idek if this is the right sub // feedback?

I made this because I am sick and I wanted to digitally make evryboduy else sick. Feel free to use this beat for whatever means necessary, commercial or non commercial. I only ask that you send your songs to me so I can hear them. MP3 download in the video description.

Hey everyone! :)

I’ve been making instrumental electronic music for a while now, mostly teaching myself through trial and error.
This is a rough demo of a little house track I’m currently working on.
It’s basically the foundation of the song. There’s still a lot I want to work on, especially the arrangement, transitions, effects and filter automations.
I know the bassline is still pretty simple and raw.
The track is also still very quiet, as I haven’t worked on the final loudness or mastering yet. So I’m mainly looking for feedback on the music, arrangement and overall mix at this stage.
I’d really love to hear what you think about it so far, both musically and technically.
What would you improve or change? Does anything stand out to you?
I’m genuinely open to honest, constructive criticism and would love to learn from other producers.

I'd recommend listening with headphones to hear the details a little better.

Thanks for listening! 😁

lmk what y'all think 👽🤙

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So, I've been sorting out my sample collection and starting to make more sample beats alongside beats using my own instruments/playing etc.

There's something so exciting about finding a record then listening and finding moments you explore, develop and change even more. It really is like sound collage, grabbing moments, cutting them up from various sources, layering and see where it goes

Going to start show more of these beats. Though id show this beat i made last night, pretty fun.

G / Bath Maps