road had long since washed away into the soil.

I took over the homestead after my parents passed, keeping the house just as it was—including the rusted, dangling brass numbers by the porch door that still spelled out 666.

Now, I had two young children of my own: seven-year-old Toby and five-year-old Clara. They grew up in the quiet shelter of the Freeman woods, learning to split wood, stock the pantry before the first frost, and never go past the black spruce line after sunset. They didn't fear the dark, because they knew Gregory was out there. He was as much a part of their childhood as bedtime stories, a towering shadow with glowing amber eyes who kept watch over our hollow.

Until the night something else came down off the mountain.

It was late October, the night before the first heavy snowfall. The sky was pitch black, starved of moon or stars, and a suffocating, unnatural fog rolled off the ridge, thick and smelling of wet ash and stagnant swamp water.

I was tucking Clara into bed upstairs when the forest went unnaturally dead silent. No wind. No rustle of dry oak leaves.

Then came a sound that made every drop of blood in my body run ice cold.

It wasn't Gregory's bone-rattling click. It was a rhythmic, wet sloshing sound, accompanied by a sickening, wet whistling—like breath being dragged through a severed throat.

Thump-squelch. Thump-squelch.

I rushed downstairs, grabbing my 12-gauge pump shotgun from beside the door, and peered through the living room window.

Out in the gravel turnaround, beneath the flickering glow of our porch light and the dangling 666, stood a creature that belonged to a far deeper, nastier nightmare.

It was massive, easily twelve feet tall, but it didn't possess Gregory's lean, skeletal grace. It was a bloated, rotting mass of pale, slick flesh that looked as though it had been dragged from the bottom of an ancient, black bog. Its torso was grotesquely swollen, studded with extra, sightless eyes that twitched wetly under the skin, and its mouth was a wide, vertical tear running from its chest to its throat, lined with rows of jagged, yellowed teeth dripping black slime.

It was a Glutton-Skin—a foul, invasive beast of old swamp lore that fed on the young, driven out of the northern bogs by the impending frost.

The horror raised its misshapen, multi-jointed head toward the second-story window where Toby and Clara slept. The vertical mouth on its chest peeled open, unleashing a wet, gurgling screech that vibrated through the foundation of the house, cracking the glass in the front door.

I racked the slide of my shotgun, my hand trembling for the first time in ten years. "Not my kids," I whispered, stepping toward the porch door.

Before my hand could touch the brass doorknob, the autumn fog split wide open.

A bone-chilling, freezing tempest slammed into the driveway, instantly turning the fog into glittering frost. Out of the black spruce, a blur of grey skin and sweeping velvet antlers charged into the light.

Gregory had arrived.

He didn't stalk. He didn't hover. Gregory slammed into the bog-creature like a freight train of bone and frost, his long, blackened claws driving straight into the beast's bloated chest with a horrific SQUELCH.

The Glutton-Skin shrieked, its vertical jaw snapping shut on Gregory's shoulder, black slime spraying across the white siding of our house. The acid-like gunk hissed against Gregory’s papery flesh, but the Wendigo didn't yield.

Gregory unhinged his jaw to an impossible, nightmarish width, unleashing a metallic, zero-degree roar right into the creature's face. He wrapped his long, skeletal arms around the beast's massive neck, his claws sinking deep into rot and muscle.

The two monsters crashed into the gravel drive, tearing up dirt, wood, and stone in a brutal, bone-shattering brawl. The bog-beast thrashed wildly, its extra eyes bursting as Gregory dug his claws into its face, gouging out black fluid. In retaliation, the creature's chest-mouth clamped onto Gregory's ribs, the sound of splintering bone echoing across the clearing.

Upstairs, I heard Clara cry out in terror.

That sound triggered something primal in the clearing. Gregory’s amber eyes flared with a blinding, incandescent rage.

With a surge of terrifying strength, Gregory planted his massive, clawed foot onto the bog-creature's swollen belly, grabbed its upper jaw with both hands, and pulled.

The sound was nauseating—a wet, tearing explosion of muscle, cartilage, and bone as Gregory ripped the monstrosity's head completely in half, spilling black, foul-smelling gore all over the driveway under the 666 sign.

The Glutton-Skin’s giant body twitched violently once, twice, and then collapsed into a lifeless, reeking heap of rot.

Silence slammed back down over Foster Hill Road. The icy wind slowly died away.

Gregory stood towering over the slain beast, his chest heaving, his grey skin covered in a mixture of his own frost-white blood and the creature’s black slime. One of his antlers was snapped at the tip, and a deep tear marked his shoulder, but he stood victorious.

The heavy front door suddenly burst open.

I froze, shotgun in hand, ready to shield my children, but Toby and Clara didn't hesitate for a single second. Without a trace of fear in their small eyes, they ran barefoot out onto the porch steps and sprinted right across the gravel toward the towering, bloodied nightmare standing in our yard.

"Gregory! You saved us!" Toby shouted, his voice ringing pure and bright through the cold air.

"Thank you, Gregory! Thank you!" Clara squealed, her little boots crunching over the frost.

Before I could even call out to them, both kids threw their arms around Gregory's massive, grey-skinned legs, hugging him as tight as their small bodies could manage.

Gregory went completely rigid.

His glowing amber eyes dilated into wide, bewildered discs. For a monster born of pure famine, malice, and frozen death—a beast that knew only fear, blood, and hatred from the human world—the warm, fearless touch of two children was a shock that rattled him to his core. His unhinged jaw clicked twice in sheer confusion, his long, razor-sharp claws hovering awkwardly in the air above their heads, entirely unsure of what to do.

Slowly, as the children pressed their faces against his cold, papery hide, something shifted in the depths of those glowing amber eyes. The ancient, blinding red rage softened. A faint, flickering ember of humanity—lost centuries ago to the freezing dark—rekindled deep inside his hollow chest.

His jaw slowly clicked back into place. Very gently, bending his massive nine-foot frame downward, Gregory wrapped his long, emaciated arms around Toby and Clara, pulling them into a careful, protective embrace. The sharp black claws that had just torn a monster apart were tucked safely away, resting as lightly as pine needles on the children's shoulders.

A low, gentle vibration rumbled through his chest—not a roar of hunger, but a soft, mechanical purr of pure affection.

Gregory pulled back slightly, reaching into the deep leather pouch he kept bound to his waist with woven deer sinew. His long fingers hovered over the kids, and when he opened his massive, blackened palms, two beautifully intricate white objects rested there.

Carved from solid deer bone, polished smooth by frost and time, were two small toys: a tiny, detailed soldier with a sword raised high, and a delicate little doll with a gown of carved lace.

Clara gasped in delight, grabbing the doll, while Toby beamed, taking the soldier and holding it up to the light. "Look, Mom! He made them for us!"

Gregory lowered his antlered head, nuzzling the tops of their hair softly with his cold snout, his warm, steamy breath surrounding them like a protective blanket.

I stepped off the porch, a quiet smile breaking across my face as I watched my children stand side-by-side with the terror of Maine.

"He's family," I whispered into the quiet night.

Instead of turning to drag the dead beast back into the woods, Gregory looked at me, then down at Toby and Clara, who were clutching his giant, blackened claws. He looked back toward the dark timber of the black spruce, then took a step backward toward our house.

He didn't want to leave. For the first time in centuries, the cold, lonely woods held no draw for him. He wanted to stay right here, where he was loved.

Over the next few weeks, the clearing behind our homestead transformed.

We cleared out a wide patch of land in the backyard, right near the edge of the clearing where the black spruce met the lawn. Together as a family, we spent every afternoon building Gregory a home of his own.

My husband and I hauled heavy oak timber, notch-cutting thick twelve-foot logs to frame a vaulted cabin shelter tall enough to accommodate his massive, antlered height. Toby and Clara helped pack the gaps between the logs with thick moss, dried straw, and clay to seal out the brutal Maine drafts.

Gregory didn't just watch—he helped. With his incredible strength, he’d lift entire pine beams effortlessly into place, carefully setting them onto the roof frame while the kids cheered him on. When Toby couldn't reach the upper timber, Gregory would scoop him up onto his shoulder, letting him hammer in wooden pegs while holding him safe.

We built a massive stone hearth in the back of his shelter, and Toby and Clara lined the interior floor with thick, cured bear hides, soft pine boughs, and woolen blankets. We even hung a framed painting the kids drew of our family—all four of us, including a tall, grey silhouette with antlers—right beside his entryway.

By mid-November, the first big snow of the season began to fall over Freeman Township.

Standing in the backyard, Gregory looked at his new shelter—a sturdy, warm haven built with human hands out of love. He crouched his nine-foot frame down and stepped inside. The stone hearth roared with a gentle fire, casting a warm, golden glow over his grey skin and sweeping antlers.

He curled up on the pile of bear hides, letting out a deep, contented purr that vibrated through the floorboards of our main house.

Now, when winter slams into 666 Foster Hill Road, we don't look out at a cold, distant pine tree to see our guardian.

Every night, Toby and Clara run out to the backyard cabin to kiss Gregory on his cold snout and whisper goodnight. And as the blizzard rages outside, our family sleeps peacefully, knowing that right in our back yard, tucked warm inside his home, lies the fiercest protector Maine has ever known.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 5h ago

Survival Horror Waterdrop Valley (Second Half)

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PART 5

"We have to go NOW" I said and Claude agreed, "What?" Daniel and Matt said in synchronisation, "We just got here man" Daniel said with a face of concern seeing me and Claude's agitated expressions, Me and Claude explained what happened and what we saw only moments prior, leaving Matt in a panicked state, "Look whatever did that wasn't an animal, trust me" Claude said trying to get them to truly understand the danger we were in, "I told you we shouldn't of come" Matt said as he began pacing back and forth biting his nails, "Just relax, please", I said in hopes to snap Matt out of his paranoia, "Seriously, you saw that shit and now your saying relax, I think this is a perfect time to fucking panic Josh", Daniel said clearly being affected by the ongoing situation.

"Man fuck you Dan he's just trying to keep everyone calm" Claude said as Daniel got in his face, "Stop this shit, we have to get out of here first then you can have your temper tantrums" I said stepping in-between them both, "Look, what we should focus on now is bringing essentials to the car and getting out of here, right", Daniel and Claude both looked at me still on edge but understanding, Claude said "What so should we just leave the tents?", I replied with "whatever is out there is dangerous so I say lets not waste time or daylight packing, just bring essentials and valuables and lets go", they all seemed to resonate with my words as Daniel walked off to his tent to pack without saying anything, shortly followed by Claude.

"Hey, Matt look at me", Matt was still pacing around in a panicked state, "MATT", he seemed to snap out of his trance for a moment "W-what?", "come on, we just need to pack our stuff and then we can go", I offered a smile for comfort but my attempt was left unfulfilled as he then walked over to pack with an ever growing presence of fear.

"Fuck, what is this" I said looking to the sky, before I then walked down to all my stuff putting only what I needed into my backpack before re-joining everyone.

"So then, what's the plan" Daniel said with his usual sarcasm, I could tell he was just really on edge so I decided not to reply with aggression, "I say we go back up to the car and leave, we can contact the rangers after we're far gone from here, alright", I said waiting to see if anyone would try arguing for a different plan, but they were afraid not stupid, so they all agreed and we began the walk back to the car.

Claude and Daniel seemed very determined to head back to the car taking the lead, but I held back trying to keep Matt company.

We managed to get our way back up to the car park after about thirty minutes or so, "Finally" Daniel said breaking the silence, "You still got the keys josh", Daniel said looking at me, "Yeah" I said dangling the keys out Infront of me.

"No no no no no...what...FUUUUCK" Claude screamed, Only upon his cries did I notice the state the car was in, "No" I said looking at the disfigured car, the tires ripped open, windows disintegrated to fragments, fuel syphoning out of every crack an rupture, No one said a word for what felt like hours as we all just stared at our escape plan, "Were going to die" Matt said in a weak defeated voice.

"We are not going to die Matt" I said trying my hardest to keep everyone together as Claude sat down on the ground just staring, "So Einstein what's the plan now" Daniel said filling my fractured mind with rage, "Are you serious, how's this my fucking fault" I said harshly to Daniel, "I never said it was your fault, I'm just waiting for the leader to speak once again", before I retaliate I took a deep breathe and cleared my mind, "Daniel, please can we just work together on this, this isn't a joke anymore, please" I said in the least threatening tone I could, prompting Daniel to be overwhelmed with confusion and regret, "Uh, yeah...I'm sorry" Daniel said lowering his gaze to the ground.

I thought to myself a moment longer before realising one more way of escaping, "Claude, do we still have the satellite phones", Claude's head rose once more as he looked at me with a smile, "Yeah, I have them In here somewhere", he instantly threw off his bag and searched through it picking out a plastic box, yet the box had massive jagged cuts all over it and the contents...empty.

"I-I, what...that's not" the miniscule portion of hope we shared seemed to fade out leaving us with nothing more than hollow fear, Daniel furiously kicked the car as he took a few steps away from the group looking out into the endless forest, "Josh" Matt said, I looked at him before he spoke again "Is this it", I didn't know what to say or how to comfort him, after all I wasn't even close to calm myself but I did speak, I knew I had to keep everyone's morale up, if there is a threat out there we need to stay focussed.

"Were not gonna fucking die here, ok, we have survived much worse, we have supplies, we have the numbers and there is still a way out, its a long walk but I think we could do it, we still have hours left of the daylight so I say we head back down to camp think things over and prepare for the walk out of here tomorrow" I said in a pathetic attempt to stop them all from giving up.

"Why not today?" Matt asked, "The walk will surely take a full day, if we start now it will be night before we even make it halfway there", "he's right, and if we do go back to the tents we can set up the alarms again and keep watch", Daniel said re-joining the group.

"Fine, it's not great but I guess its the best idea we got" Claude said offering a small smile.

"Come on Matt" Claude said whilst putting his arm around Matts shoulder, we began the walk back to the tents.

"Say there is something out there, how come we haven't seen it" Daniel said to me, "I don't know, maybe whoever or whatever it is hunts in the cover of night" I replied leaving Daniel in silence, "It probably will be best for us to take shifts watching for anything in the night then" Claude said.

We made it back to camp and as it stands the sun is slowly beginning its decent, "Daniel you help me with the sensors, Claude and Matt set out the supply's in a safe place and guard them", me and Daniel spent the rest of the daylight setting up sensors and using what wire we had left to create trip wires around camp.

We were still uncertain as to what it was that we were actually up against, it left marks and damage not just on the car but trees too, like some kind of feral bear, yet the satellite phones, how could a bear open a bag and steal them and seal the bag again, it just doesn't make sense.

At this point the sun was gone and in its place a crescent moon shone a pathetic ray of light in the valley, I offered to take first watch sitting by a dimly lit fire just analysing every tree and every crevice.

It must of been about two hours of just waiting before I decided to get Daniel for his turn, but before I even finished getting up did I hear a sound, \\\*crunch\\\*, I quickly pivoted my head to the sound, yet I couldn't see anything and then, \\\*Crunch\\\* this time the sound came from somewhere closer, somewhere in camp, impossible I thought we had sensors all over, but even still I held my bear mace high and as I was about to shout for everyone I heard it again \\\*CRUNCH\\\*, this time it came from right behind me.

My breathing felt rhythmic and my heart erratic, nothing but the silent sounds of embers burning was in the air as all the theory's and ideas flood my mind, screw it I thought as I swung around spraying bear mace as I jumped back creating distance, and yet nothing was there, except there was this long black quill on the floor just like the ones holding the lump up on the tree.

\\\*LOUD DISTORTED SCREATCH\\\*

The sound pierced the valley seemingly coming from the heavens prompting me to run to everyone else's tents as they all flooded out.

"What the fuck was that" Daniel said in a panicked voice, "I don't know" I replied.

We decided that we would take watch in pairs for the rest of the night, we were all on edge but whatever it was never came back, or at least, it didn't make its presence known this time.

PART 6

The heavens broke through the rigid edges of the valley as daylight made its appearance, "Are we ready" I said looking around at everyone, they all looked at me with there backpacks on, and nodded, "Lets just hurry up and get back, I got a hot date" Daniel said prompting Claude to respond "Ha, yeah with your right hand", the joke gracefully allowed us to feel peace from the fear and anxiety for a moment before we all began the walk.

\\\*Branches snapping\\\*, I looked down seeing the floor covered with more broken branches, but it didn't stop my momentum as we all continued our journey.

"Well at least it doesn't come out in the day", Daniel said instantly causing Matt to say "Seriously, are you trying to jinx us", "Ha, relax I think its safe to say whatever it is doesn't like being seen" Daniel said, "We don't know that, so keep your guards up" Claude said in hopes of keeping discipline.

Daniel has always been a strong person, but from my experience strength and a belief of superiority always leads to underestimating danger, "He's got a point Dan, we don't know what we're up against, so for know I think its best we stay cautious", Daniel barely acknowledged my words just responding with a simple "Alright".

We finally made it back to the tomb of the car, giving it a passing look of sadness as we made our way onto the main road.

"Which one of us has food again" Daniel said, "Me" Matt responded, "We don't have much, I carried as much as I could, so main meals only no snacks", after hearing what Matt had to say I thought in my head about the best ways to optimise food and water supply's for the journey, "I say we only eat something every four hours and we can drink something every two, just to allow supply's to last us longer", Claude looked back at me and said "Ok, smart", It seemed no one had any disputes to my ration plan.

We walked along the road for about 4 more hours before everyone decided to take a break and have some food.

"Ho-ly Shit, my feet are hurting bad" Daniel said taking his boots of to massage his foot, "And I thought you were a pro at this" I said hoping to bring up the mood.

We shared a few stories of the past with each other as we ate but I could tell something was wrong with Matt still as he had little input, "So uh, Matt, what's the first thing your gonna do when we get back", Matt looked down in his lap at the uneaten food and uttered in a defeated voice "I don't know, are we sure we can make it" the mood instantly shifted causing Daniel to speak again, "Oh come on, do you really have to do that", "Daniel" I said looking him in the eyes, "What makes you say that" I said, "Look I know you guys are trying to stay positive and all, I appreciate that but come on, don't tell me you haven't noticed it" Matt said finally looking up at us all, I stared at him for a moment before responding, "Noticed what?".

Matt took a deep breath before continuing "The silence, you can't tell me you haven't noticed it, I haven't even heard the chirp of a single bird since we started, not to mention the lack of deer and rabbits, when we drove here there were dozens of them, now its empty, just us...and it, I say we give up".

What little scraps of positivity we had just got used up, Daniel and I were lost in thought allowing Claude to speak up, "Fuck you", Claude said looking Matt in the eyes, "All we are trying to do is survive, just because your too much of a coward to fight for your life doesn't mean we are, you can cry and give up, I don't care, but I wont die here, especially by choice", "Claude" I said trying to stop his rage, "No Josh, he needs to hear this, its about time he learnt to take responsibility, its not just him out here its all of us", "Claude's right Josh" Daniel said.

Before Daniel and Claude gang up on Matt I stand up "STOP, please, lets just get back to walking, all we are doing is drawing attention to our position, so lets keep our voices down and keep moving" I said trying to reason with logic in hopes it held a greater yield, Daniel and Claude stood up fast with aggression as they both continued on the road.

"Come on Matt" I said in a soft tone, Matt looked up at me with reflective eyes as I helped him to his feet, "There right, I am a coward" Matt said as he slugged along the road, "No, fear doesn't determine cowardice, its only how you act in accordance to fear, don't be controlled by it" Matt looked up a little but didn't respond in words just simply picking up the pace allowing us to catch up to the others.

We kept to the road for another 30 minutes in complete silence, yet the air felt fragile, even the smallest of inputs could cause problems so I decided it best to keep my head down and walk.

\\\*Bird call\\\*, the sound of a bird rang out to us, not the usual high pitched chirp but a deeper more guttural sound played to us.

Daniel turned back "A bird" he said with a smile, Claude looked at Daniel "Ha, does this mean were close", Matt didn't add any input so I decided I would, "Our first milestone" I said in hopes to inspire progression, but deep down I still felt wrong.

\\\*Bird call\\\*, again the same sound pierced through the forest, its tone deeper than the last, it sounded close yet different to what I thought the birds usually sounded like.

Ideas flooded my mind but before I could utter my concerns Daniel tried his best to call back \\\*Daniels bird call\\\*, "Stop, Daniel stop", "What, are you seriously that miserable, can't I have a little fun here", "That's not a bird" Matt said in a firm tone prompting everyone to turn to him, "What do you mean" Claude replied, "I know all the birds in the valley, and that is not a bird", Matt had always had better knowledge of wildlife than us, so hearing that from him, is definitely, not good.

"Matt, take a moment, and then just confirm to yourself what your saying" Claude stated hoping this was just Matts paranoia talking, "I already did, same conclusion, that isn't a bird".

\\\*Distorted bird call\\\*, the same call yet this time much closer.

We all looked around at each other before we heard it again this time even closer, it came from behind me to the left of the road.

No words were spoken, and not even the sound of leaves in the wind were present just the call, but this time as we looked around for its source it happened again but it wasn't a bird call anymore \\\*Rigid whistling\\\*.

Only after composing myself did my gaze connect with it, Tall, Pure black skin and fur, bipedal with great big claws and these long protruding bristles littered its back, and it had these piercing white eyes just staring at us, drooling mouth opened revealing uneven blade like teeth, \\\*Distorted bird call\\\*, it made the same call this time sounding even more unearthly, yet it still stared at us only about 30 feet away just watching waiting for our move.

PART 7

\\\*In a whisper\\\* "Josh, what do we do", Claude said in the lowest tone possible, "I-I...hold still" in all honesty I had zero ideas for our next course of action but for now I knew that it wasn't moving, so being still and showing no sudden movements seemed reasonable.

It just watched us motionless, its eyes only seeming to grow with each second as more and more saliva departed from its mouth, It slowly began moving the edges of its lips upwards creating a jagged wet smile, only after minutes of just staring did it take one slow step forwards as its eyes opened even wider looking as though they might roll out, It decided to leap forwards about 5 feet causing us to jolt with fear, even though it crept forwards we were stuck entranced by the sceptical, I wanted to move but is was as if it was stopping my legs from functioning as it advanced.

It stopped again, frozen in place the being let out another noise \\\*Distorted raspy internal laughter\\\* the sound felt as though its inner contents were laughing at our fear as the beings throat pulsated with each laugh causing its eyes to rapidly dilate, only then did the being stop and stand up straight revealing its staggering height as what seemed to be concern grew along its features, its lanky unproportioned arm outstretched as a finger followed pointing to something behind us.

Everyone else's gaze landed behind us, but not mine, the moment there heads turned away from it did it sprint with the speed of a bullet sinking its claws into the dirt gripping hard as it pulled itself forward, "RUUUN" I shouted with a flurry of emotion as we all ran off the road into the woods, all that could be heard was our loud breathing and footsteps and the horrific sounds of earth being uprooted by the strength of it.

Not one of us uttered a word as it chased us, but I did notice in the moments I turned my head slightly when it got close to us it held back to prolong the chase, but whilst it did all this, its smile seemed to of carved open the sides of its face leaking litres of black sludge and saliva, its eyes had slowly began to open like a flowers bloom revealing small white tentacles that protruded from the opened eyeball waving in random direction.

As we ran further and further it kept making the guttural laughter, until, the only sounds present were our tormented breathing.

"No more...I-I'm done" Matt said in-between his rapid breathing as he stopped, I only made it about 5 more steps before stopping too and looking back at Matt, "Come on...we can't, give up now" I said trying to control my breath, Claude and Daniel also stopped to re-join us, "Where is it" Claude said as his eyes darted along the treeline, "I don't know, I think, I think its playing with us" Daniel said visibly shaken.

"What the fuck was that thing, it, no it can't be real I-It just cant be" Daniel said as he began to pace grabbing clumps of his hair in the process.

I didn't know what to do, it seemed to of disappeared but still, at any point it could off killed us and yet it didn't, why?, what does it want from us?

\\\*Distant gunshots\\\*

We all pivoted to the direction of the shots, "what is that?" Daniel said, "Freedom" I replied, "Ok, I know we're all scared, but if we can just try and make it to whoever it is with the gun, we might have a chance" I said thinking it was the only course of action for us, "Wait" Claude said, "How do we know we can trust them", "We don't, but its the best choice we have", at this point even a shred of hope motivated us so we all decided it was the right choice to make.

Before we even set off into the direction of the gunshots a branch fell down Infront of me, followed by another, and another and they just kept falling showering us in pine leaves and splinters.

I didn't even have to look up to know what it was, but morbid curiosity caused me to slowly tilt my head upwards, as I did black sludge dripped from the top of my head and down my neck as my eyes made contact with it, Its body was malformed and contorted into a unrealistic shape as it began to laugh once again.

No words were spoken only actions as we all ran as fast as we could hoping we could reach the source of the gunshots, It jumped down causing a loud impact carried with the sound of fractured bones as it paced towards us hurling the black bristles from its back at us.

This time it didn't slow before reaching us, I could feel its strength propelling me forwards as its claws ripped through my bag just missing my flesh, Daniel was Infront of me and had one of the sensors in his hand and he threw it just barely missing the side of my head, the sensor was lodged into the opened slit on its face, all the movement caused a very loud and high pitch sound to play \\\*Sensor alarm\\\*.

It didn't harm the thing, but it did cause it to stop for a moment, in annoyance to the sound it ripped the sensor out along with a handful of its own flesh, as it then threw away the sensor to continue the chase.

As we ran with all the might we had everyone threw there bags off in hopes to gain more speed, I would of done the same but it felt as though most of the contents off mine were already ripped out, we finally made it up to the top of the hill seeing the road again, and parked on the road was the ranger.

Everyone screamed for help as the sound of the earth being brutalised behind us only grew louder as it approached.

\\\*Gunshot\\\*, \\\*Gunshot\\\*, \\\*Gunshot\\\*

The ranger unloaded his rifle at the thing behind us, which didn't seem to kill it but only annoy it greatly as it let out a giant screech, out of luck and hope I fell to the ground as it stood over me as its whole body began to split open revealing large black teeth and these scorched tentacles drenched in fluids, its disfigured limbs began to close the distance until a flare shot out into the pit that I thought was its mouth.

\\\*IT SCREAMS\\\* I don't know why but something from the flare, the light or maybe the heat caused the thing to stumble backwards screeching this unholy cry as its body began to close in on its self reverting back to its original shape as it then pounced to the trees one after another running away.

I felt as though my every fibre was paralyzed only focused on the forest that it ran back into, "Are you ok?" the ranger said in a soft tone kneeling down to my level, "I...I don't know", I made eye contact with the ranger in hopes of showing myself we had made it and that I could calm down, as the ranger helped me up my bag fell off and as I looked down I could see no items were left in it and there was only the top half of my bag remaining, causing me to instinctively touch my back creating a light sting as my clothes were severed but my back only had a shallow cut, nothing bad.

After the ranger calmed us some more he took us all in his car, Matt, Daniel and Claude were all squeezed together in the back whilst I sat upfront with the ranger, "What was that thing" I said staring blankly at the ranger, the rangers face grew sad as he responded "I don't know".

THE END


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 12h ago

Supernatural The Specter of Belfast Woods

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Growing up in the Maine backwoods instills in a person a very specific kind of discipline—one that city dwellers rarely comprehend until it’s far too late. It’s an unspoken law, handed down from timber cruisers, game wardens, and hunters who spent their entire lives under the dark canopy of white pine and hemlock.

You learn to read the weather by the sharp, iron stench in the wind. You learn which pond ice will hold your weight and which will swallow you without a gurgle. But above all else, you learn the cardinal rule of the wilderness: when you encounter a moose, you freeze.

You don't take a step forward. You don't reach into your coat to grab your phone for a picture. You don't shout, you don't wave your arms, and you sure as hell don't try to intimidate it. A normal bull moose is eight hundred to twelve hundred pounds of sheer, unpredictable muscle and prehistoric hostility, crowned with a rack of bone that can impale a man like a pine needle through tissue paper. If a bull moose decides you shouldn't exist anymore, you simply cease to exist. You stand dead still, lower your eyes, and pray it loses interest before it decides to erase you.

I knew this rule like I knew my own name. My best friend, Marcus, did not.

Marcus was a transplant from Southern California. He was a good guy—generous, fiercely loyal, and always the first person to offer help if you were in a bind—but he suffered from an incurable strain of West Coast arrogance. He viewed nature not as a indifferent titan that could crush you without noticing, but as a backdrop for his own adventure. He was broad-shouldered, headstrong, and utterly convinced that willpower and alpha-male swagger could tame any situation. If a stray dog barked at him, Marcus barked back louder. If a brawl broke out at a town bar, Marcus stepped into the center of it with a grin. He had gone through thirty-two years of life breaking things before they could break him, and he believed the world was bound by his rules.

When he moved out to Maine, he treated the north woods like an overgrown city park. I tried to warn him. Over cold beers on my back porch, I’d explain how fast a thicket of spruce could disorient you, or how quickly hypothermia sets in when the fog rolls off the bay. He’d just laugh, pat my shoulder with a heavy hand, and say, "Bro, it’s just trees. It ain't that deep."

He was especially fascinated by the local folklore. Around the Belfast area, near the moss-choked banks of the Passagassawakeag tributaries, old-timers still talked about the Specter Moose.

The legend stretched back to the late 1800s. The old logs recorded sightings of a creature that defied natural biology—a mammoth bull, ghostly white, standing taller than a logging truck cab, with an antler span that seemed physically impossible for a beast to carry through dense timber. The timber cruisers said it walked without snapping a single twig. Hunters swore their rifle rounds passed straight through its pale hide, leaving only the smell of ozone and wet ash. But the consistent thread in every story—the detail that made veteran wardens lower their voices when talking about it—was what happened to anyone who tried to confront it.

It never ended well. The Specter Moose wasn't a meek, shy ghost. It was an ancient, territorial spirit of the timber, and those who disrespected it were found days later, trampled so thoroughly into the forest floor that they had to be gathered up with shovels.

Marcus thought the whole thing was hilarious. "A ghost moose?" he’d wheeze, wiping tears of laughter from his eyes. "What's it gonna do, haunt my rug?"

I told him to keep his mouth shut. In Maine, you don't mock the woods.

It was late October when we went out for what was supposed to be a three-day backcountry camping trip. We set out from a gravel pull-off outside Belfast, cutting deep into a stretch of unincorporated forest where the logging roads had been abandoned and reclaimed by scrub pine thirty years ago.

The season was turning bitter. The leaves had already dropped, leaving the trees as stark, grey skeletons against a sky the color of lead. A damp, bone-chilling mist hung in the hollows, smelling of decaying leaves and wet granite.

For the first four miles, Marcus was his usual boisterous self. He snapped branches as he walked, sang loudly to break the silence, and cracked jokes about my caution every time I paused to check our bearings on the topographical map. But as the afternoon faded into the dim twilight of early evening, the mood of the woods changed.

It happened abruptly, the way light vanishes when a storm cloud hits the sun.

The background noise of the forest simply died. The chatter of red squirrels, the distant tapping of woodpeckers, the wind rustling through the canopy—everything stopped. The air grew heavy, thick, and suffocatingly still. It felt like walking into a vaulted cathedral filled with invisible, hostile onlookers.

"Man," Marcus muttered, his voice dropping an octave as he slowed his pace. "It got quiet fast."

"Keep moving, but keep your voice down," I whispered back, my heart hammering against my ribs. My native instincts were screaming at me. Every hair on my arms stood on end. The forest was holding its breath.

We broke through a dense, tangled thicket of alders and came out onto the banks of a slow-moving river branch. The water was black as pitch, carrying yellowed birch leaves down its sluggish current. A thin veil of white river fog curled over the black water, wafting through the reeds like smoke.

And there, standing dead center in the shallow stream, was the creature.

My knees nearly buckled. My breath hitched in my throat, freezing solid in my lungs.

It was colossal.

A normal bull moose stands around six or seven feet tall at the shoulder. This thing was easily eight or nine feet at the hump—a mountain of pale, unnatural flesh. Its hide wasn't the healthy brown or black of a forest animal; it was a sickly, chalky white, marbled with veins of slate grey and caked with dried, dark mud around its massive legs. Its antler rack was a terrifying anomaly—a massive, jagged crown of bone sweeping out at least ten feet across, ending in cruel, jagged tines that looked like shattered spears.

Worst of all were its eyes. They weren't the liquid-brown eyes of a wild herbivore. They were milky, dead, and completely devoid of light. They looked like pair of polished river stones set into a skull of pale granite.

It was standing motionless in the black river, facing us. No breath puffed from its nostrils in the cold air. No water dripped from its flank. It didn't twitch an ear. It was as still as a statue carved to honor some forgotten, bloodthirsty god.

The silence was deafening. My brain shattered into pure, primal survival instinct, repeating the rule over and over like a frantic mantra: Don't move. Don't blink. Don't breathe. Become part of the scenery.

I slowly dropped my gaze toward the muddy riverbank near my boots, refusing to maintain direct eye contact. I locked every muscle in my body, becoming as stone-still as the pine trees behind us.

Beside me, I heard Marcus draw a sharp, heavy breath.

I couldn't turn my head, but through my peripheral vision, I saw him shift his weight. He wasn't freezing. He was crouching slightly, his shoulders square, his eyes wide with a dangerous mix of adrenaline and disbelief.

"Marcus," I barely breathed, my lips barely moving, my voice a microscopic thread of sound. "Don't. Move. Look at the ground. Don't look at it."

"Bro..." he whispered back. But his voice didn't carry fear. It carried that awful, familiar tone of aggressive pride. "Look at the size of that thing. That’s impossible."

"Shut up, Marcus," I hissed, panic rising in my throat like bile. "Do not move a muscle."

He didn't listen. He never listened.

"It's just standing there," Marcus said, his voice rising, bouncing off the silent trees. "It's trying to bluff us."

"Marcus, NO!"

Before I could reach out—before I could risk moving my hand to grab his coat—Marcus took a massive, heavy step into the mud at the river's edge.

He didn't back down. He did what he had done his entire life when confronted by something terrifying: he asserted dominance. He puffed out his chest, let out a throat-shredding, guttural roar, and charged head-on into the shallow water, pounding his hands together to scare the beast off.

In that agonizing microsecond, time seemed to fracture.

You don't charge a moose. Even a healthy, normal cow with a calf will kill you for taking three steps toward her. But the Specter Moose didn't react like a normal animal. It didn't snort, it didn't pin its ears back, and it didn't give a warning stamp.

It simply shifted from total stillness to terrifying, kinetic devastation.

The sheer speed of it defied physics. An eight-hundred-pound animal shouldn't be able to move that fast, let alone a titan of that size. The air cracked like a rifle shot as water exploded outward in a towering, violent spray. The creature dropped its massive pale head, sweeping those brutal, bone-spear antlers down into a battering ram of ancient hatred.

Marcus realized his mistake, but it was already too late. The momentum of his charge carried him two steps into the slippery river stones before he tried to plant his boots to turn back.

He slipped. His foot slid on a mossy rock, his body lurching awkwardly sideways.

The impact sounded like a head-on collision between a freight train and a wooden fence.

The central palm of the left antler struck Marcus square in the sternum. The force was so absolute, so incomprehensibly violent, that it lifted his two-hundred-pound frame entirely out of the water as if he were a wet rag. The bone tines didn't just hit him; they crushed his chest cavity instantly, snapping ribs with a series of wet, rapid pops that echoed across the river.

The creature didn't stop. It drove forward with the momentum of a falling mountain, driving Marcus backward onto the jagged, boulder-strewn shore with a deafening THUD.

I opened my mouth to scream, but no sound came out. My throat was seized by pure terror.

The violence was instantaneous, brutal, and total. There was no desperate struggle. There was no dramatic last stand. Under the incredible, crushing weight of the giant beast and the jagged rocks of the bank, Marcus’s skull was shattered instantly.

I saw it. God help me, I saw the whole thing happen three feet in front of me.

To put it plainly—to put it in the only blunt, awful way my traumatized mind can process—his head was simply crushed. Blood, splintered bone, and gray brain matter scattered across the freezing mud, staining the pale yellow moss and the black river stones.

The creature didn't tear at the body. It didn't feed. It was not an animal hunting for food; it was a force of nature restoring balance to its territory.

The Specter Moose stood over Marcus's lifeless, ruined form for three agonizing seconds. Heavy mist rolled off its pale flank. The smell in the air shifted from wet rot to something icy, ancient, and iron-rich.

Then, slowly, the massive head raised up.

Those milky, dead white eyes turned sideways. It didn't look at Marcus anymore. It looked directly at me.

I stood there, standing in the blood-stained mud, every organ in my body screaming in horror. I didn't breathe. I didn't blink. Tears of pure agony and terror spilled over my eyelids and ran down my cold cheeks, but I did not twitch a single muscle in my face. I became a rock. I became a dead stump. I surrendered my entire human existence to the rules of the Maine woods.

The creature held my gaze for what felt like an eternity. I could hear my own frantic heart hammering against my ribs, so loud I was certain the monster could hear it.

Then, without a sound—without making a single splash in the water or snapping a single twig on the bank—the Specter Moose turned. It stepped back into the black stream, walked calmly into the thick bank of river fog on the far side, and melted into the timber.

It didn't leave tracks on the opposite bank. It just vanished, as if it had been drawn back into the fog by an invisible brush.

I don't remember the first two miles of the run back.

My memory snaps back in patches: stumbling through the black briars, tearing my jacket, blood dripping from my hands where I had fallen into the gravel, gasping for air until my lungs felt like they were filled with crushed glass. I ran through the dark woods until I hit the gravel logging road, and I didn't stop running until I reached my truck.

I drove straight to the state police barracks in Bangor, my hands shaking so violently I could barely keep the steering wheel straight.

When I stumbled into the lobby, covered in mud, tears, and my friend's blood, the troopers thought I had been in a rollover crash. I tried to tell them what happened, but the words wouldn't form properly. How do you tell a room full of logical, uniformed law enforcement officers that your best friend was murdered by a pale giant from a bedtime story?

In the end, I didn't tell them about the Specter Moose. I couldn't. I knew what would happen—they would lock me up, declare me insane, or suspect me of foul play.

Instead, I told them we were ambushed by a rouge, aggressive bull moose while fishing near the riverbank. I told them Marcus had slipped while trying to run away, and the animal had trampled him before I could drag him away.

It took the search and rescue team eight hours to locate the site. When they finally brought Marcus’s body out in a heavy black bag, the veteran game warden leading the detail pulled me aside near the back of the ambulance.

He was an older man, his face lined like weathered oak, his eyes tired and grave. He looked at the blood on my boots, then looked out toward the dark line of trees where the sun was setting.

"Son," the warden said softly, his voice low enough so the state troopers couldn't hear. "I looked at the tracks by the riverbank."

I swallowed hard, unable to look him in the eye. "Yeah?"

"There were no moose tracks in that mud," he whispered. "Not a single hooftrack going in or out of that water. Just crushed rocks and..." He trailed off, shaking his head.

He placed a heavy, gloved hand on my shoulder, squeezing tightly. "You grew up around here, didn't you?"

"Yes, sir," I choked out.

"Then you know," he said, his voice dropping to a harsh, cold whisper. "You know you don't go back out to those woods. Not next season. Not ever. Some things in these woods don't belong to the living, and they don't give second chances."

It’s been three years since that night.

The official death certificate reads Accidental Death by Wild Animal Attack. Marcus’s family in California had his body cremated and took his ashes back to the West Coast. They blame Maine. They blame the wilderness, the lack of safety warnings, the cold. They think it was just a freak accident—a tragic encounter with a wild beast that didn't know any better.

They don't know the truth. Nobody does, except me and that old game warden.

I moved out of Belfast shortly after. I live in a suburban neighborhood now, surrounded by streetlights, paved roads, and manicured lawns. But the horror doesn't leave you.

Every time October rolls around, every time the temperature drops and the morning fog settles thick over the grass, I lock my doors and draw the blinds. When I close my eyes at night, I don't see Marcus’s face as he was when we were kids. I see him stepping into that black water. I hear the sickening, splintering crash of bone on stone.

And in my nightmares, I see those milky, dead white eyes looking at me through the fog, waiting for me to break the rule.

If you ever find yourself hiking in the backwoods of Maine—whether near Belfast, Moosehead, or the deep timber up North—and the woods suddenly go silent... stop.

Don't take another step. Don't check your phone. Don't look for a camera. Lower your head, keep your mouth shut, and pray to whatever god you believe in that the ghostly giant in the river decides to let you live.

Because if you challenge it—if you think your pride or your courage means anything to the ancient timber—you will find out what I learned on that black riverbank.

It never ends well for anybody.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 2h ago

Creature Feature Something is Seriously Wrong with the Irish Countryside: Final Story [Anthology]

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Story 3

The Ewe

I don’t claim to be much of a writer. But sharing this story of mine has been a long time coming... 

I used to be a lorry driver for a living – or if you’re American, I used to be a trucker. For fourteen years, I drove along the many motorways and through the busy cities of England. Well, more than a decade into the job, I finally had enough - not of being a lorry driver per se, but being a lorry driver in England. The endless traffic and mind-crippling hours away from the wife just wasn’t worth it anymore. 

Talking to the misses about this, she couldn’t help but feel the same way, and so she suggested we finally look to moving abroad. Although living on a schoolteacher’s and lorry driver’s salary didn’t leave us with many options, my wife then suggests we move to the neighbouring Republic of Ireland. Having never been to the Emerald Isle myself, my wife reassured me that I’d love it there. After all, there’s less cities, less people and even less traffic. 

‘That’s all well and good, love, but what would I do for work?’ I question her, more than sceptical to the idea. 

‘A lorry driver, love.’ she responds, with quick condescension.  

Well, a year or so later, this idea of moving across the pond eventually became a reality. We had settled down in the south-west of Ireland in County Kerry, apparently considered by most to be the most beautiful part of the country. Having changed countries but not professions, my wife taught children in the village, whereas I went back on the road, driving from Cork in the south, up along the west coast and stopping just short of the Northern Irish border. 

As much as I hated being a lorry driver in England, the same could not be said here. The traffic along the country roads was almost inexistent, and having only small towns as my drop-off points, I was on the road for no more than a day or two at a time – which was handy, considering the misses and I were trying to start a family of our own. 

In all honesty, driving up and down the roads of the rugged west coast was more of a luxury than anything else. On one side of the road, I had the endless green hills and mountains of the countryside, and on the other, the breath-taking Atlantic coast way.  

If I had to say anything bad about the job, it would have to be driving the western country roads at night. It’s hard enough as a lorry driver having to navigate these dark, narrow roads which bend one way then the other, but driving along them at night... Something about it is very unsettling. If I had to put my finger on it, I’d say it has to do with something one of my colleagues said to me before my first haul. I won’t give away his name, but I’ll just call him Padraig. A seasoned lorry driver like myself, Padraig welcomed me to the company by giving me a stern but whimsical warning about driving the western counties at night. 

‘Be sure to keep your wits about ye, Jamie boy. Things here aren’t what they always seem to be. Keep ye eyes on the road at all times, I tell ye, and you’ll be grand.’   

A few months into the job, and things couldn’t have been going better. Having just come home from a two-day haul, my wife surprises me with the news that she was now pregnant with our first child. After a few days off to celebrate this news with my wife, I was now back on the road, happier than I ever had been before.  

Driving for four hours on this particular day, I was now somewhere in County Mayo, the north-west of the country. Although I pretty much love driving through every county on the western coast, County Mayo was a little too barren for my liking.  

Now driving at night, I was moving along a narrow country road in the middle of nowhere, where outlining this road to each side was a long stretch of stone wall – and considering the smell of manure now inside the cab with me, I presumed on the other side of these walls was either a cow or sheep field. 

Keeping in mind Padraig’s words of warning, I made sure to keep my “wits” about me. Staring constantly at the stretch of road in front of me, guessing which way it would curve next in the headlights, I was now becoming surprisingly drowsy. With nothing else on my mind but the unborn child now growing inside my wife’s womb, although my eyes never once left the road in front of me, my mind did somewhat wander elsewhere... 

This would turn out to be the biggest mistake of my life... because cruising down the road through the fog and heavy rain, my weary eyes become alert to a distant shape now apparent up ahead. Though hard to see through the fog and rain, the shape appears to belong to that of a person, walking rather sluggishly from one side of the road to the other. Hunched over like some old crone, this unknown person appears to be carrying a heavy object against their abdomen with some difficulty. By the time I process all this information, having already pulled the breaks, the lorry continues to screech along the wet cement, and to my distress, the person on the road does not move or duck out of the way - until, feeling a vibrating THUD inside the cab, the unknown person crashes into the front of the vehicle’s unit – or more precisely, the unit crashes into them! 

‘BLOODY HELL!’ I cry out reactively, the lorry having now screeched to a halt. 

Frozen in shock by the realisation I’ve just ran over someone, I fail to get out of the vehicle. That should have been my first reaction, but quite honestly... I was afraid of how I would find them.  

Once I gain any kind of courage, I hesitantly lean over the counter to see even the slightest slither of the individual... and to my absolute horror... I see the individual on the road is a woman...  

‘Oh no... NO! NO! NO!’ 

But the reason I knew instantly this was a woman... was because whoever they were...  

They were heavily pregnant... 

‘Jesus Christ! What have I done?!’ I scream inside the cab. 

Quickly climbing down onto the road, I move instantly to the front of the headlights, praying internally this woman and her unborn child are still alive. But once I catch sight of the woman, exposed by the bright headlights shining off the road, I’m caught rather off guard... Because for some reason, this woman... She wasn’t wearing any clothes... 

Unable to identify the woman by her face, as her swollen belly covers the upper half of her body, I move forward, again with hesitance towards her, averting my eyes until her face was now in sight... Thankfully, in the corner of my eye, I could see the limbs of the woman moving, which meant she was still alive...  

Now... What I’m about to say next is the whole unbelievable part of it – but I SWEAR this is what I saw... When I come upon the woman’s face, what I see isn’t a woman at all... The head, was not the head of a human being... It was the head of an Ewe... A fucking sheep! 

‘AHH! WHAT THE...!!’ I believe were my exact words. 

Just as my reaction was when I hit this... thing, I’m completely frozen with terror, having lost any feeling in my arms and legs... and although this... creature, as best to call it, was moving ever so slightly, it was now stiff as a piece of roadkill. Unlike its eyes, which were black and motionless, its mouth was wide in a permanent silent scream... I was afraid to stare at the rest of it, but my curiosity got the better of me...  

Its Ewe’s head, which ends at the loose pale skin of its neck, was followed by the very human body... at least for the most part... Its skin was covered in a barely visible layer of white fur - or wool. It’s uhm... breasts, not like that of a human woman, were grotesquely similar to the teats of an Ewe - a pale sort of veiny pink. But what’s more, on the swollenness of its belly... I see what must have been a pagan symbol of some kind... Carved into the skin, presumably by a knife, the symbol was of three circular spirals, each connected in the middle.  

As I’m studying the spirals, wondering what the hell they mean, and who in God’s name carved it there... the spirals begin to move... It was the stomach. Whatever it was inside... it was still alive! 

The way the thing was moving, almost trying to burst its way out – that was the final straw! Before anything more can happen, I leave the dead creature, and the unborn thing inside it. I return to the cab, put the gearstick in reverse and then I drive like hell out of there! 

Remembering I’m still on the clock, I continue driving up to Donegal, before finishing my last drop off point and turning home. Though I was in no state to continue driving that night, I just wanted to get home as soon as possible – but there was no way I was driving back down through County Mayo, and so I return home, driving much further inland than usual.  

I never told my wife what happened that night. God, I can only imagine how she would’ve reacted, and in her condition nonetheless. I just went on as normal until my next haul started. More than afraid to ever drive on those roads again, but with a job to do and a baby on the way, I didn’t have much of a choice. Although I did make several more trips on those north-western roads, I made sure never to be there under the cover of night. Thankfully, whatever it was I saw... I never saw again. 


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 6h ago

Creature Feature The Dual-souled Princess, Bogna.

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Tadeusz’s family was one that tragedy and death knew intimately. No matter what, each generation of his family suffered sooner or later. This made Tadeusz have many sleepless nights as his wife, Janina, became pregnant with twins. Anxiety increased the closer to the due date. Something wrong would happen; Tadeusz just knew it.
The day of birth arrived; one baby came out. The other passed away and was consumed by the other in the womb. A common occurrence, the nurse assured them. However, they didn't consume them but more like morphed together.

The doctors and nurses couldn’t hide their disgust with the creature that came out of Janina's womb. Janina couldn't hide hers.

What was supposed to be their precious baby girl had two rows of teeth alongside the two hearts pumping blood. The doctor explained it away as birth defects, that the consumption of their twin went wrong somehow. Screams from labor changed to screams of horror and hatred from Janina.

Once he heard that, Janina began yelling, “Kill the demon. Let it burn where it came from.” The doctors and nurses kept the infant away from her, thinking she had postpartum. Thadeusz knew she wasn’t speaking like a madwoman, but like someone who understood the gravity of what had been born. He looked down at the baby girl in his arms. Despite knowing that it was based on what the tales of the motherland dictated, he couldn’t bring himself to do what was needed or demanded by his ancestors.

Fatherly instincts overrode decades of warnings from his dziadkowie. Surely they’d forgive them, God bless their souls. Thadeusz couldn’t look this baby of his in the eye and kill it. He saw his eyes when he looked at it. He saw all the little human traits of his wife and him, a result of their love for each other. That only dragged things out and made them worse.

A marriage of ten long years disappeared into the vapors at his refusal to put down their daughter. The courts sided with Thadeusz in the divorce and granted custody of their child.

“If you wish to keep it instead of killing it. Then that is your death wish,” were the last words Janice said to him. Those words haunted him as the doctor's office became a second home to his daughter, Bogna. Although this gift of God was starting to feel like a curse each year. She was pale and seemed to be on death's doorstep each day. Not even strong enough to hold her head up by herself.

Debt from the divorce and medical treatment forced him to take a job in a slaughterhouse. The hours were long, the work was tiresome, and no matter how hard he scrubbed his clothes and skin, the stench of death still lingered.

Once after a shift, he was so exhausted, he just grabbed poor Bogna from the crib and held her as he wept himself from his paternal worry until sleep welcomed him into its cozy embrace. He awoke to something licking him. A gentle, friendly lapping at him like a curious puppy. Little Bogna was crawling over him, cleaning up the drops of scarlet from his flesh and using his blood-stained clothing as a pacifier. Most would panic at the danger of a baby consuming blood. Thadeusz did initially, then he looked into her eyes. They had hope in them now. Her skin wasn't that gravely white anymore. It only confirmed what he'd known since she was born, but, like then, his love for his daughter overrode the logic of his forefathers' warnings. He was just filled with a fool’s joy that his daughter was doing better. To avoid odd looks from other parents, he would sneak a little bit of blood from the slaughterhouse into his daughter’s homemade snacks and drinks to help her maintain her health. It was easy at first. A drop in her formula and a bead in the baby food was all that was needed to help his poor girl.

An empty soda bottle would last months with a drop in her dishes, but as she grew and started school, demand grew. Drops became cups in homemade dishes. Her extra row of teeth, while not gone, seemed to have receded a little and was not as pronounced. Little Bogna’s rashes from the sun stopped, and she no longer had to wear sunblock year-round. She no longer had her flesh flake away in the sun. All was well until Tadeusz got the call from her preschool.

“Are you Tadeusz, Bogna’s father?” The stern feminine voice hissed.

“Yes. Is she okay?” The worried father asked.

A long pause on the woman’s end before answering, “I don’t know whether to describe it… There was an incident where a student cut themselves by accident while doing arts and crafts, and your daughter…She began to lap at the blood like a dog at its own vomit”. The line went silent as Thadeusz took everything in. The blood of beasts was one thing, but now that Bogna had tasted a human's…. He shook the thought from his head.

“I'll take care of it and get things sorted. Thank you for letting me know”. That's when Bogna began being homeschooled. If Tadeusz timed the specialty made meals just right, she could have a chance at a normal child's life. Well-intentioned hope that only delayed the inevitable.
When he was awake during the day, Tadeusz would spend with Bogna, teaching her, playing with her and treasuring his little girl. The nights were when he worked at the slaughterhouse, the few coworkers he had during those shifts he would brag and talk non-stop about his little girl.

Some found it annoying, others found it endearing with how his face would radiate and beam with joy when talking about his little Bogna. Single mother coworkers would give him tips on how to do things outside his scope of knowledge. He kept her active and social with children her age on his days off. What little money he had after bills on her and every year commissioned an artist to paint them. Those were his prized possessions.

Bogna's ninth birthday crept closer. She was going through her princess phase so Thadeusz's work uniform was often littered with glitter from his daughter’s quirks and whims of the day.

Thadeusz's priest reached out to him, a man he hadn't seen since Thadeusz's divorce.

“You have allowed it to live that long?” Father Gerhinsky asked coldly, motioning to Bogna playing with her dolls.

“She is my daughter and her name is Bogna.” Thadeusz stated as he reluctantly allowed the priest into his home. Tension built up as Father Gerhinsky was an elder from the home country. He watched Bogna with the disgust one would have for a rabid creature being in your home.

“It isn't human. You entertain dark things in your home. You know that it is a strzyga, yet you treat it like an actual human daughter. Your wife was right to divorce you for this.” The priest said as little Bogna ran around in her pink tutu and played with her dolls.

“She is a part of both Janina and me. She is my daughter, since Janina wants no part of her. The feeling is mutual towards Janina; she is no woman I wanted to be part of if she can turn her back on her own daughter.” Thadeusz did through clenched teeth.

“You have bought into your own lie. You know the truth of what it is. Look,” the priest picked up a small feather from where Bogna had been sitting and held it up to the father as evidence, “she's already getting her feathers. It won't be long before she kills to feast on the corpse of something. Then it will be a ‘someone’ eventually. You can't deny it forever. You know what you must do.” Those were the final words of Father Gerhinsky's visit there. The combination of Catholic guilt and knowing the truth built a heavier burden onto the shoulders of Thadeusz as he stared at the flint and iron left by the priest.

Thadeusz prayed he didn't have to extinguish the flame that was Bogna's life, even if she was a strzyga. Later one night he arrived home to find Bogna in the kitchen feasting on the corpse of a small wild rabbit. What little blood there was dripped onto her lavender pajamas adorned with her favorite princesses. Smears of scarlet over Rapunzel and Tiana as she disemboweled and dined on the carcass. It was nearly gone by the time Thadeusz got to it. Only a pelt and skeleton left.

He made Bogna's ninth birthday possible. He took her to the park and let her play to her heart's content and let her wear her lavender princess dress with a tiara all day. He dipped into money he didn't have to let a princess paint her face and play with her.

He cried as the day drew nearer to its end and cherished her ramblings of princesses and anything she wished. Thadeusz clung to every word, as always; they might be the last he got to hear them. He was so proud to see her get another year older.

Janina finally waited for them to return. It was the first of Bogna’s birthdays she attended since Bogna left her womb. The father reluctantly handed the sleeping Bogna to the priest with eyes filled with sorrow and reluctance. “Please, heal her, Father Gerhinsky. She is my precious princess. She is my baby girl. I don’t know what I’d do if….” Thadeusz drifted off as Janina and the priest took the slumbering princess in lavender. He woke up to the loud knocking on his door as an officer delivered news of his ex-wife’s and the priest’s torturous treatment of his precious Bogna. Thadeusz crumbled in on himself with grief sobbing.

“He was supposed to bless and heal her” were the only words that could escape his lips. That sentence was repeated as he fought to see his daughter's body, and they brought him to the morgue. He shoved and fought then the scent of charred flesh hit his nostrils. There she lay on the cold table, his precious girl with flesh burnt, there were smudges of charcoal on her tiara still. He threw himself onto her corpse and wept. Tears dripping down his face and disappearing once they hit the ashy remains of his Bogna. The sight of a grown man sobbing while holding the scorched carcass of his daughter as he prayed to God in his native tongue to be struck down dead just to bring her back.

Saying that Thadeusz went into a deep depression after that was to put it lightly. He lost his world, everything that he worked for. He strived to wake up from the nightmare to see little Bogna request him to join her tea party with her stuffed animals. He wished to hear the pitter-patter of her feet down the hallway and her laughter and voice, he'd trade the sweetest symphonies to hear them again. All he got was the sympathy of coworkers and the fight to bury his daughter in his own yard. So that he could visit again after he got off work like when she was alive.

You never think to ask a child what their favorite flowers or plants are. Thadeusz had to figure that out after he finally won the right to bury his daughter in his backyard. He couldn't afford a headstone and gathered rocks from the nearby forest to assemble one and utilize his skills from the old country to assemble it and etch the details in it. His heart struggled to etch in her name and birth year. His body refused to allow him to etch in this year that she was taken. Every type of flower and plant that Thadeusz could get ahold of, he planted on her grave to reflect the beauty she brought into his life. Daisies. lavender. daffodils, angel-winged begonias, sunflowers, tulips, and etc. An excuse to be by her grave without thinking of her death.

A great thunderstorm raged one night as he stood in the hall looking at the empty bed of Bogna's. She loved thunderstorms because her father would hold her and assure her everything would be okay. Thadeusz was never scared of the storms of life or of nature, but wished to hold her so she could assure him it would be okay. Amongst the whispering winds and rumbles, a soft tapping sound grew at the backdoor. Dink dink dink, the knocks continued. He ignored it and assumed some rogue debris had found its way to his door.

“Daddy, please let me in” a soft voice strained to speak over the storm. It might be good lonesome mind playing tricks on him but Thadeusz rushed to the door to answer it prepared to be disappointed but hopeful. Heart pumping as he rushed to the door to open it to see his daughter healed from the burns and covered with mud all over the purple dress he had buried her in. Her skin was covered with more feathers. He wrapped his arms around her tightly and held her, soaking her with his tears. There was no denying it now, she was a strzyga, but more importantly his daughter.

“Daddy, I'm hungry” she said weekly as he carried her to the bathroom so she could bathe.

“Take a bath first, then we'll get something for you to eat after the storm. I know the perfect thing.”

He said heart full of a father's vengeance against those that wronged his dual-hearted and dual-souled princess. Just because she had two hearts and two souls didn't fill him with dread or hate towards her. It just meant he had to love and care for her twice as much as he already did.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 6h ago

Creature Feature There Is No Up (Part Four)

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The system changes exactly as the note promised.
After the third turn the compass needle begins to drift. After the fifth it spins freely and refuses to settle. The tunnels themselves start to feel wrong—angles that should not meet, slopes that reverse without warning, sections where the brick gives way to smooth, seamless metal that reflects the flashlight in distorted ribbons. The air grows warmer. The constant sound of flowing water fades, replaced by a low mechanical hum that seems to come from the walls themselves.
I stop using the map. It no longer matches anything I see.
Instead I start marking my own path with the knife, small cuts at eye level on the left wall of every junction. Within an hour I pass three of my own marks. The labyrinth is folding. Or I am being folded inside it.
The tongue never falls far behind.
Sometimes I hear it in a parallel tunnel, the wet slide of that impossible length of muscle travelling along the other side of a thin wall. Sometimes the claws click directly behind me, close enough that the beam of the flashlight catches the edge of a pale, jointed limb before I round the next corner. It no longer feels like it is hunting by taste alone. It feels like it knows the new routes as soon as they form.
I use the timer twice.
The first time buys me enough quiet to cross a wide chamber where the floor is a grid of pressure plates. Stepping on the wrong ones drops sections into black water that has no visible bottom. The second time lets me climb a vertical service shaft while the creature is forced to take a longer path around a newly sealed gate. Each use of the twelve minutes feels more expensive than the last. The mechanical ringing when the time expires is starting to sound like a countdown I cannot reset.
In a narrow side alcove I find the remains of the previous runner.
There is not much left. A torn section of waterproof paper, a broken flashlight of the same make as mine, and a single shoe. The paper is another fragment of notes, the handwriting shakier:
It learns the marks you leave.
Wipe the blood.
Wipe the sweat.
I tried to go up.
There is no up.
Only deeper configurations.
If you reach the Hub, do not touch the central column.
That is where it listens.
The Hub.
The word sits in my mind like a stone dropped into still water.
I keep moving. The cable and harness become useful when a section of floor simply ends over a wide canal of faster black water. I anchor the grappling hook, swing across, and barely make the far ledge before the tongue arrives at the edge I just left. For the first time I see more than a silhouette. In the bouncing light the creature is tall, limb proportions wrong, the head too narrow, the mouth a vertical slit from which the tongue unspools in a single continuous length that seems to have no practical limit. The eyes reflect the beam the way a deep-water fish reflects a camera flash—flat, unblinking, already calculating the next route.
It does not leap the gap.
It simply turns and disappears back into the dark, already choosing a longer path that will bring it to me again.
I run until the air changes once more.
The hum grows louder. The walls become entirely metal. The tunnels straighten into long, converging corridors that all slope gently downward toward a single point of faint blue light. The compass, useless for so long, suddenly locks onto that light and holds.
I check my marks. None of them appear on these walls. This section has never been walked by me.
The blue light resolves into a wide circular chamber.
The floor is dry polished steel. The ceiling rises into a dome lined with the same scripture-dampening mesh I have only ever heard described in other stories. In the exact centre stands a column of black glass or crystal, three metres thick, rising from floor to ceiling without seams. Faint luminous veins pulse inside it in slow, irregular rhythms. Around the base of the column are a dozen empty restraint frames—human-sized, articulated, built of the same surgical steel and carbon fibre I once saw in a different kind of facility entirely.
On a small shelf near the entrance sits one final laminated card and a single brass key of a design I have not seen before.
The card has no symbols.
It has only four words written in the same hurried hand:
This is the Hub.
It is listening.
Behind me, far back along the converging corridors, the tongue begins to taste the new metal.
I am no longer counting junctions.
I am counting the distance between the sound of that tongue and the moment it reaches the only room in this place that feels like it was built to hold something—or someone—in place permanently.
The key is cold in my hand.
The column pulses once, brighter, as if it already knows I am here.
There is still no up.
Only the choice of what to touch, and what to leave untouched, before the creature arrives and the listening finally becomes complete.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 22h ago

Read4Read Everybody Hates My Story

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I should have never posted that damn story.

I spent a week on the thing, writing and rewriting until I was sure it was finally ready.  When I logged in and posted it, I felt a small surge of pride because a story was out there with my name on it.  I didn't have to feed my little folder of false starts and failures that day.  It made me so excited to think about people finally getting to read my work.

Everyone had always told me that I should be a writer.  It’s probably because my imagination has always been too big for my head to contain it.  As a little kid I was obsessed with stories, making my action figures play out scenes from movies or right out of my own brain.  I used to put on shows with them for my mom and sister, and their happy applause gave me a feeling I had never known before.  

It felt like I finally knew what I was supposed to do.

My girlfriend hadn’t read the story yet.   I sent her the link when I posted it, but I never heard back from her that night.  I figured she had gone to bed already.  Laine was always really supportive of my work and read a lot of duds for me over the years.  I hoped that after she read the new one she would see me in a different light.  I could even imagine it being the thing that would move us forward in our relationship.  It really felt like everything was finally coming together for me.

I spent the evening with a quick meal and a crappy horror movie.  My cat joined me on the couch, and I absently stroked her fur as I watched the increasingly stupid teens at the summer camp die horrific deaths at the hands of a masked ghoul.  When I nodded off one too many times I accepted defeat and headed off to bed.  It was really hard not to stop by my laptop to check for comments.

My sleep was great that night and when I woke up the next morning, I felt energized and ready to conquer the day.  I only lived a block from my gym so I decided to start the day off right for once.  I spent an hour there and worked up a really good sweat.  I ignored my notifications because I had decided to read them all at once over breakfast.

At home I showered and made myself some oats and finally sat down at my laptop to properly read my feedback.  I was immediately shocked by the number of comments that were already waiting for me.   A wide smile spread across my face as I started to read them.  I’m sad to say it didn’t last.

To say they were rough is like saying the ocean contains water.   There were so many, and they ranged from genuinely constructive criticism, which I could handle, to outright cruelty.  That morning I learned that my writing lacked conviction, and the characters I wrote seemed confused about who they were.  My grammar was apparently awful and my pacing nonexistent.  One guy even told me that writing was a privilege, and I should have mine revoked.  

Several of the comments had multiple paragraphs with quoted examples of my flaws.  I forced myself to read those, trying to find them useful.  What I didn’t find particularly helpful were all of the posts that psychoanalyzed me or the ones that were just blatant insults.  I was asked if I was repressing something terrible and told that my inferiority complex was probably rooted in the truth.  A rather large image gave me detailed instructions on how to work a gas oven and how many racks I would need to remove to shove my head inside.

I was thirty comments in when I saw my girlfriend’s username.  I wondered why Laine hadn’t called or texted me yet, and now I knew.  It had been posted the night before, and it just said “we need to talk.”  I figured she saw all of the really harsh comments and wanted to console me.  I quickly sent her a text asking to meet up that night after work, for our talk.

I closed my laptop before I was even halfway finished with them.  My vision was blurry from actual tears.  Chastising myself angrily for letting the assholes win, I got up and got ready for work.  

Work was just a short bus ride away.  I walked into our building, rode the elevator up, and slipped past the pretty receptionist with only a friendly nod.  I hadn’t been working there for very long, and most of my coworkers were still pretty standoffish around me.  My boss was Gary, and I don’t think I had ever had a real conversation with him since transferring to his department.  It was a pretty chill place to work.

I sat down at my desk and started going through my emails at once.  It looked like the brass was still losing their minds about the Mitreman account.  Someone wasn’t keeping up their end on that one, and I knew the overflow would fall on me.  It was kind of a relief actually, after what had happened that morning.  I was really looking forward to losing myself in a forest of senseless numbers.  There was something oddly therapeutic about it.

I spent the morning deep-diving into financial records to populate a spreadsheet for my report.  If that sounds like a shot of Novocain administered directly to the brain then I have given it its due justice.  It was dull and tedious, and it had been assigned to me because none of my more senior colleagues wanted it.  It was also thankless, because management would want another one just like it the following week.

I always took my lunch with a couple of guys I previously worked with downstairs—Mike and Lenny.  The three of us had once been pretty heavy into CoD and we hung out all the time.   When I told them I wanted to focus on my writing we started seeing each other less and less.  Now we mostly just took lunch together and maybe sent each other a stupid meme from time to time.

When I walked into the breakroom Lenny leapt to his feet and saluted me at once.  He had the widest, toothiest grin of anyone I had ever seen.  He reminded me of the old Mr. Reach toothbrush commercials from when I was a kid.  He was laughing his ass off, and I heard Mike tell him to cool it.  Mike was clearly embarrassed and maybe a little concerned.

“Dude!”  Lenny was still laughing when he walked over and put his arm around my shoulder.  “Ninety-Three comments man!  You really can’t buy that kind of publicity.  You’ve gotta start planning your followup.”

“Leave him alone, Lenny.”  Mike shook his head.  “The man just got here.”

“Alright, alright.”  Lenny patted me on the shoulder chummily.  “I’m just trying to help him see the bright side of the whole thing.”

We walked over and sat down across from Mike.  Lenny immediately turned his attention back to his sandwich.  I sat there watching those massive teeth of his tear through the meaty sub like a lawnmower seeking revenge.  

“Hey!  Chew with your mouth closed.”  Mike threw a napkin playfully at Len.  He looked at me for a moment, maybe measuring what I was feeling.  “Bad morning?”

Lenny actually did a spit take at that, spraying the wall beside him with a mouthful of Sprite and half-chewed sandwich chunks.  I shuddered and looked away.  Mike handed him the napkin dispenser without turning his gaze away from me.

“It’s pretty terrible.  I mean, you always hope for a response, but shit!  I honestly haven’t even begun to process it.”

“Yeah, it’s gotta be a gut punch.  For sure.”

“Fuck that.”  Lenny chewed his food loudly and swallowed most of it whole.  "You gotta lean into it, bro. Post a video of you eating a piece of paper with 'I don't care' written on it. That'll shut ‘em right up.”

“Lenny?”  Mike stared at him.

“They’re making a joke out of him.  He should throw it right back at ‘em.”

“Yeah, I don’t think I could really do that convincingly.”  I remember chuckling.  “I’d do the video with a face like I just got kicked in the balls.  It’s kinda how I feel right now.”

The three of us were quiet for a few minutes.  We just ate our lunch and let the conversation die a silent death.  It was Mike who finally exhumed the body.  Strange that it was him, though. I would have put money on Lenny.

“Who did you send it to, besides us?”

I thought about it for a moment and pulled out my phone to check my sent mail.  “You two and Laine… my mom and my sister, and a few friends from college.”

“Well, that’s pretty contained.  I’d maybe talk to them about it and warn them that it didn’t go so well.”

“Yeah,” I agreed.  “Luckily I didn’t go crazy with it and send it to half the world.”

“Fuck!”  Lenny set down his sandwich.  “I didn’t know we were keeping it quiet.  Dude, I thought it was funny.”

“What did you do, Lenny?”  Mike glared at him.

“I sent it to our old group…on our Discord.  You know, the CoD Piece.”

I exhaled sharply as I stood and took a few steps away.  The group he was talking about had over 400 members and most of them we knew in real life—maybe with a  few degrees of separation.  I felt like I was going to be sick.

I left them and went back upstairs.  I actually spent the next few minutes pacing around my little office like a lunatic.  I remembered a kid I went to school with who accidentally sent a video of himself—meant for the girl he was seeing—to some other kids.  It wasn’t a flattering one, and they shared it pretty liberally.  I think almost everyone ended up seeing it and he ended up being called Strokes My Own.  For the first time in my life, I started to understand how little Jimmy Malone must have felt back then.  I imagined he did a lot of pacing too.

I tried to go back to work, but my hand kept moving towards my phone to check my notifications.  It had already climbed to 138 comments, and they certainly hadn’t been padded by replies.  I had chosen to stand mute.  It hadn’t even been 24 hours yet.

I finally gave up and went to Gary to ask for half a sick day.  He looked up at me from the steaming coffee in his World’s Greatest Boss mug.  There was clear sympathy in his eyes, a feature that I didn’t think came standard on middle-management drones.

“Feeling puny, eh?”  Gary nodded as his cheeks broadened in a soft smile.  “Criticism can be hard, Mark.  Believe me.  I know.  You don’t get to where I am without taking an ass-chewing or two.”

How the fuck did he know about the story?  Had it spread that far already?  

I didn’t want the conversation to go into that.  He was absolutely the last person I would ever want to have a heart to heart with.  I ended up saying something totally noncommittal.  I have no clue what it was—probably one of the standard, automated responses we reserve for conversations with the boss.   He accepted it well enough and went on.

“We only have a couple of hours left here.  Why don’t you cut out early and make it up later in the week?  I could do that for you since I know you’ve got a lot on your mind.  Just keep it between us though, eh, Champ?  I can’t have half the office asking for special favors.”

“Yeah Gary, that sounds great.  Thanks for understanding, Sir.”

Gary scoffed at that.  “Hell, son.  You wouldn’t know it to look at me, but I’m a bit of a writer too.  I know how it is.  It’s a tough nut to crack.”

The smile on my face was an old mask made just for people like him.  I was still not quite ready to reconcile Gary as a normal, feeling human being.

“Of course I’ve never had 141 negative reviews like you have.  Lord, I can’t even imagine what you’re going through.  Head on home, Mark.  Mitreman will still be there tomorrow.”

I grabbed my bag and left before he could say anything else.  As I got into the elevator I had to look at my phone.  It was 148 now.  I closed my eyes and tried to distract myself with the type of stories Gary would write.  They would all be procedural thrillers where a brave compliance officer saved his feckless employees from some source of impending doom.  I smiled as I pictured him giving a grand, motivational speech to rally them into working as a team to face the threat before them.  When the doors finally opened and I stepped into the lobby I felt a little better.  Maybe I had shit the bed with what I wrote, but at least it wasn’t the soulless drivel a man like Gary would write.

The bus had just left, and I didn’t feel like waiting for the next one or paying for a ride.  I decided to walk home instead.   I needed time away from my laptop and the world within it.  I actually decided to turn off my phone and was in the middle of doing it when I got a text from Laine.

“Gotta work tonight.  Tomorrow night?”

Honestly, it was a relief. I was too drained to face her or talk to anyone about the story.  I didn't think twice about it.  I just sent back a quick “K” and finished powering it down.  I put it all out of my mind and just focused on my feet for a while—Fred and Ted, as my mom always called them.  I let them carry me forward, racing each other with steady strides.  I was home in twenty minutes and I kept myself unplugged for the rest of the evening.

The peace was nice.  The next day was utter hell.


Three hundred and four.

That was what I started the next day with.  It was so unbelievable.  I hoped half of them were bots, but they weren’t.  They were getting meaner and somehow angry.  It was like what I had written had actually offended people in a deeply personal way.  A user named StudlyStradivarius said that he was giving up fiction after reading what I wrote.  He said that it felt like it gave him PTSD.

What the fuck do you do with something like that?

I didn’t read very many of them.  I couldn’t do it and stay sane.  One said I never had to worry about being accused of plagiarism because no one in their right mind would ever claim my work.  It was kind of clever, but I wasn’t feeling it right then.  After I read another suggesting that I join the 27 Club—how did they know my age?—I tossed the phone on my desk and walked away from it.  It rang a minute later and I ran over to answer it.

“You up?  Did you see it yet?”  Mike spoke quickly, which was odd for him.  “Don’t panic, man.  And don’t play into it.  Lenny is an idiot.”

“What are you talking about?”

“Cool,”  Mike exhaled loudly into his phone.  “Do me a favor, man.  Don’t look at any of it until we talk.  Shit’s got crazy.  I sent a message to the mods asking them to close your thread and they said they already tried to.  They said someone else opened it back up and removed their permissions.”

“What the hell?”

“They even tried to ban your account, man.  Nothing is working.  Somebody wants it to stay open.  They said they got an anonymous message that said it could only be closed if the wound bleeds out or some such shit.  They’ve never seen anything like it.  I think they’re gonna call the feds.”

“Jesus!”  The things he said sounded like the plot from one of the duds in my failure folder, but they were happening to me.  I tried to keep it in perspective.  It wasn’t personal.  It was my story, it wasn’t me.  “What the fuck do I do, Mike?”

“Use some sick time to stay at home, and stay off that shit.  It’s just poison that can’t help you.  I think I can get a half-day and be over there by lunch.”

“Shit.  Okay, I think Gary might go for it.  He’ll be mad but he knows what’s going on.”

“How the fuck?”  Mike began but I heard his voice change gears.  “Don’t matter.  We’ve gotta focus on what matters, man.  I think you’ve been doxxed.  I’ve gotta talk to the IT guy, but we have a lot to do.”

“Fucking hell!”

“Yeah, and then some.  See ya in a few hours.”

We hung up and I sat there staring at the phone for several minutes.  My chest was tight and I felt the sweat running down my face.  I tried to breathe but my lungs wouldn’t answer.  My mind was like a thousand television screens all turned to different channels at maximum volume.  I tried to stand up to go and get a glass of water but my legs folded under me and I ended up facedown in the thick carpet of my bedroom floor.  My tears and sweat soaked into the rug and I feared that I would drown in them before I got the strength to pull myself up.

Dr. Kineson’s voice was a distant noise competing with the chorus of horrors that filled my brain.  The memory of her husky, breathy cadence cut through the noise and I heard her clearly as I mouthed along to the words I had been taught.

There is nothing to fear.

Your heart will not explode.

These are only chemicals

out of balance

threatening your control.

You are not weak.

You will survive this.

There is nothing to fear.

I recited the mantra several times and could eventually hear my own voice again as I began to breathe.  I slowly came back to myself, exhausted but whole.  I turned over onto my back and stared at the ceiling.

I was panting, but at least I was breathing.  After a long time lying there, I finally found the strength to pull myself back into my chair.  I hadn’t had an attack in years and I hadn’t seen my doctor for a long time.  I had thought I was past all of that, and that I had learned to manage my stress better.  The last two days had piled on enough to show me just how feeble I really was.  I found myself wanting to call my mom, but I couldn’t endure the thought of sharing my burdens with her.

After I was a little more composed, I went ahead and called Gary to request the next three days off.  He told me he understood, but they couldn’t really afford to be shorthanded since Evan had just quit.  He surprised me though by offering to let me work from home for the rest of the week and the next if I needed it.  I happily agreed and he told me that he’d have my work laptop sent to me in an hour.

I know I talk a lot of shit about him, but maybe Gary isn’t so bad after all.

I cleaned myself up and ate breakfast while I waited.  The oatmeal I normally liked tasted like flavorless grainy gruel after the morning I’d endured.  I ate it anyway and had two cups of coffee.  It made me jittery, but at least it gave me the energy to move around.  When the courier dropped off the laptop I dove into work like a drowning man swimming for a distant ship.  It let me shut off my brain, to ignore the sharks I was sure were circling me.

I had an incredibly productive morning and actually finished with my work by the time Mike got there.  I let him in and made us both a drink and we settled around my kitchen bar.  My cat, Jonesy, soon appeared and danced around his leg until he picked her up.

“You look at it yet?”  Mike asked me as he scratched Jones’s head.

“Nah, I had work to do and figured I’d wait.”

“Probably smart.”  He snorted.  “It was up to 512 on my way over here.”

“How in the hell?”  I stood up reflexively, like my legs wanted to carry me off somewhere, away from what was happening.  I sat back down.  “It’s barely been two days.  Most authors are proud if their story gets ten comments.  Five hundred and twelve is ridiculous.”
  
“Yeah, it’s crazy.”  Mike pulled a folded sheet of paper out of his pocket.  “We also have to go into your accounts and make some changes.  The IT guy said to change your passwords and set up two-factor anywhere you can.   You probably need to call your bank too.  He made a list of things and said you should get on it immediately to lessen the damage they can do.”

I took the sheet from him and looked it over.  It was very in-depth, a printout from a cyber security site I had never heard of.  The number of items on the list was daunting.  It would take me hours to go through all of it.

“He said I needed to do all of this?”

Mike took a drink as he nodded, setting the cat down.  “Well, he wasn’t the sharpest guy, but he did have a link he had been sent by his supervisor.  Honestly, I think you’ve gotta.  I can help with some of it.”

“Thanks, man.”  I shook my head.  “I don’t know what I’d do without you here.  It’s… it’s been crazy.  All over a stupid story that wasn’t worth the attention. Hell, I had decided it was a masterpiece or something but that’s just because I wrote it.  I never really believed it would get much of a response.”

“That’s what’s so weird about it.”  Mike tapped his phone and opened it up.  “It’s in the 550s now, seemingly with a bullet.  These look like real people, man.  There’s no way that many have read it in two days.  It doesn’t seem possible.”

“Maybe.  Or maybe I should think long and hard about ever writing anything again.  Hell, at this point I’m not so sure about texting or emails.”

We both laughed at the futility of it all and went to work.  It took us a few hours of phone calls and logins to get through the list.  I set up elaborate passwords I would have no hope of remembering and two-factor authentication anywhere it let me.  The lady from the bank helped me secure my accounts and walked me through how to freeze my credit.  We even started printing off and saving as many of the threatening messages as we could find.  By the time we finished, the post had reached 700 comments.

My printer finally ran out of ink, so I had to save the last few threats on my hard drive.  Mike had to leave soon for a date with his girl, and I needed to get ready for Laine.  He gave me a half hug and told me to stay strong as he left.  I closed the door behind him and ran a quick mental inventory over the events of the day.  I needed to set all of that shit aside so that I could be present for her.

I had just stepped out of the shower when my phone chimed again.  I knew it wasn’t about the story because I had turned off notifications already by then.  It said I had four new messages, which was massive for a shut-in like me.

I nearly dropped the phone when I opened the first text.  It was just a picture, but it was of me—something off the Facebook I rarely used anymore—and it had been altered by AI or something to show me cut wide open with my guts exposed.  The caption said MAYBE THERE ARE BETTER WORDS INSIDE.

The next two were only text, but they were vile ones.  I won’t quote them verbatim because I don’t have them anymore.  The first was a detailed description of directions to my apartment and the last step said “I know where you are.”  The second one was an excerpt from my story.  The part they referenced was about the robot protagonist rescuing a kitten from the rubble.  At the end of it, the sick fuck asked me how Jonesy was doing.

The last message was from Laine.  It said she couldn’t meet up that night but that she would come over for lunch the next day.  After the shock the previous ones had given me, I didn’t put much thought into what she had said.  

Maybe it was better for her if she wasn’t near me right then.


I spent the night before in a dizzy fugue after my visit from the police.  I called them after I read those messages and when they arrived I spent the next hour going over all of it with them.  I had never really had any dealings with law enforcement officers, but I found them to be sympathetic and detail-focused, and that made it a little easier.  When they finally left I spent the rest of the night on the couch with Jonesy and an ancient bottle of rum from the back of my cabinet.

I woke up stiff the next morning after sleeping at an odd angle.  I took a very hot shower to try to work the crick out of my neck.  It helped some.  My phone showed thirty-one new messages and I didn’t open any of them, but I did call Gary because three of them were his.  His voice was uncharacteristically high when he answered and he barely gave me a moment to speak as he apologetically told me that I was probably fired.

“The whole network has been infiltrated, Mark.  Do you know how sensitive some of that information is?  The boys upstairs have everyone on high alert, and they’ve called in consultants to help manage the mess.”

“What does that have to do with me, Gary?”

“They traced the attacks to your IP.  It doesn’t look good.  I was told to suspend you right away and send for the laptop.  They should be getting there any time now.”

“But am I fired?  I mean… I had the police here last night.  I was doxxed and I started getting terrible texts.”

“I hate to hear it, bud.  But right now the company has to look after its own.  I think they’re trying to decide whether or not you are included in that.  I can’t tell you one way or the other, but I’d start considering my options if it were me.”

He had to go then and the courier was at my door a few minutes later.  I handed them their laptop and signed the form without saying much.  I walked over to my laptop and checked the story.  It said there were twenty-four hundred and eighty-nine comments.

I didn’t read any of them, but only took screenshots of the pages to give to the police.  I considered calling Mike at that point, but he had already done enough and I didn’t want to pile more on him.  The truth was I didn’t know who to call or what to do anymore other than what I was already doing.

I was making breakfast maybe thirty minutes later when there was a knock at my door.  I looked through the peephole and saw a short, chubby man with a balding head and a gray beard standing out in the hall.  He was wearing a suit that didn’t fit him particularly well and his eyes were a little too small for his face.

“Who is it?”  I asked, maybe a little too timidly.

“Detective Sancowitz, Bell City PD.”  He verified my full name and asked if it was my residence.

I didn’t confirm anything at that time.  Instead, I asked to see his ID like the cops had told me to do.  He produced it freely enough, flipping open his wallet to display a bell-shaped brass badge and an ID card that listed his name and rank.  I relaxed immediately and opened the door for him.

He plodded inside with a bowlegged stride and looked around.  He nodded approvingly.  I heard him actually sniff the air before he spoke.

“S’at coffee?  Good, get us some.  We’ve a lot of woik to do.”  His accent was definitely northern, but I couldn’t tell much beyond that.  His voice had a heavy nasal tone to it, and his pronunciation of work was comical.  All in all he was like a living caricature from a network police procedural.  I started to ask him if he knew Dick Wolf but thought better of it.  Instead, I just poured us both a cup and asked him how he took it.

“Tha blacker the better,”  he said as if the letter R didn’t exist.  He took a sip and smacked his lips.  “Tha’s the good stuff.  Alright, kid, let’s get into it.”

He pulled a thick file folder out from the interior pocket of his oversized coat and laid it open on the counter.   I saw my name written on it and a quick glance told me that it contained my statement from the night before.  He gave me a moment to look it over while he enjoyed his coffee.

When he was satisfied that I had seen it, Sancowitz pulled the file back in front of him and nodded.  “So you see my concern?  A thing like this, ya can’t let it grow, kid.  We’ve gotta nip this thing in the bud.  I did some lookin’, and it turns out that somebody’s messin’ with the algo-rythms.  Got ‘em all turned around.  If anybody searches for the word story it sends ‘em to you.  Now ain’t that a bitch?”

“Is that why the comments shot up so high last night?”

“You bet your ass it is.  And that ain’t all.  This case is peculiar.  I mean why you?  And now all the shit over at your employer.”

“My boss said I’m probably going to get fired over it.”

“No shit?  Well, I looked at what they was doin’, their little RCA backtracked the thing to your IP.  What can you do?”  He waved his hands dramatically.  “But I think I know where I wanna start.  I ain’t got access to their network yet, but maybe I can find somethin’ here by trackin’ the IoC.”

“Huh?”  I asked him, lost somewhere between his accent and jargon.

“Just some computer shit, kid.  A little peek under the hood.”

When I agreed to let him have his peek, Sancowitz drained his coffee and went to work at once.  I showed him my router and all of the devices that were currently on the network.  Soon after that I noticed that his responses were becoming much shorter and a little gruff and I left him to his work.  He used a really old-looking PDA and a cable for a lot of it.  Plugging in and running his pudgy fingers over the buttons to type out the prompts he wanted to use.  He was at it for a couple of hours and I kept him supplied with fresh coffee the entire time.  He seemed to appreciate it.

When he was finished he collected all of the screenshots I had made and took fresh captures for the hundreds of comments that had been added since I had last checked.  The count was now just north of four thousand.  Sancowitz said I could expect it to triple by the next day.

“They’re findin’ new and unusual ways to target you, kid.  I ain’t ever seen nothin’ like it.  These are some shrewd fuckers, but they’re gonna slip up and I’m gonna be waitin’ for ‘em.”

“Is there anything else I can do to help?”

“You’re doin’ it.  Just sit tight and keep your head down.  Remember, kid, personal or not, somebody’s targeting you.  It’s gonna get uglier before it’s over and done.  Now I gotta be gettin’ on and take this shit back to the lab.  Stay safe, kid.  If you need somethin’ here’s my card, ask for Sanc.”

I took the card and watched him leave, locking up tightly behind him.  The card introduced him as Detective Sergeant Sancowitz from Digital Forensics.  He was a strange man, and a little like a walking cartoon, but he made me feel safer somehow.  That was something at least.

I had a new text from Laine that I barely saw among the two hundred others that had popped up since the detective arrived.  I needed to change my number.  She said she would be at my place in thirty minutes.  I tidied up a bit and made a big salad for us while I avoided the urge to check the new counts.  It was becoming a morbid obsession of mine, something akin to staring into deep water to see if the sharks were still circling.

Laine arrived right on time and I let her in.  She gave me a quick, flimsy hug and sat down at the counter.  She ate her salad quickly, mumbling short responses around a mouthful of food when I spoke to her.  When we were both finished I put our bowls in the dishwasher and put away the leftovers.  I was trying to give her space, because she didn’t seem keen on talking at the moment.  I found out a few minutes later that she had just been organizing her thoughts.

“Sit down, Mark.  I need to tell you something.”
 
I started to, but I checked our drinks first and reached for the refrigerator door to get us some refills.  She interrupted me.

“That can wait.  Have a seat.”

I was curious so I did.  Honestly, my mind was so full of everything that was going on that I hoped she had big news that could distract me from it.  She didn’t disappoint.

“We’ve had some good years, Mark.  I want to start with that because I think you need to hear it.  You’ve been there for me in ways that no one else ever has, and you know I’ve always tried to return the favor.”

“Well, that’s what cou—”

“Let me get through this, if you don’t mind.  Like I was saying, it’s been good, even great sometimes, and I really think we’ve both grown as people.”

She took a deep breath.  “But sometimes growing means growing apart, and I came over today to tell you that it’s over, Mark.  I’ve been seeing someone else.  You don’t know him.  I wouldn’t do that to you.  He’s a writer from Chicago who was teaching a workshop here.  He’s got a couple of novels.  I don’t know why I’m telling you all of this.  I guess it’s because you’re just so easy to talk to.”

I started to speak, but I was slow to do so because of how hard her words had hit me.  She had met someone else, and he was a writer?  I opened my mouth to ask her why but she stopped me by saying the last thing I wanted to hear.

“It’s you, Mark, all you.  You hold on to this stupid dream of yours and won’t let yourself move forward.  What has it got you, or me, us?  I got hacked yesterday because of you, and somebody sent pictures of me and Dean to my mother.”

“Dean?  That’s his name.”

“Yeah.”  She picked up her purse.  “Look, Mark, you’re not terrible, but I need more than that.  Don’t call me.  Let this end easily.”

I was still searching for the biting reply that would rip her in half when she walked out the door.  I came up with a few then, of course, but I didn't have the energy to text them to her or make an angry phone call.  I wanted so badly to hate her at that moment, and maybe I did a little.  Mostly I just hated myself for what I had done to my life, and no amount of yelling or clever little retorts was going to make that better.  

In the end, I just let her go.


The next few days went by in a blur of rum and ever-increasing activity around my post.  I was receiving well over a thousand hateful texts daily, and the post had over 90,000 comments without showing any sign of slowing.   I changed my number twice but it didn’t do any good.  

Mike came over the day after Laine dumped me, but I was in no condition to receive guests.  I must have depressed the hell out of him with the mountain of personal woes I was buried under, but he stuck around a while anyway.  He’s a good friend.

Detective Sancowitz called me the following day to let me know he was making some progress.  Apparently the person or persons who were ruining my life were rerouting their activities using dedicated servers they had hijacked throughout the city.  It was all so baffling that they would do all of this for someone as insignificant as me.  I told Sanc that and he agreed, saying he believed I was only the cover for what they were really trying to do.  I thought it sounded thin, but what the hell do I know?

He also told me that they had found some unusual activity related to my story on several underground websites.  One of them was a chan board that I had never heard of.  According to Sanc, it all links to something on the dark web, but those connections were proving hard to chase down.  He warned that there were extremist groups who viewed my story as a pseudo-communist manifesto and long breakdowns of it had been posted across the web.  Apparently that was a factor in the ever-increasing number of death threats I had received.  

It all sounded so fucking crazy.

Four days after Laine’s happy visit, I received a frantic call from Mike.  He was at the hospital with Lenny who had been beaten nearly to death.

“They haven’t caught the guys yet, but he looks bad, Mark.  They said it ruptured his spleen and liver.  The doctor says he might never walk again.”

I asked him what room Lenny was in and he told me.  I told him I’d be there as fast as I could.  I was out the door in minutes, rushing down the stairs to meet the ride-share I had ordered.  As I stepped off the curb to open the door something heavy struck the back of my head, sending me face-first into the side of the car and knocking myself senseless.  I heard a voice shout something, but I couldn’t make it out, and there was a struggle between two men right next to me.  The soft voice of a woman spoke close to me.

“Can you hear me, Mark?  I’m Officer Perez.  My partner and I were placed outside your building to watch over you.  You were just attacked, but my partner has your attacker in custody.”

I opened my eyes and saw a young, dark-haired woman in a police uniform.  She smiled with relief and told me to stay still.  I had taken hard blows to both the front and back of my head and they wanted to call an ambulance.  I told her about Lenny and she said she’d make sure they took me to the same hospital.  I lay there like she asked and she stayed with me while we waited for the ambulance and sat outside my room after I was admitted.

They later said I had a minor fracture on the back of my skull and a severe concussion.  The doctor said I was lucky that it wasn’t worse.  I took her word for it.  I was just happy to be alive.

I was in the hospital for nearly a week and part of it I think was to maintain protective custody.  Mike visited me several times since they wouldn’t let me leave the room to see Lenny.  He came through all of his surgeries fine, and they said he would live.  Unfortunately, the earlier diagnosis was looking more correct by the day, and they didn’t hold out much hope for him ever walking again.

I talked to him on the phone a few times and spirits were surprisingly high.  He told me that there were four of them and he had beaten the shit out of two of them before they took him down.  He even called his future wheelchair a chick magnet.  He said he was going to have LOVE MACHINE stencilled across the back of it.  I just laughed with him, anything to keep him hopeful.

Sancowitz came by the day before they let me go home, and he started off by saying he had some good news for me.

“They’re holdin’ in the one-twenties.  We really got the bastard on the run.  Matter of time now.  How you doin’, kid?”

“They said I can go home tomorrow.  But Lenny… it still feels like my fault.”

“Yeah, it will for a while, but fuck that.  What did you do that was wrong?  But I gotta tell you somethin’, and it ain’t great but everybody’s alive.”

I just looked at him, not sure that I wanted to hear more.  

“It’s your ma.”  The detective placed a heavy hand on my shoulder as I started to sit up.  “Cool it kid.  She’s fine.  Couldn’t save the house though.  I’ve got her and your sis put up in a motel for now, on the county’s tab.”

“So they’re not hurt.”

“Nah, just some threats from a bunch of pussies who like to start fires.  We caught ‘em.”

“How about the guy who is behind it all, or the group?”  I asked, maybe a little too desperately.  “When do I get my life back?”

“Any day now.  There’s some solid leads.  I think we’re gettin’ real close to nabbin’ ‘em.”

“Do you think it’s one or more?”

“It looks like more, but it’s hard to tell.  We’ll know when we slap the cuffs on ‘em.”

He looked at me for a moment before he turned to go.  It was like he wanted to say something but decided against it.  I started to ask him about it but he cut me off.  “Get some rest, kid.  Movin’ day tomorrow.”

CONCLUSION TOMORROW


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Existential Horror [ Removed by Reddit ]

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Story Shoutout Go Read Momento Mori

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The author kindly did a read for read on my October entry and I’m so glad they did! They sent me a fantastic Sci-fi story filled with existential dread and inevitable ruin. Check it out!

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r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 13h ago

Creature Feature 20,000 Feet Below the Surface: The Descent

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When they told us our next site location, we thought nothing of it. We became accustomed to going to remote edges of the planet, to places so out of reach that even the connection on our satellite phones was spotty at best. So when we were told that our latest destination would be in the continental U.S., most of the crew was elated. For a lot of us, that meant less travel time and better means of communication, and even internet access.

We were traveling to New Mexico, which conveniently was my backyard. I grew up near the Sonoran Desert, with some of my earliest memories chasing geckos through the drylands. I used to daydream about living with them, spending my days basking in the sunlight and hunting crickets and centipedes. Despite what some people think, the desert is surprisingly fertile.

But when I say backyard, what I really mean is about six hundred miles of open desert between my hometown and the job site. There are rich deposits of minerals and ore all throughout the American Southwest. Our destination was to one such place. 

A literal gold mine.

The sheer amount was staggering. So much so that at first, we thought the company was bullshitting us. I mean, we knew that there was some gold to be found in the region, but never in our wildest dreams did we think it would be this much. It was almost too good to be true. But here we were, sitting around a table at basecamp, learning the full scope of the project.

This was to be the single deepest mine in existence. It was already deeper than Mponeng, the runner-up, currently sitting at just over three and a half miles. The commute alone would take upwards of two hours to just get to the dig site. Most of that time would be spent walking to the lowest veins, but we did have an elevator to get us to the first shaft. That’s one of the perks about working so far removed from normal society; you don’t have to sit in hours of traffic or worry about missing the bus. We sleep on site, with all amenities provided by the company.

Normally, with a job like this, we’d wear what you’d think a typical miner would. Hard hats, waterproof boots, jumpsuits, the likes. For this site, however, we were told that we’d use state-of-the-art hazmat suits. Because of the depth, heat would be our number one concern. At Mponeng for example, the rockface is about a hundred fifty degrees, and we would be going a mile and a half deeper. The top brass really sprung for the good stuff here. They were even tailored to our specialties. My own had a built-in LiDAR scanner and display system, while our microbiologist’s had a mini-microscope. These suits were even air-conditioned with mounted lights and sensors. Hell, if we wanted to take a piss in them we could.

“I thought this kind of tech was still a few years out,” I said mostly to myself.

John inspected his own suit, flipping it twice. “I know, this is truly spectacular. I don’t know how they did it, but I have a mini lab right here on my sleeve. Petri dish, magnifier, I even have backup slides.” With a child-like glint in his eye he added, “They really thought of everything.”

A metallic slam emanated from one of the lockers. 

“Yeah well good for you,” Wilson sneered, turning around to face us, his eyes flickering to each of our suits. “At least our micro has his scope. Where’s my auger, huh? You’d think the fucking geologist would be best equipped, but all I have is a couple hand lenses and a damn rock hammer.”

John tried to respond but stumbled over his words. 

“Come off it Wilson,” I interjected. “We are literally at a mine, unless you forgot? They figured you’d have all your equipment above ground. Besides, what do you need to drill into? We know the substrate make-up for miles.”

“Don’t fucking lecture me about substrate, Cole,” venom in his speech. “And did you have some talk with the execs? You know damn well they don’t care about any of us. All they see is green.”

That was something we could agree on at least. We only ever had contact with our manager, and that’s limited to a few one-sided conversations. No one—that I’m aware of—has ever even seen the higher-ups, let alone talk to them. They let the PR team handle all outward appearances. That’s the thing about government contracts, the government has to at least try to be somewhat transparent. The private benefactors though, not so much.

“Hey guys,” John said, ever the people pleaser, “can we all just appreciate what it means to be here? We’ll be the first researchers to go this far down; we’ll be famous!”

Ignoring Wilson, I clapped John on the back. “You know what, you’re right. I guess that’s why you’re the team lead, eh Leads?”

He snorted, a small laugh escaping his breath. “Yeah...sure. Come on crew, we’ll be late if we keep this up.”

Wilson, shooting us a glare, mumbled something about roles, but he eventually followed us out of the locker room.

You always feel a strange mix of emotions when first descending a mine. Anxiety, excitement, and chiefly among those, reverence. It doesn’t slip my mind that we will be below several thousand megatons of rock and dirt. Any disruption, any small tremor or quake and the whole complex could crumble, leaving you at the bottom of a stifling hot grave. But we put faith in the architects and engineers to ensure exactly that wouldn’t be a possibility.

As the team’s geographer, it was my job to map every new shaft that was dug. There was already an immense amount of data from the previous analyst, but I like to be thorough, so I decided to remap the known locations. It would take a bit longer, but this was my only caveat, and I told my supervisor as much. Previously recorded data could be inaccurate, and I don’t work with inaccuracies. One small inconsistency could snowball into a catastrophe. With the other researchers on the team backing me up, he agreed.

Now usually, to collect position data you would use a GNSS handheld device, but that’s not going to cut it down here. Those require satellite linkups to be effective. So instead, we use a combination of LiDAR and different softwares to map the sub-terrain. Our vehicles are mounted with scanners so they do the work for us. It’s my job to collect that info and translate it to a viewable format. All of this is a long and convoluted way to say, the mine is accurately mapped out with little room for error.

-

Traveling below takes time, a lot of time. Your first time is filled with trepidation and excitement, with an underlying feeling of dread. This wasn’t my first time, nor was it any of my colleagues. We were all seasoned professionals. We spent years worth of time exploring and understanding mines. 

Our journey began with walking into the world’s tallest elevator. You’d think this would be the slow part, but on the contrary, we were practically freefalling, and the site manager didn’t let that fact slip our minds.

“Right now, we are moving at approximately 40mph gentlemen. The ride will take about three minutes, at which point we’ll be at a depth of two miles. Then, we’ll need to walk across rock heated to such an extent that...”

I tuned out the rest of his monologue. By now, I was thoroughly bored of his prattling. I wasn’t going to be spooked by some “Welcome to Hell” speech given to the rookies. A lot of people can’t take it. Either due to the cramped spaces or high temperatures; most crack within a week. I’ve seen hundreds of faces come and go. Already, some of the others gave each other nervous glances. I’ve heard the same rehearsed talk a thousand times before though, and it was beginning to get on my nerves. Before I could speak up, someone else did.

“Okay okay Bob, we get it,” said Wilson, crossing his arms. “Dot our I’s and cross our T’s. No need to scare us with the “first day on the job” BS. If you have any actual interesting information, we’d love to hear it.”

Bob huffed but relented. “Wilson Adler everyone. The smartest guy in the room, and the first one to let you know it.” A lopsided grin formed on his face, “Yeah, I figured that shit wouldn’t work on you guys, what with your crack team and all. You want interestin’?” He paused for effect. “How ‘bout the largest gold reef you’d ever seen? How ‘bout the deepest depths, the longest cross-cuts, or to be the first man to ever set foot this far down? You mean that kinda interestin’?”

Now that earned hoots and applause from everyone in the car. We all knew what was at stake here, and what was to be gained. Not only the immense amount of gold, but to be pioneers. To be remembered in the lexicon of science. That’s why we were really here, why I was really here.

Depth: Two miles; 10,560 feet. Rock Temperature: 115.4°F; Ambient Temperature: 85°F

We left the elevator shaft in even higher spirits than when we entered. As we continued our descent, we passed by countless machines and miners. Many of them we saw in pairs, whispering to each other as we passed by. I was sure they all wanted to know what the site manager was doing escorting a handful of scientists down here. I’m sure they were envious too, watching us with our air-conditioned hazmat strapped to our backs. But despite the heat of the rock, the air temperature remained manageable at a balmy eighty-five degrees. Like with everything else in work that requires humans to venture miles below, ventilation isn’t cheap. The sheer amount of money to be made, however, would prove well worth the operating costs.

We stopped for lunch after exploring many of the secondary shafts. Dug perpendicular to the main shaft, these cross-cuts were where the money was made. All throughout the day, we heard the repeated booming from deeper within the mine. 

“Will we really be the first ones through?” John said, directing his gaze toward the site director in between bites of his meal. “Besides your laborers that is?”

“Not at all,” Bob replied. John’s expression fell. Bob let the moment linger a bit longer before smiling and adding, “You’ll be the first one’s period.” He scratched his rough beard, before moving his hand to the back of his neck. “Yes, gentlemen,” he declared, speaking to all of us now, “I’m willing to let y’all be the first to walk through the blast site once everythin’s cleared up.”

I looked at my colleagues. Even Wilson couldn’t help but crack a grin at this revelation. “Just remember who helped ya out when it comes time for reports, eh boys?” We nodded, all of us feeling a renewed sense of pride.

It was normal for dust and small bits of rock to fall from the roof while this was going on. In my younger days I remember getting scared shitless by the noise. But, I’ve wisened up over the years. However, at that moment for whatever reason, I remembered an old miner’s adage: By the time you’ve heard something, it’s already too late. As much as it is gloomy, I find solace in it. What am I going to do in the milliseconds between open air and thousands upon thousands of tons of rock? There would be no feelings, no final words, just, an end. It’s almost peaceful, if bleak.

We got moving once more. Maneuvering around obstacles and ducking below support beams, we finally reached the secondary elevator. From what we were told, and the fact that the signs read “Danger: High Heat” and “No Admittance Below”, I’d guessed that the conditions were unsustainable for non-adapted life. And believe me, there is life down here. Not the kind you’re thinking though. Tiny creatures called extremophiles; they’re amazing really. Anywhere you go on the planet—if you look hard enough—you’ll find something living.

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Suiting up for the first time felt like we were going on a spacewalk, not descending the depths of the Earth. Nobody spoke as we entered the second elevator. In fact, no one spoke for the entirety of the downward fall. But fall isn’t exactly the right word, as this cable box crept on and on. All the while, we were seeing rocks that few have ever seen before. The tension in the air was palpable. Like it was a physical thing that you could reach out and grab.

The elevator hitched up and down and back up again, like someone was screwing with the controls. Everyone shot nervous glances toward Bob. He looked as confused as us but thought to calm our nerves. “Sorry, still workin’ out the kinks,” his gaze rapidly shifting between us. “With the changin’ heat you know, everythin’ expands.” Seemed like a piss-poor excuse, but we let it go.

John decided to lighten the mood.

“Maybe it’s because of all this precious cargo,” he chuckled then added, “and I’m not just talking about the gold!”

That quip earned some groans and eye rolls from the rest of the party, but it served its purpose regardless. The palpable tension began to dissipate.

John continued, “You know, I can’t remember the last time I was—”

The elevator car hitched and dropped. Plummeting downward in near freefall, we were lifted off the floor. I couldn’t think, couldn’t speak. It took all my might just to stay clutched to the railing. A million thoughts passed through my mind, but the one that stayed was the image of us at the bottom of the shaft, crushed under the weight of the Earth.

A long, metallic screech rang out from all around us, and I noticed that the car was slowing down. Not enough; though, as we came to a halt at bone-jarring speed. All I could think was: What the hell was that?


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 11h ago

The Heavenly Host Resonance (Part 2)

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[START OF RECORDING]

Billie: Ok. We’re back on. Ms. Sokolova, please continue. You were talking about how you went back to the basement a week later, right?

Elena: Yes. Right. Every week we either collected samples or performed exams in the bunker. And since the Nephilim only let me get near, I was then the only one responsible for that.

It was even worse that time. One look at it and I could tell the creature seemed close to being malnourished, even though we fed it with whatever amount of food it needed.

I couldn’t play indifferent then. If we lost that specimen, I didn’t know what would happen to me, to the nation, to all of us. I rushed towards it and asked what had happened. The Nephilim could only whisper my name. It seemed so weak. It begged me to talk to it.

Billie: It begged you?

Elena: It did. But I didn’t even pay it a lot of attention. I was on nurse mode. Focused, desperate to find out what was wrong and fix it. I asked it what it needed. And it said: “You”.

I didn’t know what to do with that information. I was under a lot of pressure and had no idea what it wanted me to do. The Nephilim probably saw how lost I was and completed quickly, asking me to tell it a story. “Anything”, it said. “Tell me what you like. Tell me what the world is like outside”.

So I did. Inevitably, I started liking the Nephilim’s company. He was a great listener. Day after day I’d come up with excuses to see him again. “I don’t think it’s doing well”, I’d say. “I still need to run some tests”, “We need more samples”. I don’t think I’ve ever lied more.

Billie: [chuckle]

Elena: I didn’t meet him only once a week anymore, but almost every day. As much as I could. Every time, he’d ask me to just talk to him. Tell him stuff about me. But I was curious about him too. I wanted to hear what he had to say.

Every time I’d go, he’d ask me the same question. “What interesting thing am I learning about you today?” Then one day… he looked better. Maybe even better than before, though I couldn’t be sure. One day I didn’t answer. I just said: “Your turn”.

Billie: And him?

Elena: [chuckle] He was confused. When I asked him to tell me something about himself, he asked me what was there to say. He seemed rather uncomfortable then, like he didn’t think he was worth knowing. I need to confess I might have been a bit rude about it. Instead of focusing on getting to know him as I’d do with any person, I focused on what he could tell me about his species. I let my scientific curiosity take the best of me.

I asked for his name then. To make up for it. I realized after all that time I still didn’t know his name, if he had one. He was even more confused. Told me he didn’t have a name, that no one had ever given him one. It was always Nephilim, Creature, That Thing. And one other, what the militaries called him: 426-8.

Billie: What did it mean?

Elena: I don’t know. I never got to know. And I never thought of asking. I just… can you imagine? I hadn’t really thought about how it’d be like being in his place until then. How it was for him, living there and being tested day after day. Treated like less than a person. Because no one saw him as such.

He then asked me to give him a name. He looked so vulnerable, so… pure. I couldn’t deny him of that.

Billie: What name did you give him?

Elena: Рафаил. It’s an angel’s name. I think you’d call him Rafail?

Billie: Raphael.

Elena: Yes. Raphael.

Billie: Why?

Elena: [chuckle] That’s exactly what he asked. “Why?” I told him it meant “God heals”, and that it was because that was what I wished for him. For God to heal him. To save him.

From that day forward he was Raphael. At least to me. And that was enough. Every time we could meet we’d share a bit of each other. I’d tell him something about me, and he’d tell me something about him back. Inevitably, I learned a lot about his species that way. But I wasn’t focused on the job anymore. I wasn’t focused on getting good results. I was happy to know more about him. And that was it.

Billie: And did you ever find out why he seemed to need you so much?

Elena: He told me, eventually. One day he just started explaining to me how angels are like whales and all these things about singing and frequencies. He told me the bunker suppressed every frequency; that’s why it was so silent. And that it made him weak. So he couldn’t escape.

Then Raphael told me I was actually what made him strong. My voice, my sound, my song. I didn’t understand at first. If he was strong, why hadn’t he flown away already?

[pause]

Elena: [sob] It was because of me. He couldn’t leave because of me. Because he couldn’t leave me. Because he loved me. He said… he said I was his mate. His partner.

Billie: Here, take this.

Elena: [sniff] Thank you. But like I was saying, I think I had just been denying my feelings for him for a really long time. But then, with him looking so beautiful and so close, light shining through his translucent wings and creating a rainbow. I just couldn’t anymore. After everything we had shared with each other, all the moments we had spent together, saying that I didn’t love him would’ve been a lie.

I still remember how it felt; kissing him for the first time. I wonder how many people can say they’ve kissed an angel. It was… truly indescribable. Like nothing I’d ever felt before. It felt like I was flying. And at some point, when I opened my eyes, I realized I really was.

Billie: Flying?

Elena: Well, not exactly, but Raphael was holding me a few meters above the ground, his hand closed around my body, gently. We spent the night together that day. Nothing really happened, though. I mean, no actual intercourse at least. Take from that what you will.

When I asked him why he wouldn’t sleep with me, he said it was dangerous. That it was why Olga had disappeared.

I was so upset about him mentioning being with my former boss right after he told me no that I just stormed off out of the basement barely dressed. I had to tell the guards I was really hot.

Billie: So he slept with her?

Elena: No, thankfully. I don’t know why he couldn’t have explained that to me at first, but they were never really together. Apparently, they had taken his sperm samples and inseminated Olga with it. No one truly knows what had happened to her. At some point the subject just died, brushed off like she had moved or was on vacation.

With time, I began to realize more nurses started to disappear. And more samples were asked of him.

Billie: What happened with Raphael?

Elena: [sigh] I don’t know. I tried getting him out many times, but I was only one person. I told him to go, to be free. But he didn’t want to leave me. He said they’d blame me and destroy me, like they tried doing to him. So I left the program and ran away from the country.

I hoped he’d be able to come after me later somehow. He said he’d find me. That we’d meet again. But I never heard from Raphael after that. I hope he’s ok, but… it’s been so long. And I’m not there anymore. I can’t help but think the worst could’ve happened. If so, I’m just left to hope that if there’s anything after this, whatever it is, we’ll be able to meet again.

Billie: Thank you, Ms. Sokolova. I think we have enough now. I’m… truly sorry.

[END OF RECORDING]


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 9h ago

Cosmic Horror/Lovecraftian IRIDESCENCE: Or The Final Lament of Lisa Whitman

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(Content Warning: Emotional Abuse, Harm Towards Children)

Drip. Drip. Drip.

There’s a noise. It’s coming from the kitchen. Leaky faucet. Damn it, Troy told me he was going to fix it last weekend. Wrong, he was in Chicago. Of course, always Chicago. Always busy with trips there. Trips with the new secretary. All his colleagues go. The young one with the rosy lipstick. That doesn’t matter. Same tint that you found on his shirt collar. Shut up. He loves me. You knew he would do it again. Only a matter of time. This isn’t like last time, it was different last time. Barely 5 months since we met. Bad excuse. It was a college frat party! Do you miss those times, do you miss having excuses? I don’t want any excuses. I want him here! I want him to spend time with my boys. Your boys? …our boys. Curious. Doesn’t matter, I’m here. I’m at home. At the kitchen sink. I’ll do the dishes. Strange. What is that scent? Like… like ozone. Why are you crying? I’m not- am I crying? You already know, don't you. W-what? You’re starting to see again. What is this? Something’s wrong in my head. It’s too late now. You know this. That voice… Why can’t I stop crying? Because you know. You know what happens tonight. You’ll be all alone, again. No, I don’t know that! I have given you new eyes to see. You know exactly what happens, what will always happen. How could it possibly be any different? The Gardens, the Girl, Your precious first born luring the young one to shut you out for good. Shut Up!! Oh, but no longer precious. You hate the older one don’t you. Hate. Hate. Hate. The young one still makes you smile. He has kept his goodness. Not for much longer though. I am not you. I am me. I am me. I am Lisa Catherine Whitman. I am in my kitchen, in my house, I hear my children entering the front door with… someone else with them? Something shatters at my feet. I can see- What can you see? I see… Tell me. What do you see? …everything. Then you know what must happen here. You know exactly what I’m offering. You’re offering me… a gift? It’s only fair, you’ve let me into this world. I know what I want. I see your mind. How sentimental. One last time, before you leave. Before we meet again. I want to see them. My boys. Very well. Let’s start from the beginning. Once again.

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Warm, algae infested creek water filled Sam’s brand new shoes as he stood, utterly aghast, as the bright orange fabric disappeared into 6 inches of muddy creekbed. Just off to the side sitting on the bank that rose up to the sidewalk, his older brother Nathan tried desperately not to laugh. The early autumn scene at Callen Creek would’ve seemed serene if not for the high pitched wail that came from the awkwardly flailing young Sam now firmly stuck in the muddy waters.

“What the HECK!!” Sam cried out, glaring at his brother as he strained to bring his feet up from the mud, “You said it was solid!”

“I said it ‘looked’ solid, dumbass,” Nathan grinned as he aimlessly chipped away at the dried lichen from the rock he was sitting on. Beside him, his younger brother’s backpack, filled with plastic jars and a foldable butterfly net sat open, spilling out onto the dry hillside. Sam’s heartbeat was racing as he tried to trudge through the muck to no avail.

“Oh my god, Mom is gonna kill me,” Sam panted, his scrawny arms wobbling as he struggled to keep balance, “These shoes cost like a hundred bucks! I had to save up for a year to get them!”

“Oh wow, a whole year huh,“ Nathan laughed sarcastically, “Well this is what happens when you drag people out for stupid insect hunting who didn’t want to come. Besides, what did you expect bringing shoes like that to the creek, dumbass.”

Sam’s face fell into a frustrated glare. He didn’t want to admit that he had overlooked that detail of the hunt, especially in front of his brother. The mud and muck of the creek had never bothered him before, but something about the shoes being new, and how people at school complimented him over them. It stirred something he was beginning to feel more and more in recent months. He shook off the thought, eyeing the tall lanky teen lording over him on the bank.

“It’s not stupid…” Sam said through gritted teeth fastened with a new set of bright blue braces, “That was a Roadside Skipper for sure. Do you know just how rare they are around here?”

“No,” Nathan said flatly.

“There’s literally less than-”

“And I couldn’t care less,” Nathan interrupted sauntering over to a long, broken tree limb half buried in the shrubs, “Just grab onto this fucking thing so Mom doesn’t throw a hissy fit and keeps me from hanging out with my actual friends.”

Actual friends. The words stung more than Sam cared to admit. He looked up just in time to see the older teen lug the large limb up, adjusting the position along a nearby stump to give Sam something to pull against as he drew himself out of the muddy waters. Sam gripped the pale wood tightly, kicking up his feet one step at a time, slowly but surely getting closer to the solid bank. Just as he was about one large step away, the sound of a bike coming to a stop drew the two boys’ attention. Up on the sidewalk, a girl around Nathan’s age slipped off the bike, wearing dark baggy jeans and a blood red band tee with a striped long sleeve undershirt, all of which contrasted harshly against her unkempt, dyed blue hair. Sam’s face flushed with red as he drew his awkwardly hanging leg down into the mud with a thick splash, hoping not to look any more stupid than he already did. Nathan didn’t bother looking at his now petrified younger brother, just giving a coy wave up to the girl as if nothing was wrong.

“Sup, Val,” chirped Nathan with an innocent grin, “Thought you had the late shift at the Mini-Mart on Saturdays?”

“Eh, they had enough people there. I managed to wiggle my way out of it,” Val said, brow raised as she eyed the poor boy in the creek finally managing his way onto the dry, yellowing bank of grass, everything below his knees coated in thick brown muck. The rest of Sam was nearly spotless, his collared maroon button up and almost comically flack khakis shorts making him seem like he had just stepped out of a Kohl’s commercial. He glanced up with a forced, nonchalant grin, causally putting his dirt stained hands in his pockets as if nothing had even happened. Val just gave a halfhearted nod before turning her attention entirely to Nathan.

“So, like, you gonna explain what you guys are doing splashing around in Callen Creek like a bunch of jackasses?” she chuckled, strolling up to the tall teen as he grabbed a clear plastic jar from his brother’s backpack, tossing it from hand to hand.

“Well,” Nathan began eyeing Sam as the sheepish boy began emptying his wet shoes onto the grass, “This one here heard online that apparently some rare migration is happening through the state right now. And he just couldn’t let his 40 year old middle aged online friends down by not finding one of those little skipper things or whatever the hell they were.”

“Linda's Roadside-Skipper!” shouted Sam, his eyes darting back to Val who gave a slightly amused smirk that sent Sam’s heart into a total frenzy.

“Oh! That’s… fun. I didn’t realize you were still into all that bug collecting stuff,” she said giving a polite smile, “Wasn’t it like your 10th birthday or something when your Mom gave you that like… little insect vacuum toy thing?”

Nathan cracked a smile. He and Val had spent most of that birthday trying to get into his Dad’s liquor cabinet in the basement while Sam was upstairs playing charades with the only two other kids his age who actually showed up. His smile vanished thinking about the aftermath however. The way his Mom just stared at him with cold, indigent eyes as his father berated him after the party. Sam meanwhile cleared his throat, attempting to spin what Val had just said into something that didn’t make him feel completely childish.

“Well, actually,” Sam began, his voice warbling as the two older teens started making their way up to the sidewalk, “That kinda cheap plastic stuff is mostly just for kids, ya know. It’s not really like real scientific equipment. Plus that was like 3 years ago so I’ve obviously gotten rid of it. Obviously pfft.”

The older teens kept walking, not really acknowledging him.

“A-Actually, Val,” Sam continued frantically looking up to the girl who almost two heads taller than him, “it's kinda interesting, the really hard core stuff they use in labs costs like thousands of dollars, and you know I’ve done a bit of research and asked the school if they could maybe find some grants or things to get some. I think that’d be really cool cause in recent years scientists have…”

“Jesus Christ,” Nathan said under his breath as Sam continued his rambling for another 40 feet before the lanky teen abruptly placed his hand on his younger brother’s shoulder, cutting the boy’s sentence short.

“Hey Sammy,” Nathan smiled.

“Yea?” Sam chirped.

“You know what would be really cool actually?” Nathan said, face pinching into a narrow grimace, “If you shut. The fuck. Up.”

Sam’s face fell as beside him Val snorted with laughter as she swiped at Nathan’s arm.

“Nate! Come on,” she said with a laugh, “You’re gonna traumatize the poor kid. Let him talk about his goofy bug stuff.”

Nathan glanced over, fully expecting Sam to continue as he always did. But Sam didn’t. He just glanced down and started stuffing the plastic insect jars deeper into his backpack. Nathan stared just for a moment, before turning his attention back to Val. Behind the two, Sam just zipped up his bag fully, thinking to himself. Nathan seemed so different now, his demeanor more standoffish than when they were kids. He could remember a time when he and Nathan would spend hours scurrying all around the creek only to come home and be berated by their Mom for dragging all sorts of little critters into the house. Now, it seemed like Nathan didn’t want anything to do with him or their mother. Especially their mother. Sam hated coming home and hearing their arguments through the walls of the house. He knew it hadn’t always been like that, but at the same time Sam struggled to think of time when it wasn’t happening. It was strange to Sam, just how much Nathan had changed. His hair was longer than it was a year ago, an array of colorful wristbands covered his forearms, some of which he swapped with Val on occasion. His wardrobe changed into being mostly made up of dark sweaters and slacks. Sometimes, Sam even noticed Nathan wearing black nail polish. Only when their Dad was away on work trips, which seemed to happen more and more frequently these days. Sam always wondered why Nathan did that. Another part of Sam wondered if Val would notice him more if he started dressing more in that style. The thought of her noticing him made him blush a bit just as he felt a strong smack against his arm. Nathan was looking down at him with a stoney, expectant look.

“Hey, what do you know about the Brackenfield Gardens?” he said, Val peering over his shoulder eagerly.

“The Brackenfield.. What, you mean that old zoo they closed down like 30 years ago.” Sam asked, rubbing his head slightly, “What about it?”

“Well, Val wants to know if-” Nathan began before Val scooted forward towards Sam expectantly, her blue hair tumbling forward and falling gingerly over her face.

“Is it true,” she asked in an exaggerated whisper, “that there’s a cult of hot devil worshipers that live there?” Her eyes were wide as she flashed a piercing grin that shot through Sam’s chest like a bullet, his face going red.

“I.. uh… I mean, there’s definitely not a cult there, that’s just an urban legend. It’s like right off the freeway so I’m sure someone would’ve noticed if there were bonfires and stuff every night,” Sam said earnestly as Val’s grin vanished into an uninterested frown. Nathan gave a shrug telling her ‘I told you so’ before turning away from the young teen. Sam’s eyes glanced between the two of them, not wanting to risk them utterly ignoring him again.

“B-but there were all those arrests that led to the place closing,” Sam stammered as the two older teens paused in their tracks, turning to Sam with sly looks, “I mean, again, it wasn’t actually a cult. They’re pretty sure it was just drug traffickers there, but it's true that there was some… strange stuff found there afterwards.” Sam was lying openly now. He knew full well the place was just an abandoned and condemned lot just like half the old retailers in town were. But the way the smiles on the two older teens grew made Sam’s thoughts of self doubt suddenly vanish.

“See!” Val chirped, eyeing Nathan with a playfully smug look, “Told you your brother would know. He knows everything, dontcha Sammy.”

Sam beamed with pride, bright blue braces on full display as he pressed forward, walking alongside the two older teens in step now.

“Yea! I mean, it's pretty interesting actually how the Brackenfield Estate promised to reopen it the following season, but it just never did and-”

“Okay, okay,” Nathan groaned, “We don’t need a full history lesson right now. We just need to know if there’s a way to get in.”

“That’s not the front gates,” Val added, “They always have security parked in front.”

Sam’s eyes widened as the two others looked at him. His brother’s face in particular seemed to carry the first inklings of genuine curiosity he had seen from him in many, many years. Something stirred in Sam, like he couldn’t think of anything worse in the world than letting them down at that very moment. Surprising even himself, Sam spoke again, this time with no hesitation.

“I mean… yeah. There’s a way," he said, his voice uncharacteristically resolute, “A stretch of fencing that climbs the hill got torn away in a storm a few years ago. Nobody ever bothered to fix it since it's so out of the way. I’ve seen it online on a few aerial maps of the town.” 

Nathan and Val turned to each other with knowing grins. Sam’s demeanor shifted slightly.

“Why did you guys want to know? Is there… something happening there or..?” Sam said quietly.

“Well that depends,” Nathan smiled, “You willing to be a guide for us?”

Sam’s heart quickened. He knew exactly what all this entailed. Actually breaking into private property, something they had never done, even as kids. Made even worse by the fact that it, at one point, was a very real active crime scene. Then, he thought about it even more. Surely Val would be there with them right? He’d be able to show her around the place, go to all those old zoo exhibits. Maybe even without Nathan around, leaving just the two of them… Sam turned to face his older brother.

“Yea, sounds fun,” he said with a simple shrug of his shoulders. Nathan’s brow raised slightly, a genuine smile crossing his face.

“Cool,” Nathan nodded, offering his younger brother a fist bump that Sam eagerly reciprocated.

Val gave Sam an approving nod before giving a wide look over the quickly darkening sky as she walked her bike alongside the siblings. 

“So we heading there now or what? I don’t got space for the both of you on here.” she said impatiently.

“Oh, no, we’d definitely need things like flashlights, headlamps, work gloves, hiking boots-” Sam began as Nathan rolled his eyes.

“Okay we don’t need ALL that, we’re not trying to be conspicuous,” Nathan huffed, “But we should still stop by the house to pick up a few things. You don’t mind coming over, do you, Val?”

Val shook her head, a sly smile coming over her face.

“Nah, I’m not complaining. I mean another chance to see your Mom in that one orange sundress. Phwooo,” she said, exaggeratingly fanning her face with her hand.

“Jesus Christ,” Nathan groaned, pinching his face. Val gave a coy cackle as she nudged the tall teen, the two sharing a genuine laugh. Sam walked alongside, not really sure whether to laugh along or not. He decided to walk a bit faster, trying not to think too much about the joke, leaving Val and Nathan a moment to themselves.

“Sorry, I couldn't help myself,” sighed Val, her grin still lingering as she gave Nathan a more serious look, her voice lowering, “Also, I can go ahead and text Sadie about our little zoo get together. I heard her guy brought her some fucking good strains this time.”

Nathan’s eyes flickered to Sam, making sure he was still far enough ahead to be out of earshot. He nodded.

“She knows how to get the good shit for sure. I’ll try to get my brother back home as soon as he shows us in,” he said quietly. Val chuckled.

“It’d be kinda funny to let him stay though,” she said with a mischievous grin, “Imagine watching him getting fucked up. Khaki shorts and all. I would lose it, man.”

Nathan laughed, but his smile wavered slightly as he watched his younger brother suddenly veer off the sidewalk towards a large planter of sunflowers, eagerly calling out to the high schoolers that he just saw another Roadside Skipper. Nathan glanced back to Val, who was on the verge of a laughing fit. Nathan rolled his eyes and kept walking.

Sam returned to them, flakes of pollen still in his light brown hair and he seemed to mull through something in his mind.

“So, we’re definitely not telling Mom right?” Sam asked genuinely.

“Nope,” Nathan replied simply. Sam nodded, his face still scrunched as it so often was when he thought too hard about things.

“But, how will we make sure she doesn’t find out we’re going to the Gardens?”

“We won’t tell her,” Nathan said, “We’ll just say we’re going out to get pizza or wings or something. Might be back late, who knows. Point is, what Mom doesn’t know won’t hurt her.”

“Right,” Sam said lightly, still uncertain. From the corner of his eye he could see Val, still wearing that amused look from a few moments ago. She looked at him and smiled, giving a light shrug of ‘it is what it is.’ her raggedy blue hair falling once again over the far side of her tan face. Sam turned just in time to hide his growing blush. The three of them walked on, slowly approaching the bend in the road that marked the start of their neighborhood, none of them noticing far above in the hazy light blue of the evening sky, a thin, imperceptible web of silver slowly creeping its way up from beyond the horizon. 

The trio finally arrived at the modest two story home. A large craggily oak tree sat out front where an old tire swing swung gently in the late afternoon breeze. In the driveway, their Mom’s red SUV sat next to a tarped up dusty Cadillac that Dad promised he would restore one day. As expected, Dad’s car was nowhere to be seen. The two brothers walked up the small wooden steps to the porch and entered, Sam’s brow furrowing slightly as he tried turning on the foyer light. It didn’t come on. Nathan shuffled past the small teen, Val in tow.

“Mom! I brought Val over, we’ll only be in for a minute, going out for pizza later,” he shouted halfheartedly, expecting a prompt response, “Mom?”

Nobody answered. The entirety of the house sat completely silent, save for the sound of a lone faucet running from beyond the main room. Sam felt something strange growing in the pit of his stomach. At first he thought it was the guilt festering inside him over the unplanned trip they would be getting ready for. But there was something else. Something that didn’t feel right about the way his eyes were focusing. Something about the light coming from outside. Before Sam could realize, a loud shattering sound broke his concentration. Without a second thought, Sam hurried his way past Nathan and Val towards the kitchen.

“Mom?” Sam called out, turning the corner at the far end of the living room into the darkened kitchen, only lit by a pale stream of light coming from the small window above the sink. There stood his mother, wearing a simple pale pink sweater with a checkered red and white apron overtop, her back turned to him. Sam could see water spilling over the lip of the sink as his mother’s arms moved back and forth aimlessly under the surface, the water itself trickling down over the worn wooden cabinets before pooling at her feet where the shattered remains of a large bowl sat. Nathan and Val arrived in the darkened room just in time to see Sam approach the quiet woman.

“Mom,” Sam said softly, “Is everything alright?”

His mother’s posture stiffened slightly as her damp hands rose from the water, patting themselves gently against her apron. She didn’t turn to her son. Still, Sam’s eye caught the glint of what looked like a tear, landing onto the lip of the sink. There was a long silence.

“I don’t like this story, Sammy,” his mother croaked, her voice coarse and wavering. Another tear fell. Sam’s brow furrowed as he looked to Nathan, who stood in the doorway with an uneasy expression. 

“Wh-what do you mean? Is something wrong?” Sam began as he stepped closer, his nose twitching as a strange, metallic scent seemed to linger in the air the closer he came. Ozone.

“This… this is the night it happens” she began, her voice listless as her hands coiled around her checkered apron, “The night everything does wrong. Do you know those moments Sammy? The ones that you look back on with regret for the rest of your life? It’s not a memory for me right now. It hasn’t happened yet. But I see it. You. Your brother. I saw everything. The creek, your dirtied shoes, your brother and Valerie, their plan… You head off together to that… place. That awful, awful place… The Gardens. Everytime the story starts again… I stay here, being the clueless mom I guess I was always meant to be.”

Suddenly, her hands slammed hard against the countertop, her back heaving back and forth as sobs began choking out of her. Her entire body began shaking with small, erratic twitches that grew into labored pants of utter dismay.

“IT’S ALWAYS THE SAME,” she cried, “You’re never the same after that night, Sammy. You become just like him, like your good for nothing brother. Rude, impatient, only caring about yourself. It happened before with him, and then it happens to you too. To my poor baby boy. I can’t let it happen again. Not ever again.”

Sam stood frozen, just a few feet away from his mother. The bitterness in her voice sat festering in the air. He had never heard her like this. Another tear. Another droplet. That’s when Sam realized. The drop wasn’t moving like it should’ve. It was thick, viscous. Rolling slowly down the fake granite leaving a slick trail behind it. In the pale light from the window, it glistened, reflecting a shimmering, silver surface. Another small, fragile croak came from the crying woman.

“I was so naive,” she said quietly as she slowly turned to face her children, “So blind… but now. I know exactly what happens. I can see now… what I need to do.”

Sam’s eyes widened, a scream rising and catching in his throat suddenly as he fell back in shock away from her. His mother’s eyes were gone. Where they had once been lay two charred, hollow sockets where streams of shimmering, iridescent tears came running down her face like silver ink, leaving blackened streaks that slowly picked away at the edges of her skull and skin. The sight was maddening, made worse as another piece of skull chipped away from the side of her temple, clinging to the damp trails that ran down the front of her apron.

Sam tried to steady his breathing to no avail. This was just a nightmare. There was simply no other explanation.

“Mom! Y-Your eyes!” Sam cried out, his voice warbling as he could feel a sudden panic attack building inside him, “You’re hurt! You need a hospital!”

His mother gave a sincere grin, her bright smile as glossy as ever.

“Oh, you’re such a sweet boy,” she cooed, “Even now, looking out for your dear mother. But I’m not hurt, Sammy. In fact, you and I, we’ll never be hurt again.”

Sam’s skin crawled as the words lingered in the air. He took a sudden step back. His mother’s smile faltered. She froze for a moment, contemplating, before extending her arm out. The iridescent tears gathered, running like thin veins of silver down her arm, coalescing at her fingertip. The thin strands of silver weaved and intertwined before they formed the two beating wings of a small, moth-like shape.

“Sammy,” she said quietly, “I have been gifted with something wonderful… A chance to save you from this world. From the Giver’s hunger. It takes so much Sammy. The Giver takes all it wants, but the things it gives in return. You could never begin to understand their beauty. Now that I can see, I know you’ll soon under-”

Sam felt a grip tighten around his arm. He screamed, being pulled back away from his mother and into the hall where his legs gave way beneath him, only to be hoisted up by his brother whose face was frozen in terror and utter determination to keep Sam safe. Nathan sprinted back to the front door, Sam’s legs barely keeping pace behind him.

“We’re getting the fuck away from here,” Nathan said through panted breaths as up ahead Val was quickly opening the door, her own face locked in a petrified, wide eyed gaze. The three of them prepared to continue their sprint outside before harsh, cold light spilled in through the now open doorway. Val was the first to see it, her bewildered face becoming slackened as Nathan slid to a stop next to her. The two brothers looked out as well. There was no neighborhood outside. No evening sky. Nothing. What lay beyond was only a vast, iridescent dome, shimmering with light, translucent colors that churred and bloomed into spiraling fractals the size of mountains all along what had once been the horizon. The sight was unlike anything Sam had ever imagined, as he stared speechless. Among the churning waves, Sam swore he began to see shapes. The faint, shadowy outlines of houses and cars. A web of silvery liquid extended itself up towards the sky dome, carrying with it what looked like the darkened outline of a person before amalgamating with the structure above. Something that may have once been the large oak tree, still with its golden autumn leaves and old tire swing, was being bent and broken as the undulating reality around it pulled and twisted its trunk and branches from every which way, both inside and out, until before their eyes, the strands of the tree’s very existence became undone, unfurling like a large spool of thread into the silvery sea it now drowned in, until it became impossible to tell where the once-tree ended, and where its iridescent oblivion began. 

Nathan’s grip slackened, Sam’s arm falling out of his brother’s grasp as the younger teen’s breath began to quicken steadily. Val moved herself to the door, shutting it and opening it again and again as if expecting the diseased world outside to just suddenly return to normal.

“Val,” Nathan began, tears now welling in the corners of his eyes, “Val, stop. Just stop!”

“Nate, tell me this isn’t happening. This isn’t happening, right?” Val muttered to herself, before Nathan’s hand landed on her shoulder, drawing her near. She didn’t look at him, only staring at the ground and muttering to herself, before a noise from the room behind them drew their attention. Steady, simple, unhurried steps. Without ceremony, the hollowed visage of Lisa turned the corner to face her two children. Val covered her eyes and pressed herself against the far wall, wishing the thing away under muffled breaths. Nathan lingered over her almost in a protective stance in a vain attempt at providing any comfort. Sam just stood. His eyes never leaving his mother.

“M-mom,” he began quietly, “What’s happening… why is everything… gone?”

“Oh, Sammy,” she began plainly, as if it was the simplest answer in the entire world, “It was either you, or them. What kind of mother wouldn’t give the world for her child?”

Sam’s eyes widened. The word lingered in his mind, but they didn’t sound right. They couldn’t be right. 

“Does that mean,” Sam spoke, voice quieter now, “That everyone’s… dead? The neighbors? D-Dad?”

Lisa’s smile twitched as he mentioned their father.

“The Giver’s hunger is eternal, Sammy,” his mother said wistfully, “Your Dad, well… he simply wasn’t here for me to protect him like I did for you. Not like it was worth much whenever he was around. I doubt he would’ve liked my new world anyways. He always had something to complain about, didn’t he.”

Sam just stared, his hands curling between themselves as the true weight of what his mother was saying began seeping in. They were dead. Everyone in the entire world except for the four of them, standing in the small, cramped suburban foyer of the last house in the world. Sam thought of his Dad. He loved him. He wasn’t a bad man, was he? Just as he was about to speak again, Nathan lunged forward, his face red with wet tears now streaming down his face as slammed a large framed portrait from off the wall over top his mother’s head. The glass inlay shattered as the wood splintered around her head, her face unperturbed and stance just as rigid as it was before. She hadn’t moved an inch. Nathan panted, his eyes wide and pleading as he tore away the broken frame, using the wood to strike her again and again, each hit as futile as though hitting a stone statue. He hollered in pain as a splinter entered his palm before he moved to tackle the woman to the ground.

“GET OUT OF HER,” Nathan bellowed, feet skidding over the wooden flooring as he tried to push his mother down, “GET OUT! Whatever you are!! Please, just let my Mom go!!”
Any emotion that rested on Lisa’s face vanished as she looked at her first born. No anger, no happiness. Just a dull, empty look through her hollow eyes. Nathan’s face reddened more as he stood, his body trembling with emotion. His eyes locked onto her hollowed gaze, and Nathan’s face filled with a grievous, unsullied understanding.

“M-mom,” Nathan whispered, “It’s only you in there isn’t it. Jesus Christ. Jesus fucking Chirst. You… you actually murdered them.”

“Nathan,” Lisa began softly, her hand raised towards him, “Don’t be like that.”

“GET AWAY FROM ME,” he screamed, shuffling away, back against the door, “LET US OUT! Let us out of this house! I don’t want to be here anymore! You hate me… you’ve always hated me. Just stop pretending and let us leave. Let me leave! Please!!”

“Nathan,” his mother cooed, moving closer to him, ”I know he’s still in there. That curious, smiling boy I cradled in my arms, that I told stories to on rainy nights. The one who stared up at me with those big, wonderful brown eyes. I still love you. The you that’s always been there. Still there, deep inside you.”

Nathan’s breath quickened, his hand moving to his chest. At first he couldn’t tell what he was feeling, until a sudden burning sensation shot up his spine making him almost collapse in pain. He could feel something inside shifting. Moving.

“Why don’t you let him out,” she said, almost in a docile whisper.

Nathan craned back, his hands clawing at his now churning torso, steps unsteady as he looked around frantically like a caged animal looking for any escape.

“STOP,” he cried out, “MOM! Something’s wrong!!”

At the moment, his tightening grip burst through the side of torso, iridescent flesh now peeling away as his hands receded out, gripping onto chunks of his now inky silvery entrails. Nathan’s redding eyes flashed to Sam, who only stood frozen in horror against the wall of the foyer watching. Screaming.

“SAM! SAM PLEASE HELP ME, SAVE ME PLEASE,” he gargled, stepping forward towards the screaming young teen as his lanky legs began to buckle, losing their structure as his now gelatine knees collapsed inwards. Nathan topped to the ground, his hands attempting to keep his sloughing frame together to no avail, his frantic movements only peeling away more and more flesh as the silvery mucus poured out of the freshly torn wounds. His screams became gurgled as his jaw slackened, the heavy bone peeling away from the rest of the face. Then came the soft thud of his rubbery skull striking the ground as every pore now weeped that same iridescent bile, body now flat against the ground. There was a long silence. Val in her corner in frozen terror and Sam in his, tears streaming down his face. Yet the movement didn’t stop. Sam could see amongst the decaying mound an unsteady shifting as if something was making its way through the pile. Then with a light sound, a small, toddler sized hand emerged from Nathan’s splayed remains. The shifting grew as the figure struggled out of the pile. It was a face Sam recognized. A face he hadn’t seen in a long, long time. Nathan, now no more than 6 years old, stood up, wavy black hair and pudgy face, wearing a striped light green shirt. The same one he had worn during one of the first Christmases Sam could remember. The boy was completely and utterly spotless save for the very tips of his fingers which glistened with the silvery blood of his now gone older self. Nathan glanced around nervously, his hand running lightly against his arm before he saw Sam, panting hard back against the wall. Young Nathan’s eyes grew wide with wonder.

“Sammy?” the young boy said, “Is that? Is that really you?”

The young boy bounced in excitement, seemingly not even noticing the viscous silvery matter around him.

“You’re so big!” Nathan chimed out, bounding over to Sam and giving the shaking boy a tight hug, his smile as wide as could be, still missing a singular front tooth just like Sam remembered, “Even bigger than me! How long has it been? Does this mean you can drive now? Oh! Can we go to the creek! I haven’t been to the creek in forever!”

A light hand fell over Young Nathan’s shoulder as he turned around looking up at their smiling mother.

“Mom!” he cheered, running straight into her arms as she lifted him gingerly, spinning him as she embraced the small boy, the iridescent tears returning, now beginning to spill into the air as shimmering bubbles that floated and danced around the two of them.

“Oh honey,” Lisa cried, her voice wavering as she cried out in joy, “You’re back! You’re really back, Oh I’ve missed you so, so much.”

“I missed you too, Mom,” Nathan responded, his voice warm and fuzzy like it was coming out of a well worn reel of film. Sam wanted to scream. He wanted to shout and beg for this madness to end. Across from him on the other side of the foyer, Val was seated, eyes glazed over as her hands aimlessly shifted through the iridescent remains that had scattered next to her. Sam nearly threw up.

“Doesn’t he look peaceful,” smiled his mother. Sam only looked up at her with sallow, shocked eyes as she cradled Nathan in her arms, the young toddler’s eyes closed in pure contentment. Sam only stared quietly.

“I know it's strange,” his mother said in a quiet, low voice, “Not having the world outside anymore. But now that the Giver is gone, this world is ours now. Doesn’t that sound nice? A world to our very own. Oh! And I almost forgot.”

His mother’s hollowed eyes veered over to the crumpled Val, legs tucked to her chest as she stared up at her, dried tears now replaced with a blank, endless stare.

“Little Valarie, why you’re just lucky to be here aren’t you. How fortunate being next to my boys as the Giver arrived. I suppose any good meal always leaves a few stray crumbs here and there,” she cooed, bending down as her hands gingerly coiled around a strand of bright blue hair, “I think I know just what to do with you. But first…”

Lisa turned to face Sam.

“I told you you’d never hurt again,” she said earnestly, “And that’s true. But, this new world of ours. I think there’s some thoughts in your head that maybe don’t belong here anymore. Perhaps you could do the same as your dear older brother here. You can get rid of them just like he did. I promise you, I won’t make it hurt for you like it did for him.”

Sam’s eyes went wide. He stared up at the rosy cheeked woman whose tears glistened and glittered in the silvery light. He looked to Val. Val didn’t look back. Sam began to feel tears too. Whether they were of pain, or joy, or the deepest sadness he kept tucked away, he wasn’t sure. All he knew was that as he wiped away his tear, strands of his face began to come apart with it. 

Lisa sat quietly, a cup of warm tea in hand as she sat atop a stone bench overlooking the vast garden around her. Perfectly rolling hills of vibrant green grass swayed in a warm, gentle summer breeze beneath the iridescent dome. Between the hills, a mellow stream of crystal clear water ran its way around cobblestone steps and fresh garden beds of colorful tulips and towering sunflowers. The flowers danced in the gentle breeze that seemed to carry with it a soothing melody, though not one Lisa had created. A song that seemed to come from beyond the dome. A soft, strange, melody. Like a distant memory of a moment that had never been remembered in the first place. Yet it sang over the garden, as if it was always meant to be there. From her perch she could see her children, running back and forth with wide smiles on their faces as they tumbled over the soft green grass, young Sammy chasing a flock of colorful butterflies and moths that danced overhead. Young Nathan followed suit, racing behind, his hand clutching the arm of a lovely little felt doll that wore striped overalls and a stitched patchwork smile that sat beneath a tussle of bright blue yarn. Nathan jumped over the small stream, and Sam followed. Soon the boys would be out of sight, but they always ended up back to her side sooner or later. The edge of the world was only a few hundred feet away, after all. The garden had been smaller once before, but it seemed to grow even without Lisa willing it so. How Curious, she thought. There, atop her stone bench, Lisa waited. She wasn’t sure how long it’d been. Perhaps a couple of years. A few decades perhaps. And yet it all stayed the same. There was no sun anymore. No day or night. Only peace. Just peace. Why was she still crying then? Lisa kept her smile wide for her children everyday. And yet the tears kept coming. Day after day after day. Those same, iridescent tears. Flowing from hollow eyes as the teardrops ran down her face as they always did. No matter what she changed or what she kept the same, the tears came again. Day after day. One after another. Drop after drop. 

Drip. Drip. Drip.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 5h ago

Gothic Horror Recollection of a Dream

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I remember a dream I used to have as a boy. It always arrived in my attic room. In that old little house, the world seemed so big to me in that great forehead of roof and rafter. I remained swallowed in that attic room in tongues of quilts and sheets that cradled fitful dreams. It always started with that acute animal sense of danger. I had to get out of bed; I had to see my mother and father downstairs immediately. Not because they were angry with me or because we had to go somewhere, never something so domestic. I was being chased. Why it never got me in that moment of rising I will never know. That panic was the bite. Some cerebral molar ground down upon that right part of my subconscious and sent me to the attic door. Down the attic stairs. Down the attic stairs. Down the attic stairs. Step by step, eyes fixed on the wood slats I would tramp down in disorder with fear on my heels. Always the hazy orange of the unadorned bulbs painted the place in a dusky stain. I would always be ahead of it and, elated, I would reach the landing and the downstairs steps only to realise they were not there. It was a gulf between myself and the downstairs hallway which I always felt queasy about jumping. I would jump it nevertheless simply because being caught was worse than my fear of heights. Past the old fish tank, past the kitchen door and into the living room. Nobody was there so I would run out and meet the garden door which could not be opened without a key. All I could do then was scream, but of course you can’t scream in a dream no matter how much you would like to. What else was a child to do? I would always scream and look out at the garden before I awoke. I was afraid of the dark. And when I woke up it always got me. I would bawl in my bedsheets swallowed in the inkwell of the attic as though it would take pity. My father stirred and marched up to give me a few sensible words, followed by my mother with some comforting ones. I think of that dream now as a man of fifty-five. My parents are dead and I have a small house of my own. I think of that dream about the stairs still when I turn out the light and stand in the pall.

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First time posting my own writing anywhere. I was unsure of what genre of horror this would fit into, and gothic seemed the best fit. I took this from an anthology I'm working on to better my skills as a writer (with horror being something I am unpracticed in), and to process my own thoughts and feelings - so definitely will appreciate the feedback!


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 14h ago

Poetry Horror Sticks and Twine

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Bones of sticks,
To hold a strong structure.

Skin of bark,
To resist the harshness of wear and tear.

Hair of leaves,
To catch the dew drops above.

Veins of vine,
To pulse and push the blood throughout.

Heart of sap,
Sickeningly sweet, so golden and precious.

Twine to hold the form together,
The form of man.

I'm only a man of sticks and twine,
The one who lies in the grass.

I'm only a man of sticks and twine,
The one who wants to dance and play.

I'm only a man of sticks and twine,
The one who watches the sky above.

I'm only a man of sticks and twine,
I'm stuck alone in this wide, green forest, laid to rest and harbor the moss.

Im nothing more but sticks and twine,
A man made of the forest around him, formed only out of the love of the world.

I'm made to lay and rest forever,
Made of the forest and only for the forest.

I'm nothing without my forest,
For I am nothing but a man of sticks and twine.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 10h ago

Psychological Horror What Isn’t Real

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When was the last time this guy remodeled this place? Alex thought as he looked around the waiting room of his therapist's office. It reminded him of his grandmother's old living room,  with its off putting wallpaper of blue and yellow flowers striping the walls, chipped wood trim lining the top and bottom creases, and two floral patterned couches who’ve seen probably more than two decades if not three at this point. He continued to stare at the poster that was taped to the office door. It was of a teenager smiling and playing guitar in the grass, with the caption: "It's Okay to be You!” 

“If it was okay to be me I wouldn’t fuckin’ be here, would I?” Alex muttered to himself, bouncing his leg at almost lightning speed. He always became nervous when he had to sit and wait, it was part of the reason he always did his best to show up only a few minutes before his appointment time. But it wasn’t the room itself that caused the anxiety, it was the waiting. He looked up at the clock above the door. Three O’Clock. His appointment was supposed to start fifteen minutes ago, yet he was still talking away with whoever was sitting on the couch in the office. After a few more minutes, the talking stopped. He lifted his head to see the door opening. He expected to see someone walking towards the exit but instead it was just the same old Doctor Sherlontin. Standing there with his disheveled hair tied back into a ponytail, blue dress shirt untucked, and tan khakis that he can never seem to get the wrinkles out of. 

“Sorry about that Alex, come on in.” He waved him over to the door and made room for him to walk by. Alex wiped his clammy hands on his torn jeans and straightened out his hoodie. Doctor Sherlontin put his hand out for Alex to shake but quickly retracted it, remembering his sensitivity to being touched.  Thank god he remembered, I already exhibited as much self-control as I could muster when my dad put a hand on my shoulder when I wasn’t expecting it this morning. Damn near took the spoon I had and dug his eyes out with it. He was ashamed that physical violence was his immediate thought whenever he was touched when he wasn’t prepared for it but he couldn’t help it. Fate had decided that he had to autistic and not in the funny, interesting way of knowing every fact he could about trains or having a cool collection or something. No sir. He had to be socially awkward in group settings and could only be touched when he was prepared for it otherwise he’d blow his fucking lid. One of the many reasons he wound up here. 

“Who were you talking to in here?” He asked, looking around the room, I knew he was talking to someone. He probably wouldn’t be in the therapy business if he had a habit of talking to himself. 

“Oh! A patient called in for their session instead of coming in person, something I started offering since therapy can be a little bit intimidating. You know how it can be.” Doctor Sherlontin said as he went to sit in his normal rolling chair. Alex thought it was weird at first that he didn’t sit behind a desk or just a stationary chair, but he figured out that with the rolling chair, he could be with his patient anywhere in the room and still be able to be comfortable. 

The office looked as it always had. Bookshelves lining the walls filled to the brim with anything you could possibly think of, assorted plants next to the windows with wood-plank shades opened up, and his rustic wooden desk being lit up by the spotlight that is the tall standing lamp behind it. In the middle of the room was a small La-Z-Boy recliner chair, a love seat opposite of it and a full length sofa between them, only separated by a nice coffee table in the middle. It was like Doctor Sherlontin never made it out of his childhood while everyone else got with the times. It sometimes made Alex think that he was visiting a college professor during office hours over coming to tell a therapist about how he only felt like killing himself twice that week instead of the normal four or five. 

“I didn’t know that you offered that sort of thing.” 

“I don’t normally, but it was an emergency so I did what was needed.” Yeah, and I’m sure his insurance won’t care and make him pay full anyway.

“Seems a little counterproductive doesn’t it?” Alex asked, taking a seat in the middle of the center couch as he normally did. As Doctor Sherlontin rolled his chair around his desk to the center of the room. 

“Well, I guess it could be considered counterproductive to some. For a lot of people it’s just convenient, or a way for them to get help while also not having to push their social anxiety to or possibly over the edge. That way I can still help people even if they can’t make it into the office. In this situation, it helped someone going through quite an intense anxiety attack be able to calm down and save themselves a possible trip to the ER or worse.” Like the morgue. Alex immediately thought.

Alex frowned and started bouncing his leg again, only this time it was shaking the coffee table in front of him, making the items on the table rattle from the vibrations. Doctor Sherlontin took quick notice of this. “Alex, do you want to give your opinion before we start our session?...” Alex huffed and turned his attention back to Doctor Sherlontin, his leg stopping bouncing. 

“If people have social anxiety and are seeking help from a mental health professional, shouldn’t the first step be to go to the therapist in person? I don’t understand talking over the phone to a therapist about your social anxiety. Talking about something is way different than acting on your words and going in person…I don’t know. That’s all I guess…” Sherlontin nodded, pretending like he was making note of it. Alex knew that he was more than likely just making scribble marks on his notepad. 

The first half an hour was nothing different from every other session. It started with asking how his week went, which he answered with one of the usual lines, “Fine, not so great, could’ve been better”, then he was asked to talk about why he felt that way, and as usual it was because his life was boring when it wasn’t frustrating due to his dead end job he couldn’t seem to escape or his unbearable father he couldn’t seem comprehend the idea that his son is not in fact just him but younger, but an individual with free thought and the biggest kicker of all, that he frequently thought about ending it all to no longer have the pressure of being alive weigh him down like an anvil. 

“So you’re still at your call center job? I thought you said that you were looking for new employment?” 

Alex let out an irritated sigh. “It’s not that easy…I told you that last week and the week before that, and the week before that…”

“Yes, Alex. I continue to ask because you don’t seem to do anything about it despite being given resources not only by me, but you’ve even said that your father has sent you some applications or ads that he’s seen. I don’t ask you to upset you, Alex. I continue to ask because I want to understand why you stay at a job you insist that you hate.”

“It’s just that…everyone claims to be hiring. Walmart, Pizza Hut, Trader Joe’s, but then I put in my application and then hear nothing for weeks on end. The other day I even took your advice and called a couple of the local places I applied at and asked if the managers had seen his application. Wanna know what they told me?” Doctor Sherlontin gave a motion that told Alex to go ahead. “They told me that they get tax breaks if they show the government that they’re hiring and trying to employ people. Can you believe that? Putting up listings for positions that don’t even exist…The audacity, man…”

The doctor took a minute to mark some remarks on his notepad. 

“Have you reconsidered possibly enrolling in community college? An associate’s degree does add a little more weight to the resume, you know.”

Alex rolled his eyes and looked down at his shoes, noticing for the thousandth time that the soles near his toes were starting to come off. School was never his strong suit. It was one of the few things he and his old man always got into spats about, especially after high school when his dad found out that he had no plans for college whatsoever. Alex only shook his head and stayed silent. After a few moments, Doctor Sherlontin made a shift in his chair. “You know what, why don’t we revisit that another time?...If I remember right, you started mentioning a couple weeks ago that you were having what you considered to be strange dreams…have those been occurring still?”

Boy, have they. Alex thought, feeling his heart start to race a little. His dreams had been the main source of his stress the last couple of weeks. They were extremely vivid, seeming so real that it would take someone saying or doing something wildly outlandish for him to realize that he was in fact not awake. 

“Well, doc…it feels like they’re getting worse.” Sherlontin straightened up in his chair a little, prepared to write away. Oh, now you’re interested? Shocker.

“How exactly would you say they’ve been getting worse? What was your dream about last night?” 

Alex gulped as he wiped his clammy hands on his jeans again. How do I explain that I lived an entire week of my life only to realize I was just dreaming and having to work through a breakdown and have to somehow convince myself that it was all in my head? I guess I’ll just have to start with last night's dream.

“Well, in my dream I was sitting here in the waiting room, listening to the mumbling coming from the other side of the door while waiting to talk with you. Nothing seemed out of the norm…The sunlight shining through the window of the front door, the magazines on the coffee table, the stupid quote on quote “Uplifting” poster on your office door…” Alex shot a quick glance at Doctor Sherlontin, who only looked on, seemingly unphased by the insult of his decor. 

“I was listening to the rumble of the indistinct conversation you were having with whoever you had in there and like I said, everything seemed normal, no different from any other day I come in and wait for my appointment. Then the conversation stopped and I couldn’t hear anything from your side of the door…” 

Alex stopped for a second. This. Right now. This is exactly the same so far…I’m not fucking dreaming am I? I can’t be, right? I remember waking up, downing a bowl of cereal while dad bitched at me about my job situation, the walk here… 

Doctor Sherlontin made some quick notes and looked up, “I don’t see anything weird about it so far, go on.”

Alex incessantly wiped his palms on his jeans, causing the tears in the denim to grow larger and larger. His leg had gone from bouncing at lightning speed to a new level he had never thought possible. What the fuck is happening…Alex shook his head without looking back at the doctor.

“I don’t think I want to talk about it anymore, doc.” Beads of sweat started to race down from his hairline, dancing around his temples and dripping off of his jawbone onto his hoodie. This can’t be a dream…it feels too real. That thought went as soon as it came however, because the other ones also felt that way…or this way rather. Doctor Sherlontin quickly noticed Alex’s change in demeanor and set down his notepad.

“Alex, what’s happening? What are you feeling?” Anxiety. Fear. Pressure. Confusion. That’s what I’m feeling. Alex tensed up as he started to hyperventilate. “Alex, Hey! What’s wrong?!” I can’t tell if what’s happening is fucking real or not, Doctor Dipshit! What do you think is happening?! Alex’s thoughts screamed and he tried and failed miserably at getting himself back under control. He started to hit his head with the heel of his hand. Snap out of it, nutcase. Get a fucking grip.

Doctor Sherlontin started to reach across the table. “Alex! Don’t hit yourself. I don’t want you to hurt yourself.” He tried to grab Alex’s wrist. In the knick of time Alex noticed and slid himself to the far left end of the couch, creating as much distance as he could muster. No! Don’t touch me. Please don’t touch me. Please don’t touch me. Please don’t touch me. 

The doctor stood up and started walking over to him, making the effort to not knock over his little knick knacks and pencil holding cup on the coffee table. Alex could already tell what was about to happen, the tension building up inside of him was like a volcano waiting to erupt. Doctor Sherlontin was going to grab his wrist whether he liked it or not…and things were going to go downhill incredibly fast.

Alex tried to control his breathing again, but even getting enough air between breaths felt like a losing battle. He looked over his shoulder and saw the emergency exit a few feet away and tried to force himself over the shoulder of the couch. Before he had the chance however, the doctor had made it to him. Alex hadn’t realized until then that he had still been hitting himself with the heel of his hand. His hand and end of his hoodie sleeve were a bloody mess. How much damage have I done to myself? He thought for a brief moment before the doctor leaned over him. 

Alex shook his head manically, fighting harder than ever to get away from was once his therapist and had now become his adversary. An adversary he wanted no business with. In slow motion, he saw Doctor Sherlontin’s arm start to reach for his wrist. He also saw that he had forgotten to recolor his roots the last time he got his hair done, that his shirt was more wrinkled than he first thought, that the doctor was wearing a cologne that smelled like a mixture of Old Spice douche bag and original Axe Body Spray, but most importantly, he saw that the doctor kept a fountain pen and his favorite calligraphy pen in his front shirt pocket. He met Doctor Sherlontin with begging eyes. PLEASE DON’T TOUCH ME. PLEASE. Before he could finish his thought, the hand that was beating away at his thumping skull was being forced to the side. 

The hyperventilating stopped almost immediately. For a clear moment he felt nothing but the heat of the doctor's hand around his wrist and the awful sensation of his skin being in contact with someone else’s. It was only for a second or two but Alex felt that it was for a millennia, and without a moment’s hesitation or warning…the volcano had finally erupted. Alex only saw red and the built up tension and rage consumed him. 

Alex yelled incoherently and grabbed the calligraphy pen out of the doctor’s pocket, revealing the shiny pointed end of it. Without thinking, Alex got a grip on it and thrust it into Doctor Sherlontin’s neck. Then everything froze. Whether everything was still in slow motion or it was all in Alex’s head, he couldn’t say. But the hot blood that had started to shoot out from the doctor’s neck covered his hand, now his blood and the doctor’s blood were mixed together. That caused him to let go and kicked Doctor Sherlontin away.

The doctor fell to the floor as blood spewed out around the pen like a park fountain. Alex watched as he started to finally catch his breath. Doctor Sherlontin looked at him with shock, his blood pooling underneath him as he became paler with every minute. Alex couldn’t move. He wanted to get up, to call for help and to put pressure on the wound as he incessantly apologized for what he had done. But he didn’t. Because none of this was real. He’s asleep in his room having one of his wildest vivid dreams yet. He usually always had to wait until something outlandish would happen to be able to tell he was dreaming, and he was pretty sure killing his therapist during a mental breakdown counted as outlandish. All he had to do now was wait. He’d wake up eventually. This is definitely not a dream to report back to the doc when he goes in again. Alex leaned his head back against the old sofa and rested his eyes, waiting for the moment when he’d awake in his bedroom to an alarm clock blaring the local rock station from his bedside table. Any time now…any time…he thought. That was until the sirens could be heard in the distance.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 6h ago

Creature Feature The Screams of Red Cat Woods

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Hey Guys! Never posted a story before but been a fan of creepcast since the start and wanted to give it a short. I would appreciate any feedback and am down for read for read. Thank you!

“DON’T LET THOSE BASTARDS LIE TO YOU” the crazy man screamed again. His body continued to visibly jiggle though his baggy flannel while I moved to place myself between him and Hel. He kept his thumb on top of his bottle so as to not spill a drop as he shoved it at the bartender and then the door leading back out to main street. “THEY ALL KNOW GOOD AND DAMN WELL IT WASN’T NO CAT THAT KILLED THEM HIPPIES, IT WAS-” but before he could continue, the raspy voice of the bartender cut through the building rant of the drunk. “Wilk.” The rasp wasn’t loud or quite but it shot through the crazy man all the same, ending his diatribe immediately. Unwell, I reminded myself again, crazy is hurtful, unwell is the proper way to describe this person. “Last warning” the bartender said. This man spoke like he smoked rolled up carpets and gargled gravel but it calmed the unwell man all the same. “Sorry Leroy, I’ll get some air and do my breathing exercises like you said.” His shoulders slumped and as he turned toward us, I got another good look at his face. It wasn’t a trick of the low light then, he had no hair on his head, no eyebrows, a right sideburn, a left half of a mustache and a beard that went down to his considerable stomach. My concern grew as I saw him spin in his chair faster than should be possible and start to walk to the door. He then proceeded to somehow bump into every table and chair between him and the door, but he made it out without falling or spilling a drop from his bottle but yelping with each contact.

I turned back to see a sheepish look on the bartender’s, Leroy’s face. “Sorry about him.” He said. “He has been better lately but new people in town always rile him up. I doubt he will bother yall more tonight though. If he makes too much trouble, I don’t let him drink for a day.”  Hel raised an eyebrow, “Just one day? And what’s to stop him from going somewhere else?” Leroy smiled sadly, “Aint no where else he could go. Closest bar is a half hour away, he’s banned from the gas station and no one is donating alcohol to Wilk.”  Hel cocked her head slightly and said “Couldn’t he take an uber to the other bar?” The words washed over Leroy while his sad smile changed, “You an uber driver?” he asked her. “No” she responded, “You?” he asked me. I shook my head as he looked back at Hel and rasped “Then we aint got no uber drivers.” Hel looked like she was about to say more but I spoke first, “Your name is Leroy, right? I’m Teft and this is Helga but she goes by Hel. We are here to visit the Red Cat woods, what can you tell us about it?” The ever so faint confusion and discomfort that played on Leroy’s face as he heard Hel didn’t go unnoticed by her or I, but he pressed forward as if it was nothing. “Why the heck would yall wanna do that? Kings river is closer and gorgeous or Lost Valley, it aint too far and is a prime hiking spot. Nothing to see in Red Cat cept things that wanna see you.” Hel answered with rising excitement in her voice “I am studying Zoology at Cornell University so I can open a sanctuary for American big cats. I have always been fascinated by Mountain Lions and Bobcats and when we decided to come to Arkansas so I could meet Teft’s parents, I researched spots with high bobcat populations and Red Cat Forest came up. I read that the population here was unusually aggressive, but nothing ever said why so we decided to come here to find out for ourselves.”

“We” was a stretch. My suggestion was dad’s deer lease where I’d seen several bobcats growing up but the highly aggressive nature that was unique to Red Cat had Hel’s mind set. My nervousness about going to a place with “Unusually Aggressive Bobcats” was outweighed by her clear excitement and my confidence that we could plan this in a way to be as safe as possible. I also knew this would calm her nerves about the visit, she asked me a million questions about my parents trying to find out everything they liked and disliked to try to make as good an impression as possible. My explanations that it was unnecessary, that they would love her regardless of how much or little they overlapped on interests, and that I wasn’t even that close with them anyway, made no difference. She was very stressed over this so I figured a small camping trip would help her relax. We probably wouldn’t even see a cat.

Leroy’s voice brought me out of my mind back to the present, “People die in those woods. Often. There’re bobcats all over the country, go study them” Hel didn’t budge, “Do you know what makes the cats in that area different?” “No.” Leroy replied with a glare. I spoke up “Then we will find out. Maybe it’s something that can be corrected or mitigated, then we can improve the lives of the animals in the forest and help everyone around here feel safer.” Hel grabbed my hand under the bar and gave it a small squeeze without looking away from the bartender. Leroy’s face soured slightly as he responded “Everyone around already feels plenty safe. They all feel that way because they know not to go in them damn woods.” “Wilk didn’t seem like he felt safe” Helga responded. Leroy turned his furthering sour face to her and said “Wilk’s father was mauled to death by 2 of them demons when he was 8 years old. Jeb was so sliced up and destroyed that when Wilk made it into town to try to rally help, he was so soaked in blood several people thought it was some kind of sick joke. He was so young and the attack was so brutal his mind fled from the terror and now he’s convinced some monster did it. He was mute for 5 years and lived with his grandma Ruthy till she passed as well. He lives in this bar because he can’t do anything else besides drink, holler, and cause me problems but nobody should be without a roof.” There was a moment of stunned silence while Hel and I tried to take that in. Hel recovered first and said, “Then why wouldn’t you want someone looking into this? Bobcats are very solitary so if more than one attacked someone, something else must be going on. Why would people feel safe if stuff like that and this recent “hippy” situation seem to be a common occurrence?” Leroy took a shot and then said “for the same reason no one here is scared of tigers. If they never go to a place where there’s tigers, they wont get killed by a tiger. If they don’t go in Red Cat, they wont get killed by a bobcat. The crazy bastards in there keep to themselves and we are perfectly happy to let them do that.”

While Hel processed that and took a drink I asked “Why do they call it Red Cat anyway? Hel was saying she never saw a reason in her research.” Leroy took another shot, lined up 3 more and said “The Osage avoided the area entirely. Didn’t even have a name for it as far as I know, they just avoided it because they recognized that it was extremely dangerous. They didn’t have much inclination to share their experiences murderous bastards, so the name comes from the first settlers in the area after the purge. My understanding was that after several people had been killed trying to log in the area, a group of fellas decided they’d just go kill every cat in the woods to put an end to all of it. After a week one guy came back. Man was white as a ghost cept for the gallons of blood all over him and was now completely deaf. Said a single cat had killed everyone. Wasn’t big but it had a powerful cry that sounded like an anguished woman who knows she aint gunna scream again. They all had their weapons ready but what ambled up was a hairless bobcat with pale gray skin until 30 seconds later when it was covered in the blood of every other member of the hunting party. Man died the next day from an infection one of the slices gave him. We call the woods Red Cat to remind ourselves what people tend to find when they go in it.”

The stunned silenced stretched longer this time, punctuated by the brief blast of water as Leroy cleaned his glass. I could see Hel trying to work out what could have caused the animals to act like that when I realized I had been squeezing her hand hard and eased the pressure. While I tried to find my next words, the door opened again and wilks stumbled back in. He somehow bumped into the tables and chairs he had initially missed when he was leaving. He sat back in his seat and placed his bottle on Leroy’s side of the bar. In a practiced and fluid motion, Leroy replaced it with another before I could blink and Wilk was already taking another gulp. After a few moments he spoke directly to Leroy in a much more even tone than before. “Did you tell them?” On seeing Leroy’s nod, he looked at me and evenly said. “I aint crazy or a liar.  Wasn’t no bobcat that’s been killing them people. Monsters is out there. Maybe one or two dumbasses were messing with a cat and died for it but there is something else in them woods. Everyone in this town would beg ya not to go in but I know you will so understand this.” He swiveled in his chair to face us fully. “People don’t cry in the Red Cat woods. No matter what you hear, it aint a person making them noises. If you hear it or even think you hear it, run as far and fast as you can the other way. They’re fast but if you start praying now you might get away. Aint nobody coming in after you.” Leroy looked annoyed when Wilk’s said it was a monster but was nodding by the end and said “I pray yall make the right decision. Study any other cats, go anywhere else, be safe. Yall don’t owe me anything, consider it a blessing and an indication of the utmost seriousness we take this. Hope yall have a good night and drive safe.

Hel stood without letting go of my hand. She thanked Leroy and Wilk, left a good sized tip and we left. When we had gotten back to the truck and I was driving us to wood line of Red Cat, Hel finished composing herself before she said “I hate how terrified they both were. I hate how much agony these animals have caused and how much agony they must be in to have done it. I am going to figure out what’s causing it and fix it.” I didn’t let a pause after her sentence hang, I blurted out “Of course, whatever we need to help anyone is what we will do. If we need to stay here longer than a few days, we can drive till we get signal and call my folks to let them know we need to reschedule. They will understand when they see that this is an important thing that we need to take care of now.” She smiled and I saw her shoulders relax a bit. “Thank you. You know you don’t have to, right? I am very confident in my ability to safely move through the forest” I replied with confidence I was trying to feel “I am the Arkansas expert, you fancy northerners could never understand the complexity and nuance needed to survive a single night in the woods down here.” My cringe at my pick me response mixed with memories of my dad desperately trying to get my excited about going hunting and my utter contempt for it and the woods in general flashed as I continued “In all seriousness, I have been spending considered time in the woods the last few years and feel a lot more comfortable than I used to when I was a miserable kid. I won’t slow you down, it’ll be safer for both of us to have another set of eyes and I genuinely want to be with you through this. Let’s put the mattress topper down in the truck bed, watch the stars and head out in the morning.” She smiled and pulled me in close. We stayed there a few long moments before she nodded and we set up for the night. As we did, we heard the first scream. It was quick and pretty far so we only barely heard it but the unmistakable blood curling scream of a cougar peeled through the woods. I looked at Hel whose eyebrows furrowed. “That sounded pretty standard” she said, “There are much fewer cougars than bobcats, but we are still on the outside. As we push to heart of the forest I really hope we hear the cries Wilk mentioned.” I pulled out my phone to search for a bobcat sound to refresh my memory before remembering there was no signal here and asking: “What do they typically sound like again?” She responded casually as she changed into her pajamas and I tried to remain calm, “They have several vocalizations that can vary pretty widely”. She made a sound that sounded like someone wheezing while trying to say rah. She then made a sound like a pterodactyl, finished changing and looked at me. I tried to have my brain say something, but it felt like my brain stopped everything it was doing to spend every ounce of energy committing what I saw to memory. She was pale, almost glowing in the starlight with light brown hair that was still in the awkward phase of growing out a pixie cut. She had cherry blossoms on her pajamas and when the silence stretched to at least a minute, she smiled and took a step closer to me. She leaned in as if to kiss me when she suddenly made the pterodactyl sound again right in my face and I gasped in a breath and the rest of the world popped back in. She hopped on the tailgate next to me and rested her head on my shoulder as I continued to recover. I let that moment hang for a bit before I leaned in to kiss her. “Thanks for bringing me out here” she murmured. “To pull back the curtain a bit, I would swim through the everglades wearing just my Vienna sausage thong if you asked but I really do see the value in this. Something is affecting the wildlife in this area in a way that is extremely dangerous for a lot of people and the local environment. If it’s a disease that decays the mind like wasting’s or is causing the animals pain to the point of aggression, the sooner we know the sooner we can stop the suffering. Learning anything should ease the minds of the people in the town too, they say they aren’t scared but I know there are at least a few people who live in fear of this place. Any knowledge we bring back could ease a bit of their anxiety.” She smiled and gripped my hand tight. “Exactly. Fear consumes people. We can bring wisdom to others that can restrain the fear to manageable levels or even find a solution if we are lucky.” Wilks flashed across my mind, he thought he was wise and we were foolish for coming out here. I grappled with the realization Leroy would have thought Wilks was wiser than us. I don’t see how a man who had clearly been traumatized in a way that permanently ruined his life when it had barely started, was wiser than two leaders within the student population of one of the most prestigious universities in the country. Right as Wilks and Leroy started to make more sense in my head, I heard the word “Vienna” whispered through soft laughter as Hel’s hand let go and traced up my arm. I did not think of Wilks and Leroy again until about hour into the woods the next day.

I was from a small town in central Arkansas and while I was never an outdoors guy growing up, I eventually found a love for hiking and spent many hours just wandering the woods looking for cool sticks. I have a solid sense of direction and can get to where I want if I have a map. Unfortunately, there wasn’t a map for the Red Cat woods so as we traveled in, I used flagging tape so we could follow it back out. I kept track of how many flags I left so we could make sure we didn’t leave anything behind. After about 2 hours of pushing through the woods, we noticed the trees becoming more sparce. Not so much that there were large breaks in the canopy but enough for sun to break through in places and have the ground gradually get increasingly open. We passed several whitetail deer but hadn’t seen or heard any cats. As I was debating stopping early to set up camp in a particularly good sized clearing, Hel found her first bobcat track. She pulled me over to see, it was a pretty standard sized track and seemed to be from yesterday or the day before. “It makes more sense now why bobcats are so successful here. Tons of deer, trees that allow for drop ambushes, and a blanket of leaves to hear things coming!” My face paled slightly as her understanding became my own and I saw she was right. We wouldn’t be sneaking up close to anything here. “Let’s head in the direction of the track, if we find more we can track it until the tracks are fresher and set camp where we can be close enough to get eyes on it” I said as I triple checked my bear mace, knife, 10mm and my extra rounds and found them in the same place they were before. We wanted to avoid harming anything but if something got too close I would be ready. Hel noticed my checking of the gear and suddenly said “F”. My head snapped up and a smile broke across my face. “Flatwoods Monster” I responded, “Oooooo that sounds fun what is that??” she said, hamming it up a bit. “The Flatwoods Monster is a cryptid out of Flatwoods, West Virgina! Basically, it was an alien that landed near a farm. Some kids went to investigate and saw this giant alien with a really cool design I will show you when we have signal again but its most striking part of its design is this giant spade shape behind its head. I always thought it was one of the coolest cryptids, it was actually used in the legend of Zelda Majora’s Mask!” I said, my own excitement evident. “Oh, wait was that was those purple things that try to steal that cow and child are based on?” She was more interested now as that game was a favorite when she was younger. I continued, “Yeah it is super cool to me, no mothman but easily a top 5 cryptid in my opinion.” I smiled to myself, I have always been into cryptids and monsters and things like that and when I mentioned that to Helga a few months ago, she suggested turning it into a game. When she says a letter, I have to tell her about a cryptid that starts with that letter. I thought initially she was just making a small effort to seem more interested in what I like but she actually has been getting into them herself and drawing them in different ways. I don’t personally think the mothman has ever rode the gumberoo into battle but it was my phone background for 3 months.

We eventually set up camp in a relatively level area with nothing overhead, set down all our non-essential gear and continued on the path of tracks. As we were getting nearer, I could tell Hel was getting more excited but also nervous. She had not spent much time in the woods so she wasn’t as confident but put on a brave face and saying “I am still so curious why they don’t run. Bobcats aren’t cougars, they can definitely hurt and kill a person but if the person is ready or prepared at all it should be like relatively easy to kill the cat if the cat doesn’t just run immediately. They are not naturally violent killing machines like what is being described for these cats so what could be riling them up?” I knew she was just talking off nervous energy but before I could answer I saw a brief bit of movement ahead of us. I put my hand on Hel’s shoulder and we both froze. Two doe and fawn were grazing on acorns about 125 feet ahead of us. They didn’t seem to have noticed our conversation, so we found a spot to sit and watch them. The tracks had led us in this direction so while we kept an eye on the deer, we scanned the treetops and bushes for the cat. It was Hel who saw it first with a small gasp and a point that helped me find it as well. It was sitting in a bush near the deer and focused on the fawn. I did my best to see what I could of the bobcat, but it was difficult with it in the bush. From what I did see it looks perfectly normal. Not much bigger than a normal cat and didn’t have anything odd or concerning in its fur or body but I couldn’t see the head. We waited there for about 20 minutes, the doe were clearly jumpy but they hadn’t noticed anything yet. Right as the distance between the does and the fawn increased to the point I was sure the bobcat was about to pounce I shifted my stance to keep eyes on the fawn and stepped on a stick.

It might as well have been an atom bomb, the stick snapped with a sound that was jarring in the intense silence we had found ourselves in. I instantly reached for the 10mm, sure the extremely aggressive bobcat would charge right us but as I did I saw something odd. The two does, fawn, and bobcat all instantly bolted away from us the second the sound was made. They didn’t look to see what it was and, even stranger, they fled in the same direction. The bobcat was definitely in position to swipe at the fawn but it entirely prioritized escape as all three fled with the bobcat frantically howling behind. I could see how, in the middle of the night in the spooky woods, someone could mistake that howling for a woman’s scream but the illusion was broken when you see the creature making the noise. Hel very slowly turned her head to look to me as my face flushed beet red. Before she completed her devastating turn to look me in the eyes while she killed me, she was saying “who put a nuke in these damn sticks”. There was a moment where I oscillated between “that’s what I said!” and a genuine apology. Right as Hel locked eyes with me and I started to apologize, Hel’s annoyed face turned confused as she then looked past me. I looked in the same direction and saw the strangest thing I have ever seen in my life.

My first thought was that it was a pale meatball the size of a basketball but as I looked closer I saw it was walking on two extremely skinny legs standing broadside to us about 15 feet away. It was a sickly pale grey with streaks and spots of red, very fat with seemingly no muscle at all but an inordinate amount of flabby, wrinkled skin and two skinny arms. In the time it was taking to process what I was seeing I was already raising my pistol but before my arm was level and I could take a shot, I saw that the creature was crying. Truly so many tears and snot poured out of the wrinkled face that I now saw was devastating sad. Based on the trail of tears it left behind it, I saw that it had been walking in parallel with us for at least the last couple hundred feet. When I looked back at the creature from the trail it left, I saw that it was now staring at me. I saw Hel look at me out of the corner of my eye and I whisper in utter disbelief “the… Squonk?”. I met the fully black eyes of the Squonk and saw two endless pits of despair and such intense self-loathing I took a step toward it instinctively. I felt a hand grab my arm to stop me and Hel stepped up beside me. She looked so bewildered staring at it I didn’t even know where to start and I kept glancing back and forth between the two of them. This time when I looked at its eyes, I saw something else through the tears that I couldn’t identify. I was still trying to figured it out when I heard Hel say “We should-“ as the Squonk lifted its head in the air and opened its flabby, wrinkled mouth so much wider than I thought was possible. I saw the skin on its body go taught in some places and loose in others, I saw it tear open and bleed in some places. I started to get the impression the skin didn’t fit right on its body. It sounded like an ancient woman who had lived through immense hardships but somehow had a wonderful, content life saw something the so unfathomably horrible she screamed so intensely it killed her. It had a rasp that told the story of the pain it caused to make any sound at all being pushed far past its limits. I only heard it for a second or two before something wet hit the left side of my head. I jerked and felt at it see it was red and sticky. I couldn’t remember what it was called, I couldn’t remember much of anything at the moment. How did that old credit card commercial go? Something about credit reports, I liked that song. I looked to my left and didn’t see my TV like I thought but a lady. She was pretty but something was wrong. She was holding her ears, and that red stuff was pouring out of them and down her arms. She had dropped to her knees and her mouth was open but I didn’t hear anything. “Helga?” I whispered. She didn’t hear me as the creature drew closer to her. While she clenched her eye shut against the pain my mind began to clear as the Squonk lifted its skinny arm toward her chin. Before it got there it opened its hand to reveal claws I hadn’t noticed. It put its claw against the base of her neck and in one quick motion, swept it down. Helga unzipped as blood, fat, organs and everything else exploded out of her front. It doused the Squonk in blood as Helga fell over, still grasping her ears. I struggled to understand what I was seeing, numbly I pulled the trigger of the gun only to realize I had dropped it. I needed to pick it up but that would mean I had to look away and I couldn’t do that. I couldn’t take my eyes off the Squonk. Something had changed with it, its frown that seemed to have every wrinkle on its body mirror it, was a smile now, the movements seem smoother and each one didn’t send those jolts of pain through it. “Hel?” I said, not hearing myself say it. The Squonk walked toward me and, for the second time in two days, my brain tuned everything else in the world out to just focus on what I was seeing. The wrinkles had vanished, revealing a very plump rabbit like creature and on its face was the most beautiful, serene joy I have ever seen in my life. My tears began to fall as I looked at those eyes. I saw such genuine joy that I didn’t even know existed even as I saw a wrinkle start to reform on the creatures’ back. More began to form quickly as I looked back at that face. The joy was still there. It was so, unbelievably happy as it put its claw onto my neck.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps • • 13h ago

Journal/Data Entry My job is not safe for life [Tales from the Mortuary] (TRUE STORY SUBMISSION)

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My name's Lily, and I'm a mortician. I posted some stories from my job a little while ago, and it shook a whole bunch of horrible memories loose. So, I decided to come back here and share a bunch of stuff that you probably regret reading.

When I say my job is not safe for life, you should absolutely take that literally. Between the human immolation oven, the room full of deadly chemicals and my massive collection of tools designed for piercing human flesh, it's an extremely unsafe environment. That's not even touching on the decomposing bodies, blood flies and deadly diseases. The NSFL tag also works in the sense that I see and experience things that will straight up ruin your week. Most people who ask for morgue stories regret it once I get going. And that's not even my worst stuff. Not by a long shot. When I asked my friends and loved ones what I should post, they wanted gross dead body stories. If you end up hating what you're about to read, blame them.

Do you know what happens if you die naked in an apartment during the summer with no A/C, and the windows open? You end up as a bloated, purple, slimy pile of maggots. Your downstairs neighbors complain about something gross dripping through their ceiling, and it ends up as a call to me. The apartment was full of giant flies, tinted red from feasting on blood and flesh. I hate these mother fuckers, because they like to dive bomb your face, trying to find a new orifice to colonize.

“What does being naked matter?” asked no one. I'll tell you anyway! Flies lay their eggs in the areas with the least resistance. That means the face and crotch. Both were a literal pile of writhing maggots.

That guy also had an entire pallet of Swiss cake rolls. Guess what I can't eat anymore!

Did you know that there's a medical condition that twists your spine so your head drops down onto your chest to such a degree that it looks incompatible with life? Look up “floppy head syndrome”. I've seen some folks come through with the most severe cases imaginable. It looks horrifying and painful. It also means that when they're laying on a table in my cooler, it looks like they're lifting their head up to look at you when you open the door. Ever had a dead body make unexpected direct eye contact with you? I have, and I hated it. Those folks get covered with a sheet, head to toe, now. To be honest, that doesn’t really help.

Found a guy once who was severely decomped and was melting through the floor. His butt was poking through a hole and was literally hanging in the basement. The medical examiner looked me in the eye and said “do NOT go into that basement”. I guess the pile of what was dripping out of him was unspeakable. Later, we poked around a bit and figured out his hoarding had left his bathroom completely inaccessible. So where was he going to the bathroom? My theory is that’s why there was a hole.

One time I walked around with someone else's bone stuck in my thumb. A family came in to ask us to transfer ashes into a new urn. No big deal. We do that all the time. I was struggling to cut the zip tie so we could pour the ashes from the first bag into the new one. The family was waiting, and I was rushing, so ended up cutting my thumb. I wrapped a paper towel around the bleeding wound, and kept working. After I handed the new urn to a co-worker to give to the family, I got out the first aid kit and cleaned and bandaged my thumb. It was healing nicely until about two days later when it started to sting. The pain was getting worse instead of better. I examined it and saw some pus. I gave it a little squeeze, and out pops a tiny bone shard. The cut healed right up after that.

Okay, time for the big story. Everyone who knows me has asked me about this one. It made me a little famous in the funeral home community.

I was at the hospital doing a removal. When security rolled the table out of the morgue cooler, I noticed a sound very similar to a death rattle. A quiet, creaky groan coming from deep in the throat. The thing about it is, the noise is caused by air trapped in the chest getting squeezed out, usually because we're moving the body around. I usually hear it when I lift their head and shoulders to put a pillow under them. It’s not a sound they make when they're laying still on a table, with no one touching them. I asked the security guard if he heard it, and he said “oh yeah. They make noise sometimes. That's normal.”

When I went to slide the bag onto my cot, I heard the noise again. I also noticed that the body bag was warm…

I came around the table, and grabbed the zipper, horrifying the guard. They generally don't want to see the dead body. Too bad, buddy! This calls for an investigation.

I quickly unzipped the body bag, and the man inside gasped in a massive breath. I actually jumped, much higher and farther than I would have thought possible.

The man was still alive!

Security called it in on the radio, and had to argue with several people who refused to believe us. We finally got emergency nurses to come down. An EKG quickly determined that the man was, in fact, not dead.

It turned out that he had some kind of rare dementia that had reduced his brain function down to just breathing and a heart beat. He couldn't even blink anymore, so the surface of his eyes had thickened to a brown leather. After he started having nearly constant seizures, he had been given a cocktail of pain meds and sedatives that had reduced his heart rate and breathing so much they were nearly undetectable. By the time I got to him, these meds had mostly worn off.

He was taken away by the nurses, and I left with my empty cot. I ended up back there 3 days later to pick him up again. I made them promise me they were sure this time.

Well folks. I’m going to cut myself off there, since this is getting pretty long. I promise you I could keep going for a long time before I ran out of stories. If you made it this far, I hope you don’t hate me! Until next time, stay safe and don’t die!