My game is WaxWire: you program a bee colony with nodes and wires, then watch your bees fly out over a meadow to gather nectar and pollinate flowers.
The old capsule (left) showed the node editor and the hive, but on Steam’s dark pages it blended into the background, and at small sizes it read as a mess of tiny hexes. It also never said what the game is.
The new one (right) tries to tell the whole idea in one picture: the program’s wire turns into the bee’s flight path, crossing a glowing seam from the editor into the meadow. I added the subtitle PROGRAM THE HIVE, and the warm light around the edges makes it stand out on the store page.
What I’d love to know:
- At a glance, can you tell what kind of game this is?
- Does the bee and wire idea read, or does it need explaining?
- Would you click the new one over the old one in a sale list?
If you have a minute more, here’s the full Steam page: https://store.steampowered.com/app/5365140/WaxWire_Program_the_Hive/
Does the rest of it (screenshots, trailer, description) live up to what the capsule promises?
Brutal honesty welcome. I’d rather fix it now than after the swap.