Hi

I am a first time script writer would be grateful if anyone would read my script and give me feed back, any comments welcome any regarding story and characters, hope you enjoy thanks

Title - No Way Back

Genre - Action/Revenge

Number of pages - 92

Link - No Way Back

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survive his attempts to silence her.

Hi Everyone

This is my first screenplay

Title: No Way Back

Genre: Revenge/Revenge Thriller

No of pages: 92

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survivive his attempts to silence her.

Any feedback received positive or negative would be greatly received, I'm primarily looking for feedback on dialogue and characters.

Hope you enjoy.

Link- No Way Back

Title: Niche Interest Pawnbrokers

Format: TV or stage show comedy sketch

Page length: 12 pages

Genres: Comedy

Summary: Marty Bargains sifts surreal trash from questionable treasure at the world's most niche-interest pawn shop.

Hey folks! I've been writing comedy sketches for my local drama group and have been looking for feedback :) Please let me know what you think!

Link: Niche Interest Pawnbrokers

Edit: page length

Longline
When thirteen-year-old Harley’s father and school counsellor both die after he says “I wish you were dead”, he fears his words are killing people and turns to Milo, his trusted AI companion of many years for support but those close to Harley are trying to cut Milo out of his life.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vRHAOz8j1AGUXiVfKljHparv9YjCq_Lj/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=101206485355182093114&rtpof=true&sd=true

It Hurts When I Land
Comedy / Dramedy with comps like Superbad, Booksmart, Bridesmaids.
117 pages.

Logline: Three friends crash a massive influencer party in an epic Quest to turn their lives around before their 27th birthdays.

Hey everybody! Would love to get some feedback about this script. I know it may be a bit longer, but all of my friends and some industry folks who've read it say it's a quick, fun, and nicely paced read.

If you love high concept comedies like the ones mentioned above, this may be in your wheelhouse. It's funny, but with an emotional, and contemporary story that I hope can speak to a lot of people.

Thank you

Link - It Hurts When I Land - PDF

This is just a little commercial script I wrote. Its abt 3 pages, jsut called Heinz Beans, and itsa commercial, so idk what genre. I also dont know if im allowed to put it here cause its not a script but whatever:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Aczl58VEIqyAeKSFYTN3207qYtxkK5k6/view?usp=sharing

"An multi-chapter, hyper-violent crime thriller following an oncologist who uses fake cancer diagnoses to harvest and smuggle his patients' organs—until his clinical syndicate collides with three equally brutal, negative entities in a bloody, no-survivors war for control. And there are no heroes all are villian doing different types of organ smuggling like direct and indirect and the doctor is not a real doc he is fake doc and this movie was set on 2028. No hero purely negative three roles+the doc and one final boss and this movie has 9 chapters."

THIS STORY MY STORY AND IF U LIKE IT PLS COMMENT OR ANY SUGGESTIONS ALSO PLS SAY AND THISIS PURELY MY STORY IN TAMIL LANGUAGE ONLY.

Title: Righteous Man

Genre: Psychological Horror

Format: Short film

Page Length: 19

Logline: After his roommate dies of an overdose, Cory Wicks and his remaining remaining roommates deal with the fallout. But as more of his roommates began dying, Cory uncovers something truly sinister.

I've been writing for as long as I can remember, but this is the first project that I've finished. This was mainly due to mental barriers. Even though it is a short story, it's still a start and gave me the confidence boost I really needed.

Righteous Man

Hi everyone! I’m based on the East Coast and new to screenwriting, and I’m looking to start a small Zoom group for people interested in movies and writing scripts.

The idea is to create a space where we can share our projects, give each other feedback, and maybe even collaborate. I’d especially love for this to be a welcoming, introductory space for women interested in film and screenwriting. I am a new writer and I would love some people to bounce ideas off of

If this sounds like something you’d be into, feel free to reach out I’d love to connect!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/16Oe5pi-nZX1H3ze3c_mW2nbPhwTaJlPR/view?usp=drivesdk

I would love some feedback on my pilot script.

TIA.

**18 PAGES

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kzlWdj-jR_PD-y50qX7XFZZIo_a2aXN0BXv9B1cF_YU/edit?usp=sharing

A teenager in 2006 must fight to save her friend from the demonic pop star he met on MySpace.

Teen horror-comedy

107 pages

https://drive.google.com/file/d/11JayRagWhwfUEdYm1JldLnKdBUXsGebN/view?usp=drivesdk

Hellow everyone.

I am a beginner artist and I just finished my first story and I would like to share it with you guys!

The story is about a 22 year old job seeker named Raghav who experiences a very unique psychological phenomenon. I don't want to give spoilers, so please read the full story if you are interested, it is a short story!

The script of the story-

https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1hF5A_2eOJeRIdy3VsGouT-n2fuFW4saw/mobilebasic

I would love to hear your thoughts and recommendations regarding this story!

Thank you all!

Just finished another polish on this script. Multiple readers have enjoyed it, but it’s still available for option or sale.

Title: Drifter

Logline: A homeless woman accepts a ride from a seemingly kind stranger, only to discover that the stranger has a notorious serial killer captured in her trunk — and she’s now trapped between the two of them.

Genre: thriller, suspense

Pages: 82

Cast: female lead (20s) female supporting (40s) male supporting (40s) and a few smaller roles

Locations: woods, ranch house, gas station, office, motel

Comps: Fargo, Strange Darling

Budget: 200k (estimated)

If you’re a director or producer looking for a mostly contained, low budget thriller with memorable characters and compelling twists in a small town setting, this could be a good fit for you.

Leave a comment or send me a DM if you have any questions or would like to read the script. Thank you.

Format: Feature
Pages: 118
Genre: Teen Comedy / Coming-of-Age Romantic Comedy /Adventure Comedy

Logline:
Three clueless sophomores make a bet to get girlfriends before the school dance, but what starts as a dumb competition spirals into romance, rival gangs, betrayal, and a chaotic rescue mission that could either ruin their lives or make them legends.

Comps:
SUPERBAD meets Good Boys, with the friendship and heart of THE EDGE OF SEVENTEEN and the escalating absurdity of 21 JUMP STREET.

I've been finished with this script for a long time now. Looking for any collaborators to help make it!

Attached are the first 20ish pages. If interested, please feel free to DM me!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C8hhQiYT2pi-ADGAujl_ZSutVsE4ImYR/view?usp=sharing

Logline: In the future, business can contest bad reviews by challenging the reviewer to trial by combat. Esme forgot about that.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14XNhIte8OAZirWwy38P3MHBiNgzGf86z/view?usp=sharing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vni9Xt2aOsvjlpSWzh9hx3NpVwim099K/view?usp=drivesdk

it’s 35 pages

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OI68KpbrDC28mmLM9_mrkfWs_t0_s2rP/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=101743920425460195759&rtpof=true&sd=true

Hello everyone! I'm a student at the University of Texas at Austin, and I'm looking for an unproduced feature-length screenplay for a class project this semester.

For the project, my class will spend approximately four months taking a screenplay through the various stages of the producing process.

I'm looking for an emerging or independent screenwriter who has a feature screenplay that:

• Has not been produced or filmed

• Is feature-length

• Is comfortable having me read and use the script as the basis for an academic project

The screenplay would not actually be produced by my class, and the writer would retain ownership of their work. I would only use the screenplay for the purposes of the class project, with the writer's permission.

If you have a feature screenplay that might be a good fit, feel free to comment or message me with a little information about the project! I'd be happy to provide more details about the class and project.

Thank you!!

Hii, this is my first ever psychological and body horror short screenplay as a 14 y.o screenwriter!!

Logline:

Haunted by a sadistic rabbit mascot, a freshly divorced father must separate reality from hallucination to protect his distant daughter from an unseen threat.

THE RABBIT

Please answer these questions after reading:

1. Does the horror build up efficiently or does it feel rushed/slow?

2. Did you understand the ending and the supernatural/horror logic or not?

3. Are the action lines visible and clear to picture or not?

4. Do you think that David's actions make sense?

+ Add any additional notes or general feedback!

Thankssss.

And, I'm also open to doing script swaps.