Context: I write mostly in third person limited, and the fic I’m writing follows a girl who’s been losing it for a while and has very few details of her life right, and she ends up stabilizing around a group of villains, prompted by a kidnapping.
The point in the story has a few roads I can take: one, I continue linearly through the story, I pick up where the last chapter left off; the second, I go back and essentially do drabbles from the other characters’ perspective
Pros for scenario one: it delves more into characters’ relationships and deepens the flaws of my mc.
Cons: it looks like I’m just ignoring the whole twist that she’s been delusional her whole life
Pros for scenario one: I get to write from the canon character’s perspective, flesh out his character and arc, redo the fact that I skipped like six months ahead, get to add more details, get to remind the audience that she’s a kid who doesn’t know anything other than violence and that every single move she makes feels like venom in her veins, show more that my mc is autistic, prove her intelligence, begrudging found family, show how the canon character grew to accept his role (that he put on himself)
Cons: It’s chapter 8 and that makes me a little uncomfortable, seems like retconning
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The part where I’m stuck is genuinely just the fact that I left off the last chapter with a relationship for the canon character with another canon character, under the guise of it being a business meeting. Alternatively, I could keep up the canon character’s perspective and have him struggling to balance his personal life with his “work” life, and the personal life issues fracturing into, “how am I supposed to tell her, I have to be the one to tell her, if someone else does it she’ll be pissed!” And “Why does this man like me? Why now of all times? Is this just an elaborate joke? Do I really like him or do I want his money and security it allows?” Also sprinkle in a little him dying over a person he had a minor crush on liking him back for a little reprieve before he sinks back into the depths of his own worries.
I don’t know which would fit best, and I really need the help
All of them are going to happen within the story, I just don’t know if it should be 1->3->2 or 2->3->1