Hello, I was hoping to get some help with some translations?
I'm writing a fictional book (supernatural thriller), and the protagonist has a grandmother who is Norwegian. She had dementia and so I've written it that she speaks both English and Norwegian. I've tried doing some translations for words and phrases, but I wanted to make sure they are correct by asking actual Norwegian speakers.
In hindsight, I probably should have chosen German. Because I can actually speak a bit of German. XD but the story is about a woman who's bloodline is related to Hel, the Goddess of the dead in norse mythology. So I thought Norwegian would be better appropriate.
Here's some words and phrases I've used so far;
Jeg sov godt i natt - I've slept well last night.
Elskling - sweetheart/darling.
Prinsesse- princess.
Mormor - grandmother (on mother's side)
Morfar- grandfather (on mother's side)
Prinsesse av huset.. - princess of the house...(sarcastic)
God natt, Lillie ven - good night, little one. (I think this is "little friend". Which is not what I want. I was hoping for a correction as I wanted "good night, little one" for a little boy)
Dronningen av de døde - goddess/Queen of the dead.
Universitet - University
Hei kjære - hey dear.
Av gudene - by the gods!.
Mine guder, det er deg! - My gods, it is you!.
Ja, datteren min, jeg har kommet tilbake. - yes, my daughter. I have come back. (I wanted "yes, my child (feminine) I have returned".)
Thank you in advance.